LOVED IT! KEEP ON WRITING! YOU HAVE A TALENT!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked this story. I have quite a few more up, several about Albus if you are interested. Thank you for reading this one and leaving such a nice compliment! ~Gina :)
i really like your story, especially your charecterization of scorpius and Jacinta. For some reason i really connected with jacinta, so kudos to you for that!
it was really good
cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up soon, promise!--Nadia ^_^
Oh my gosh! Albus is the School Champion! I never saw that one coming! :)
Anyway, great story, please keep writing!
I can't wait to see what the first task will be, hopefully it also involves a dragon.
Author's Response: Haha :). I'm glad you liked it! And the first task..... ;) Well, it doesn't involve a dragon, but it IS something cool :P --Nadia
Its been so long since the last chapter I had to reread the whole story! Not complaining though, its absolutely amazing.
Author's Response: Sorry for the wait, dear :), and thanks again!! :D
I absolutely loved your story so far!
Out of all the stories on the website, you seem to be keeping with Jo's style the best, which makes me really excited! Cant wait for the next chapter! Are you sure this is your first story?
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the kind words. This was my first fan fiction that made it on the site, but I had written a few chapters of a different one previously. I'm really glad you like the story, but I'm afraid it's unofficially on hold right now. I just don't have enough time to keep up on it. Maybe this fall I'll get back to it! Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice review!
The tale of Harry Potter ended with the defeat of Lord Voldemort and the start of a new age of peace in the Ministry of Magic and the wizarding world.
The tale of his second son, Albus Potter, however, starts with this, and with his journey to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But in his first two years at the school for magic, Albus finds that his story will not unfurl as smoothly as one might expect in such a peaceful era. He finds himself confronted with a Hogwarts in turmoil, with a new Headmaster that seeks to chip away at the school's foundation as well as a student body that shuns their own kind. He finds himself opposing his family - such as his very talented, popular older brother James and his best friend and cousin Rose Weasley - and defending those who should be his enemies - such as Scorpius Malfoy, son of the ex-Death Eater Draco Malfoy, Emily Black, a self-centered and bratty girl with a big secret, and Katsurou Sen, the mysterious youngest son of a wealthy wizard family who is almost never seen. Albus even finds that his identity and desire to honor his father, once seeming so simple and sincere, could lead him onto a path he never imagined. Hogwarts has become a twisted Wonderland, where everything that had seemed good outside of the school shows itself to wicked, and everything that had seemed wicked...could possibly be good.
In the midst of all this, danger lurks in Albus Potter's future -- a danger that he will have no choice but to face differently than his famous father would have.
this is kind of a nitpick, but in SS, Olivander says that no two ollivander wands are exactly the same, "just as no two unicorns, dragons, or phoenixes are quite the same,"
other than that, your story is great, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback -- I took that statement to mean, however, that no wand is made of the exact same materials, and Albus's wand is not made from the exact same ebony tree and/or the exact same unicorn as Snape's wand was...just the same kind of ingredients. So it's not exactly the same wand as Snape's. XD Anyway, thanks again for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed! <3