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07/30/10

Reviews by Zack

Through Different Eyes by hogwartsbookworm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Formerly titled 'From Wading to Redemption.'

Ron leaves. Ron returns. Ron saves me from Malfoy Manor. Ron and I descend together into the Chamber of Secrets. And, finally, Ron Weasley comes to understand S.P.E.W.

You've heard Harry's side of those stories -- but don't you want to hear my side?

Hermione's Point of View. Based on events in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.

EDIT: This story, which was written almost a year ago, is undergoing a sort of Spring Cleaning. In other words, I am revising and resubmitting the chapters to take care of the things that now make me cringe. Rereads and new Reviews are welcome!

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 02/10/11 Title: Chapter 1: Lost in Nightmares

VERY good! I actually loved it...the way you described Hermione's thoughts exactly match her feelings in the book...and I just loved. I'll be reading on.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will be redoing the other four chapters soon, so be sure to come back and tell me what you think of the changes!

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 02/10/11 Title: Chapter 5: Redemption

I just finished, and it was fantastic! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Tragic Glory by Daughter of the Light

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: They were virtually apart for most of their lives, both in word and in deed. She was headstrong, he was arrogant. She was kind, and he was courageous. But when Lily and James needed each other the most, they were together.

Set during their seventh year at Hogwarts, as Voldemort steadily rose to power before the First War.

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 08/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unexpected Superiority

I loved it! It really felt like I was there, watching this all play out. And that cliffhanger at the end was very intense and dramatic! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I've already posted the next chapter and am currently waiting for it to be validated. Thank you for such a nice review :)

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 08/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Changes and Differences

I just read Chapter 2 and it is even better than Chapter 1. Your writing is great, and I love it. I have a question though: are you going to go into the Snape/Lily friendship at all? I was just wondering. But I love the story so far, and I can't wait until you add more!

Author's Response: Ahh, I see you've noticed my little Snape/Lily issues. Well, seeing as it has been over a year since the incident by the lake, Snape has grudgingly accepted that Lily hates him, and he is forced to hide his true feelings fir her. However, because this is a James/Lily story and James was a big part of the reason why Lily now hates Severus, I will definitely delve into the remorse and conflict she feels, at least a little bit. Sorry for giving you such a longwinded explanation, but thank you once again for the completely wonderful review:). I am almost done writing the next chapter.

My Brave Face by grangergirl35

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione has lived thirty-six years on this earth. The last twenty or so of them have been blissful and perfect, married to her best friend and lover. They have two beautiful children at Hogwarts. Ron's an Auror, and Hermione works in the new office at the Ministry, for the Mandatory Respect of Elf Rights Department. Then, one afternoon in February, she's called to St. Mungo's, where everything is ruined, and she's forced to remember the easier past.

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 05/07/11 Title: Chapter 5: I'm Happy (Both of Us Are)

He lives! HE LIVES!!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 04/26/11 Title: Chapter 2: What the Knight Bus Brought; What the Stork Was Going to Bring

What a great chapter...I'll be reading on! Please, keep writing. You write Hermione wonderfully.

Author's Response: You forgot to guess! :D but i like your review! I'll definently keep writing. . . and that thing about Hermione is a huge compliment, seeing as how she's my face character and I am thoroughly convinced that the only person in the planet suitably qualified to write her is Jo. :D -Joy

Photographs by armagod679

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione Granger has never considered herself a sentimental person. But a box of photographs can make anyone stop and think.

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 04/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: Sentimental

This was REALLY great! I really loved it, mostly because you portrayed Hermione and Ron perfectly! Good job, and keep writing! You have a gift.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

The Mark of the Death Eater by Thestral Wings

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Draco Malfoy was born a pureblood. He was raised in a prestigious wizarding family wholly devoted to Lord Voldemort, and he was taught to revere the Dark Lord alone. At 16, Draco offers himself to the service of the Dark Lord. This is the story of the young Death Eater.

Reviewer: Zack Signed
Date: 05/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Covenant

You write so powerfully. Well done!! Please, add more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Zack, for my first review! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, there is more Draco to come. I've written a handful of chapters. Unfortunately, not one of them is chapter two. It's in progress, however. Keep an eye out for it. And thanks for taking the time to share your feedback!