HIIII!!!!
My Name - Sophie
My age - 13
My birthday - 26th September 1992
Looks - long brown hair (now with blonde streaks!!), blue-green eyes
Fav books - Soooooo many!! Love soooo many lol some Im addicted to atm would be the secret diary series :P:P Romance AND mystery AND drama!! plus theyre teenagers!! yay!!
I am totally in lust with - Ooooh wouldn't you all like to know :P:P
Fav colour - purple
I Live - Australia
Fav HP Book - Half Blood Prince
Least Favorite HP Book- Order of the Pheonix... admit it, we were all thinking it...It sucked to the bone. Like Harry needed to take a chill pill, Ron didnt do anything to deserve the Head Boy badge, and he shouldn't have started playing Quidditch if he had stage fright... Cho and Harry win the worst couple of the year award, I mean could they have BEEN any frostier with each other? Luna scared me... Sirius died weirdly.
Favourite FF Ships -
Lily and James (but only when the info is right, I am not very tolerant of stories that include Voldemort hunting them down because of the profecy when they are only 17)
James Potter is my absolute favourite character, and I refuse to hear anything bad about him. So there, Snape.
I luv harry potter, thats all there is 2 it!! Please Read my first fan fic; Forever Yours, about Lily and James!! Also, when you get bored with that ( by the way.... PLEASE DONT!!!) I strongly advse youto look in my favourite stories section,and read A Very Harry Christmas : One of my All time favourite stories!!
By the way, MY STORY IS OPEN TO PUBLIC!!!!
I've never felt happier!!!
I think you died...or got ubducted. did you? *snifff* coz u look like youve gone forever.
I think you died...or got ubducted. did you? *snifff* coz u look like youve gone forever.
Author's Response: i'm back && i didn't die--im posting the 2nd chapter over my thanksgiving break
I think this is a great story... I just don't see why this chapter is rated R... I'd suggest PG-13. Congrats
Really great story, just excellent, by the way, do you realise that the italics have gone psycho at the end? Just to let you know, the code to stop the italics is
10!!!
Author's Response: Whoa! Thanks! I totally didn't notice about the italics! Oopt. Gah, I guess i'll go fixthat now! hehe, thanks for reviewing!! ^_^
WHY DID YOU STOP UPDATING!!?? I almost got as attatched to Raven as I did to Addison in Potter's Charm, and that story was 50 chapters long!!! If you don't update soon, I'll- Um, I'll, TAKE YOU OFF MY FAVOURITES LIST!!! And just to tell you, this was the first ever story on my favourites list!! Puh leez update!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm really really really sorry I haven't updated in practically forever!! It was just like my muse was GONE :( But it's back!! ... or at least I'm pretty sure it's back!! So I'm going to try to get a chapter up by the end of the month, in time for halloween hopefully!! If I can't get one up before then... then I totally deserve to be de-favouritized *hangs head in shame* Thanks for hasseling me to get a move on though ^_^
HOW DARE YOU TAKE SO LONG!! any way, fantsatic chapter! I don't think that you know this, but this is the first story I ever read on this site, and I love it!! Oh goody, I am the first reviewer! anyway, like, I wouldn't be on this site still if it weren't for all the great stories that I have read, and you started it all. You shopuld be proud. lol, please update soon! (translation - within a year) lol, cya!
Author's Response: Woohoo! I do feel proud! Thanks so much for sticking with me even though I take so long to post lol... but not for the next chapter, I swear!! It shouldn't take me more than half the year!! ;) ... don't attack me... I'm kidding! Thanks for reviewing!
This is definitely one of my favourite stories so far, and thats including outside of fan fiction (exept harry potter 1, 2, 3, 4, and 6) I really love the innocent ways you manage to get Lily and James together, so unlike most stories where the writer makes the romance either almost not there, or way off the charts!! Really good!!! keep adding!!
The same feedback as after the first chapter (funny that, considering that review was supposed to be for this chapter, and the whole story so far) Really good writing, keep updating, I dont want to keep waiting for more updates. Dont thinkim impatient or anything (even though i am) its just this is such a good story i want to see what happens next!!
cool story so far, only try to avoid americanisms, like y'all and hell yeah, and stuff like that, because remember, this is in britain around 24 or so years ago, so they would have talked a little differently.
OMG poor you, I absolutely cannot believe that noone has reviewed this story!!! and to think I feel hurt if I get no reviews for a few days!! Excellent start, though it looks as if you aren't going to continue, i think you should though! I spy with my lil eye 1 mistake though : Alice wouldn't be Alice Longbottom until she was married to Frank, but as she doesn't seem to be married yet (shes a little young) maybe you should give her a different surname. Update!!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes.
..::~!~::.."Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
hehe soz to sound nitpikish but in your summary he lifted her head. That is all. :)
I absolutely love this tory so far!! I've been trying to submit a reveiw for two weeks now, but it logged me out every time!! keep updating, You are a really good writer!! 10
yes, sorry, shame on me, I only realised that after submitting that review. Excellent story though.
This. Is. The. Best. Story. In. The. Entire. World. Hope that I made my point clear. Please update, i hate you for leaving it at such a cliffhanger AAARRRRGGGHHH!!! (By the way, is there a mark higher than ten?.....Didn't think so, ten it is. ~Sophie~
sorry to nag, I shant do so again, but I thought Id rather....HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!! Please...
Author's Response: I do hope you realize that the queues are closed and I am ripping out my hair...
Id just like to say that contrair to midnight me I think this was an excellent chapter, whether by an eleven year old or a 40 year old, I was addicted not long after I started reading it.
This is a really good story, I luv that Lily part, only one thing I dont get, why did she start to scream when she saw the flower was a Lily?? its probably something really obvious, but im just dumb, so please clue me in!!! GREAT STORY!!! I love all the drama youve put into it!!!
Ok, you say test, what, does that mean that you are in the middle of a test or sumthing? okey dokey, fine by me I guess. still...waaahh
Whoa, that was excellent writing, but really heavy.... It sort of freaked me out a bit, but it was great!!
This is a really funny and good story, the only thing id like to ask is why does professor flitwicks name change to professor salsa when he reads out that lily and remus have to work together?
Author's Response: lol yeah sry bout that, it started as professor salso but i guess i forgot to change that part