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Amphibious Lizards by Apollonious

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.

Romance will bloom.

Rivalries will blossom.

The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.

The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.

These are the Amphibious Lizards.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/23/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Quidditch, Parties and Voldemort

a. I thought that James was the seeker. (check hp 1)
b. love it

Author's Response: In the film it says he's the seeker, but in a Scholastic interview JKR said that he was chaser. Since JKR's word generally takes precedence, I decided to cast him as the chaser. Thank you so much for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it!

Albus Potter and the Triwizard Tournament by majestic_ginny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Nineteen years had passed since the battle at Hogwarts, and all had been well. Harry’s children had started attending Hogwarts. It is Albus Potter’s first year, and with it starts a new adventure: the Triwizard Tournament is about to start, and Albus finds himself more involved in it than he would have liked.

Join Albus and his gang, which includes his cousin Rose Weasley, a Death Eater's son by the name of Scorpius Malfoy, and Muggle-born Andrew Strathmore, as they find themselves in the midst of danger as soon as their first year starts at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. EDIT: This story is abandoned, and is in the process of being rewritten with an older Albus. I realized that having a first year in the TWT wasn't the best idea :/
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/27/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

I like it. I think that this has some great potential, and up to now, I do not have any complaints. Keep it up!

Author's Response: thanks a lot! I'm really glad you liked it :).

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/30/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Trains, Stars and Goblets

I love how you added the Salem witches. We learned about the witch trials a while ago in History, and I think that it is cool how you brought that in. I forgot to mention this earlier, but I really don't like what you did with Neville. He doesn't seem like the time to harden. Other than that. . . keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :). I'm glad you liked it! And I'll remember what you said about Neville, I'll try to make him more Neville-ish in future :P. Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it:) --Nadia

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/30/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Impacts and Consequences

Who could be the villian this time? The story I'm trying to get validated is sort of like this. . . in a sense. All seem well, then suddenly trouble comes back again! I still love it!

Author's Response: Haha, the villain's a secret! ;) You'll get to know in due time :) And good luck with your story! I'm looking forward to reading it. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the story! :D --Nadia

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 11/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

I'm giving up on my story. I tried to get it validated 5 times, no luck. My friends and I made it into a play, so, it's all good.

Author's Response: Aww, come on, don't give up hope! :) I really wanna read your story! Do you have a beta? You can go to the Beta forums (look at the menu bar on the left) and hire a beta. They'll look over your stories and help you fix them. I'm sure it'll be validated :)

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Okay. I'm trying it. Thanks!

Author's Response: ^_^ You're welcome! And don't forget to tell me when you're fic's validated, ok? :)

The Dark Phoenix by L A Moody

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Even in a time of peace, evil never sleeps…

In the post Deathly Hallows world Harry Potter is a broken man, rejecting the public’s view of him as a hero and seeing himself as a destroyer of lives. Although married to Ginny and embraced by the boisterous Weasley clan, he holds himself apart from true happiness. The only solace he finds is among the other shell-shocked victims of the war: George Weasley and Andromeda Tonks. But young Teddy Lupin is determined to unearth the joy his godfather once had for life and in so doing adds to the alternate dimension where the cost of Voldemort’s defeat was not so high.

In the alternate reality, it has been seven years since Voldemort’s defeat. Reclaiming his own destiny, Harry has built a new life for himself from the ruins of the Potter estate. Although he did not hesitate to claim Ginny as his own, it has been an unusually long engagement period as neither of them has been a hurry to take that next irrevocable step. For Harry, these extra years have allowed him to recapture some of the carefree days of youth as he established his career in the Auror Department. Determined not to follow in her mother’s footsteps, Ginny has been making the most of the intervening years to cement her career with the WWN. The Lupin clan has been steadily expanding with the eldest, Teddy, immediately establishing himself as a Metamorphmagus, sporting bright turquoise hair at birth. In contrast, his younger sister inherited the delicate beauty of the Black family. As her parents await the signs that will identify her as a witch, one has to wonder whether she has any unique powers of her own.

Although this story starts on a dark and disturbing note, it is ultimately a tale of hope, healing and survival. It serves as an epilogue to both, Cruel Moon for the Misbegotten and Harry Potter and the Hero’s Lament; and consequently, contains all manner of spoilers for the canon series as well as the alternate universe my prior tales have established. Reading those two previous stories is recommended. Contains original characters who were established in prior narratives.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: One: Prologue

wow . . . that is all i can say. I love it, it shows the not everything is perfect, like so many books.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the starting point. Needless to say, I found the ending to DH to be very bleak. Sure, the epilogue paints a rosier picture, but that is a whole lot of years later. So with all that open landscape of unanswered questions, I found it intriguing to explore how Harry would have reacted once the new post-Voldemort reality sank in. Hope I managed to inject a bit of realism. Do let me know what you think as you continue to read on.

The Vindication Of James Potter by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

"James Sirius Potter, it is the judgment of the Wizengamot that you have been found guilty. You knowingly, in possession of sound mind and body, used the Cruciatus Curse and the Killing Curse in the intentional torture and murder of one Gregory Goyle the Third."

James Potter was going to Azkaban for the rest of his natural life, and his whole family was in shambles. His wife and child have fled the country, his sister was missing, and his parents were a wreck. However, James knew that he had larger problems: his guilt was coming more and more in question.

Though he knew that James was withholding information about the circumstances of the murder of which he had been found guilty, Harry had secrets of his own; however, even he could not handle this torrent of trouble alone. Can Harry trust his darkest confidences to anyone? Even family? 

How will the Potter clan stop the downward spiral into pain and disaster, and can they recover what they've lost?


This fic was nominated for a 2010 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Next-Generation Story.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I love it, I think that you have a great idea with this, and I can not wait to see where it is going.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I was surprised when my baby plot bunny became a monster sized story, but I really like how it turned out. Enjoy the rest of the story!


Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Now this will become very interesting. Any hints on why James killed Goyle III?

Author's Response:

The whys and so forth of Goyle's death will be in Chapter 9.  Beware, it's pretty intense. Enjoy the story!


Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/13/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I knew that Lily would not be pregnant purpusely, but that was intense. I can see why it is Professors.

Author's Response: And now you also know why James would willingly go to prison for the rest of his life for something he didn't do. It's awful to contemplate, but he's a good man.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/13/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I love it! And you said this was your first fic?

Author's Response:

Yes, this was my first fic. I'm up to 24 now, but this one was my very first plot bunny and my very first brain child. I'm glad you like it so much. Stay tuned, though...the story has only begun. :D


Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/13/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Ooooooooooooooo. . .

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

I can not say anything about this story but wow. I can see how it won the competition.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think my favourite part about it is that each event uncovers a new secret. Harry has spent his life collecting these secrets and building somewhat of a house of cards, but that all came crashing down. Ultimately, if you keep things from the people you care about, this is what happens.

Thanks for reading, and I hope you read the Epilogue as well. :D


The Gryffindor Gang by U-No-Poo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Five students - Albus Potter, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Claudia Kelaney and Adam Finnigan. Five different stories. One house - Gryffindor.

Join The Gryffindor Gang, five unlikely best friends, as they enter Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry as first year students. Throughout the year, they must overcome their own personal battles. Albus just doesn't seem to get out of his father's spotlight - will people treat him like himself, or as Harry Potter's son? Scorpius is dealing with his family too - being a Malfoy in Gryffindor isn't exactly peachy for him. Claudia's started slowly adjusting to the wizarding world, but will her sneaky, horrible roommate cause Rose and Claudia big trouble? And Adam's just not having the perfect start to Hogwarts that he'd have liked.

These are all trying problems when you're eleven years old. But their real test happens when danger is thrown into all five of their lives, threatening them all. Will they be able to face their biggest battle yet, and live to tell the tale?

This is Part One in The Gryffindor Gang Trilogy.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 2: Potions and Prejudice

i heart cliffes

Author's Response: So do I! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 3: Everyone's Just Having A Bad Day

How did she come back to life?

Author's Response: She didn't, she never died, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/18/10 Title: Chapter 9: The Secrets of Hogwarts

Please finish the story

Author's Response: I will, I promise, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 06/08/11 Title: Chapter 3: Everyone's Just Having A Bad Day

Okay, I love this story. I also live your use of the illuminati (*cough angels and demons cough*). So, I guess I got the cliffie I wasn't supposed to. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Author's Response: Woops, my mistake! Haha, no, but I actually got the name 'Illuminati' from a totally different source; it's such a good name that I just wasn't the first to use it. Thanks for reviewing!

Black Dawn by voldiegirl

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It has been five years since the Second Wizarding War, and Scarlet Black is still trying to piece her life back together. Working as a columnist by day and helping select Death Eaters get their lives back on track, she lives each day with the hope of a better tomorrow.

Then, when an old enemy she helped put behind bars escape, Scarlet is tossed into a whirlwind of events that put her out of harm's way and into the reach of the one who still blames her for his brother's death-Charlie Weasley.

What happened during the past five years? Can two enemies work together for their own survival? Will there finally be a day when Scarlet can stop running?

She knows her past, but the future is another subject altogether...

*This is the sequel to "The Secret Life of Scarlet Black".
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

wow . . . that was deep

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 4: ...And I'll Huff...

I am liking where this is going.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 9: Being Professional