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Realizing It's Never Too Late by Gryffindor Girl

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After taking different paths a couple of years ago, Ron and Hermione find each other again, both of them wondering if their separation was a mistake. This applies especially to Hermione, who is leading an empty, unhappy life next to her fiance.

UPDATE (12/7/11): Newest chapter posted. Let us hope next one doesn't take me a year.
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 12/14/11 Title: Chapter 19: Catharsis

nevermind, i found my original account!!! but yeah still keep it up and stop playing with my emotions :)



Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 08/14/13 Title: Chapter 1: The Right Decision?

So i starting reading fanfiction again and was about to have a heart attack because i couldn't remember my password so i can find this reallyyyy good fic i read a while ago :). I hope you finish, you got some straggling fans left... And do you have an account by another name on fanfiction or something?



Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 11/14/10 Title: Chapter 18: Funeral

Im also new to the fanfic thing.. This is the second one i read, i found it yesterday and finished today and i LOVED the story! I loved the way you ended this chapter and you are an AMAZING writer. I'd like to see Ron in the next chapter, and how do we know when you write another one?

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm flattered! I think you can add the story to your favorites and the site will e-mail you when there is an update? I'm not sure :/



Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

"Oh, I can so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Uncle Charlie Realizes Everything

“Did you know I was raised by Muggles?” asked the man -- my father. He spoke conversationally, as if nothing dramatic was happening at all. “I was, and they tried to squash the magic out of me. Worse still, my cousin was the school bully and I was his favorite victim," he commented airily. "But you know the one thing I learned from Dudley Dursley?” I couldn’t see his face but I could almost hear the grin that spread across it.

He proceeded to knee Dick in the unmentionables.

hahahaha i love this so far



Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 03/08/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

That memory really made me tear up.. This is getting really good... This is an amazing story and it's keeping me from doing my work!! but its worth it :)



Battling Jitters by EmilyJayne

Rated: Professors •
Summary: They have battled evil, fate, destiny, time, even each other. Now Ron and Hermione take an emotional ride to battle something equally as treacherous….nerves.

The third installment in my “Battles” series continues here in a fluffier-than-is-normal-for-this-author tale depicting the Jitters Ron and Hermione experience when popping the big question and the events leading up to it.

If you have just found this story, be sure to read “Internal Battles” and “Battling Boundaries”. This story stands alone, but the other two will help complete the back-story. You should enjoy them too! Let me know what you think!

Disclaimer: JKR started it…I am just playing with the fabulous characters!

Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 12/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

Amazing! I found this a couple of days ago and decided to start from the begining and i'm glad I did. There were so many sweet moments throughout the saga and I love how it all came back to the quidditch pitch and the quilt she made him all from the dream she had in the first story. I see this was written a while ago but i'm hoping you will still finish the series! :)



Waiting by cjbaggins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a one-shot that takes place at The Burrow during the Hogwarts' Christmas break, while Ron, Hermione, and Harry are off searching for Horcruxes. Molly and Ginny have a little chat.
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting

Amazing one shot. i love your writing, after i read your story As Happily Ever After As They're Gonna Get i was hooked to fanfiction and had to make an account.
It's amazing how your writing feels like it belongs in the book.

For some reason, probably because she and her mother had just been talking about him, she felt very close to Harry this morning, as if he were somewhere quite nearby. She shook her head, realizing how silly she was being; he was probably hundreds, even thousands, of miles away.

This is when Harry, Ron and Hermione were headed to the Lovegoods house right? Great story and can't wait for others this good.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Nothing like starting the day with a positive review, especially when I just sat down to write some more. This certainly gives me a boost! I am thrilled that you think my writing belongs in the stories themselves. And you are exactly right - that moment is supposed to be when the trio is heading over to the Lovegoods. Of course, the timing doesn't fit perfectly, as the trio goes later in the day, but still ... Thank you for your review! cj



The Twinge by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Some say to follow your heart, others think it best to follow your head. And what does Ginny Weasley believe? A short history of Ginny Weasley and how she learned to follow the twinge, from her first kiss to the day when Harry almost died. *one-shot*
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 12/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really loved this. it was petty intense and i could almost feel hoe Ginny was feeling and i let out a sigh of relief when

Then Voldemort looked at her mother and a motionless Lestrange in horror. Then came a shout, “Protego!” and a shield sprang out to protect her mother from Voldemort.

Then he was back. It was his voice she had heard, and it was his familiar frame, messy black hair, and ever-endearing spectacles that faced Voldemort. “HARRY!” she yelled. He was moving, he was alive, he was here, he was alive, he was walking, talking, breathing, living — he was alive!

Ginny could not describe the feeling in her stomach. There was no need. It was happiness, blinding, surging, and unimaginable happiness. It did not matter what happened next. Harry was alive.

Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)



Our Little Secret by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary:

It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.

*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/27/11 Title: Chapter 8: Family

I was grinning like and idiot reading this chapter. I love the story so far and i love ron's reaction to Scorpius and the line "What I want to know is what are your intentions toward my daughter."

Author's Response: Thank you for grinning! In the books, Ron was so protective of Hermione, I couldn't see him not being even more protective of their daughter. He might be a teddy bear at heart, but he can roar like a Grizzly. :D



Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/27/11 Title: Chapter 16: Stories

I loved this chapter!! I was cracking up from that little "talks" they had with Rose

Mum drew in a breath and exhaled slowly. "Sweetheart, I remember what it was like to be a teenager."

Rose tried not to cringe. Oh, Merlin, please don't share. PLEASE do not share!

"The intensity of certain . . . feelings . . . ."

I do NOT want to hear this.

and

“You gave your word, and I know you don’t intend to break it. This is for my peace of mind, because I remember what it’s like to be young—”

“Thanks, Dad,” Rose cut in before he got warmed up. Mum’s “personal example” was disturbing enough. Any more parental sharing would give her nightmares.

Ahhhh I love this story and dont plan to stop reading until its done!

Author's Response: Parents "sharing" is one of those hilarious to read about, not so funny when it's YOUR parents, sort of thing, hehheh. I love that you're reading, so thank you!



Crouching Father, Hidden Terror by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

It's official. Malfoy has murdered sleep.

*A Ron pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

Ron blinked away whatever dust specks made moisture prickle the corners of his eyes. It was hard to admit the fear that kept him awake, even to the person he loved most. Swallowing to ease the tightness in his throat, he whispered, "What if he breaks her heart?"

Hermione brushed her mouth over his. "We'll help her put the pieces back together." She kissed him gently. "There's no protecting a child from that kind of hurt, but I love you for wanting to try. You're a wonderful father."

I loved this part so much. It was so sweet. He is a great father it must be hard for him so have his old enemy's son under his roof and I think its very sweet that he tells Hermione the real reason he gives Scorpius a hard time.
Loved the one-shot can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you for loving Ron's soft side! He's still got the Weasley temper, but Ron's matured, and after his initial reaction he calms down and sees reason, which makes him a great dad in my opinion, too! :)



Fascinating Facts About Scorpius Malfoy by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

 

Rose used a blank journal to list practical information about the boy she intended to bring home for holiday and pass off as her boyfriend: Scorpius’ favourite colour, his favourite food. As their pretend relationship became real, the entries became longer and more intimate. And then one day—to her horror—she misplaced the journal.

 


 


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Lessons Learned

I. Loved. This. :)
I read Our Little Secret then went back to read all the "missing moments" from the story and i loved all of them! Im about to start on the sequel and i hope you finish it!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reading all the one shots as well as the main story! Chapter 11 of OLS: Lost just posted last night, and I promise I will finish the story. I appreciate readers too much ever to leave a story incomplete (even if there's a wait between updates). :)



How Much a Heart Can Hold by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The seven men who loved Hermione Granger.
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 12/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Do you remember . . . when Rosie asked me to marry her?"

"You said you gave your heart a way a long time ago, but you'd take care of hers until she was ready to give it away, too,"
So sweet :) your an amazing writer, I loved Ron's Hugo's and Harry's

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that--and enjoyed the whole story :) Thanks for the review!



The Gates of Happiness by MagEd

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The seven men who loved Ginny Weasley.
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 12/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The Harry part was so cute! How he was going on about how he loved her.. The entire thing was amazing though. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Harry's part was probably one of my favorites in this story :)



Our Little Secret: Lost by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

 

Scorpius had never looked forward to anything the way he looked forward to leaving Hogwarts with Rose. He planned a holiday with no friends, no family, and nothing to do but be together—until a tampered Portkey changed their destination.

 

 


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 04/05/11 Title: Chapter 13: Conversations

Good chapter. I'm glad about the update and can't wait for Rose and her family in the next chapter.

Hope the reason you had surgery wasn't too serious!!

Author's Response: There's a saying that minor surgery is surgery other people have, heh, but mine really was minor, in hospital one morning and out the next. Thank you for looking forward to reading about Rose and the Weasleys. I've started writing!



The End of Fear by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: 2010 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Alternate Universe

Sometimes, late at night, when she lies safely in her dormitory bed, she allows herself to think not of Dean, or her friends, or her brothers, or her schoolwork, or the war that's slowly destroying the wizarding world. Instead she thinks of Harry and if things could have been different.

In five different worlds that could have been but weren't, there are five different ways Harry and Ginny could be Harry and Ginny. Circumstances change, but they always find each other in the end. *one-shot*
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow i loved all of these
I've read this several times and i noticed i never left a review
The first is very mysterious and i would love to figure out wherer Draco and Harry go off to.
The second is very cute. I loved how Harry's parents are alive and seems so happy because he deserves that after all he went through in the books!!
The third is my absoulte favorite!! It's very dark and l love how he went to see Ginny while under the Imperius Curse from Bellatrix, it really shows how much he loves her.
I loved the fourth one but the ending is so sad, how Ginny's letter led to Harry's death even though she was trying to help :(
The last is very cute and its gives hope for the future that Harry may get better.

"No," she whispers, stroking his hair. "No, I won't. I'm here, Harry. Always. It's me and you, Harry, whether we like it or not. No matter what. It's me and you, Harry," she repeats. "Always."

He clutches her, and she knows she'll keep waiting for him to get better, even if he never does.

"Always," she promises. "Always."

That part is so sweet.
I love this one-shot because it shows no matter what they are meant to be :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked all the scenes, even though many of them end sadly and leave a lot to the imagination. The ending of the final part still remains one of my favourite parts, because I definitely think of it as hopeful for the future--I'm glad you see it the same way! Thanks again :)



Taking Direction by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What if the characters in the Harry Potter films were portrayed—not by actors—but by the book versions of themselves, as created by Rowling? How might things unfold on that set? What would the characters think of the changes made from the stories they’d already lived out… to the ones written for the script?

This fic is a series of one-shots, posted as chapters, each from the perspective of a different character who is dealing with the changes occurring between the book and the script.

 

Holy Movie Canon, Batman! This fic won the 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Chaptered Humor Story. Thanks so, so much!

 


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/22/11 Title: Chapter 3: Saving It for Seven

Too funny!! i came across this a while ago nd i kept checking back to see if you updated yet. I love they react to the dumb little things the director added to the movie.

“I know, but it isn’t my fault!” He took his frustration out on his Quidditch helmet, which he viciously unsnapped, removed, and tossed onto the floor. “Why the bloody hell am I wearing this thing to breakfast?”

I was cracking up and this part,shoelace and draco's suit.
Loved this and hope you update it soon!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you are enjoying it. My beta Gina actually suggested that helmet bit b/c I had included him taking it off, and she wondered why on earth he had it on then. Now it's my favorite part of this chapter. Thanks for checking back, and for the lovely review! More eventually!



Tales of the Battle by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:
Over fifty people died at the Battle of Hogwarts. There are dozens of stories of loss, betrayal, heroism and sacrifice. These are some of those stories.

Nominated for: Best General (Chaptered) story – Quicksilver Quills 2011

Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/22/11 Title: Chapter 20: Son of the Air

You are an amazing author. I love the perspective you wrote this in, it feels like i was really there. It was a different way to write this story and you made it work like all your other stories. Can't waitt for the next one!

Author's Response: I have always wanted to try a second person point of view. I think that it worked for this particular chapter, but I don’t think that it would work for everything. -N-



Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D


Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 01/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: Way Back Home

I loved this one! Especially the ending which was both sad and cute for me. Cant wait for the next chapter!



Letters from the Tent by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A distraught Hermione takes quill to parchment.
Reviewer: charmaine23 Signed
Date: 04/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Letters

Amazing!! I think I passed by this a couple of months ago and never got back to it, but i'm glad I did! I feel you had Hermione's feelings from Ron's departure and return spot on. It really felt like it could of been J.K.'s words herself !!

Waiting for the Epilouge :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am rather attached to this one, so I'm glad you felt like it worked and was believable for Hermione. I do want to get to the next bit of it... hopefully not too long. Thanks again!