I'm a young girl absorbed in a fantasy world, trapped in the real world and always trying to find a way to escape and I'm getting tired of staring at the same four walls...
Anyway, I love to write fanfiction while waiting for the next book in the series to come out. The fanfiction I wrote for the HBP actuall turned out to be correct on some points.
I'm completely obsessed with HP. I cried so much when Sirius died and even more when ___________ died(HBP Spoiler). I still can't believe he's gone. It screwed up a whole fanfic I was writing. I guess I could still write it, but its just not the same. My favorite HP book is probably PoA. Favorite characters are Sirius and Dumbledore.
Anyway, in real life I love watching Law & Order: SVU on tv, love listening to music, mostly rock, and I love to read and write. My favorite books include HP, LotR, Artemis Fowl, Pendragon, and The Lost Years of Merlin. I hope someday to be a published author. If I could get payed to read a book, I'd do it in a heart beat.
This story is very well written and especially believable. Most of the characters I believe you portrayed well. I love the way you showed a darker side to Harry's anger. However, I believe that you were a little off on the character of Dumbledore, making him a bit to untrusting. However, other than that, very good! Great job in making Snape married! Keep up the great work!
This story is absolutely wonderful. Though I never imagined the story would turn this bad, I can't help but believe it. Great story, extremely well written, and please keep posting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Awesome story, I'm loving it. I love how Harry explored Dark Magic and suffered for doing so. It has made him even more determined to kill Voldemort and you showed that extremely well. Great story, keep it up.
I'm really enjoying your story and in Chapter 4, when you revealed the relation between Harry and Snape, I totally believed it. The only really big problem I have is that I always thought Harry would set aside his hatred for Snape for a while to find and destroy all the Horcruxes. Other than that little nitche, I think the story's great! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hmmm...*shrugs* You have a point, but I, like Harry, am not sure what the other Horcruxes are (although I have a pretty good idea!) and I didn't want to write a story involving the Horcruxes, because I'm much more interested in what Snape is up to, generally. I'll leave the Horcrux-finding up to Harry and JKR.