I think you did a nice job. You captured some of the intensity of the battle and you were very descriptive. Here are just a few things that stuck out to me: [i] Voldemort bowed, shocked, recognizing for the first time ever that Harry was now his equal, or possibly even his superior. [/i] I think it is a bit unlikely that Voldemort would think of Harry as his equal. Maybe he could have bowed with an amused look on his face, like he was just mocking Harry. [i]Cho Chang lay next to a fallen Death Eater; as did Michael Corner, Seamus Finnegan, Dean Thomas, and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of was lying behind Neville, she had obviously died protecting Neville. Brave Neville, thankfully stood amongst them all, wand pointed at the now limp body of Bellatrix Lestrange. [/i] This sentence was a bit of a run-on and maybe instead of using the name 'Neville' you could add a pronoun. Here is what I mean. [i]and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of[b],[/B] was lying behind Neville[b].[/b] she had obviously died protecting [b]him[/b][/i] Okay, I am hoping these codes will work and I don't look like a really stupid person who puts random codes in the middle of the sentence. So, what I did was I added a comma after the phrase 'made fun of', I placed a period after 'lying behind Neville', and I added a 'him' and took out 'Neville' during the last part. [i] Ginny stared into the fire, unable to breathe, wondered if she would ever breathe again. Her chest was constricted with pain, her breathing harsh, when she felt it. She felt like she was being wrapped in the tightest hug of her life. [/i] I really liked this description. It captured Ginny's emotions very well. I hope this sort of helped, and all in all, I really liked your fic! Nice job and I look forward to reading some of your other works.

That was awesome! i added it to my favorites. There was so many ideas in it and it was just great! I loved it! I liked how it sort of left you hangging at the end. 10 stars!

Author's Response: Hanging on to the sequel! Thanks for there review. Glad you liked it. The prologue to "I'll always be with you" is up now, and I'm currently typing up chapter 1!

I loved this story! It is one of my favorites! If you and JKRowling worked together for another book, it would be the best one yet!! Oh, and did you ever say what curse Sirius put on Harry and what blessing Minerva put as the countercurse?

Amazing! So many ideas! Did you write this after book 6 came out, because some of the details sound the same as HBP. Awesome story though! I am going to go finish reading it!!!

that was so good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks. Thanks!

this chapter was really funny, well, at least i thought it was funny, i liked the split POVs. i think u should keep doing them... ok, back to reading!

really good! It seamed a little unrealistic at the beginning, but the last two chapters were really sweet!!!

Wow, this fic is great so far! This story was suggested to me by many people so I decided to check it out and I am very glad I did! I can't wait to keep reading

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. I'm looking forward to see what you think about the rest of it as well.

Wow! That was such a good chapter! It was so intense! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.