I am a big HP fan. I have read all the books many times!
I am Harry/Ginny all the way!
Ron/Hermione also.
I am 29 and have been married for over 5 years. I love reading, attending classes (no were near as much as Hermione) taking walks with my wife, and writing.
I have four writers who I am madly in love with their work on muggle net. Ok so I lied, I am going to post my story soon!
the_bartender713,
mrsgeorgeweasley,
ColorOfAngels
Czarina
These for authors or my personal fav's, I would most highly recommend mrsgeorgeweasley's Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived, and Czarina's Harry Potter and Reflection of Power
I hope my story Harry Potter and the Fight for Ginny will be doen by the end of summer of 06. Wish me luck.
If you want to ask me anythig feel free to contact me through IM or e-mail.
Thats it for me for now!
I guess I am going to the part that did not like this one. I think it could have been written better. I felt like it read like a list not a story. I would be interested in a rewrite that gave more narrative, richness of charter, and stronger emotional presence. I will say that it has potential as a good story.
I feel that the second chapter was the same as the first. I like were its going, but not how its geting there.
Author's Response: ok...well...i dont like it either...but ppl threathened me if i didnt update so i did...and its at harrypotterfanfiction under singergril everyone please go there!!!!!!!
ok you area review hog and this is my last one, I am finishing the story but not revewing untill the end.
Author's Response: True. I am a review hog. ;) Go ahead and review at the end, and I hope you enjoy it!
Ok the last five chapter were great. It's a good thing too because I was getting tired of the melodrama. Now I like drama but it was getting to be to much. You did a great job wraping it up. I will be reading your next story. Please I beg you LONGER CHAPTERS!
Author's Response: About the part where Tonks came back I began to get a solid thing going and keep up with it. In truth, I\'m thrilled if someone can get past the beginning and the middle because I am proud of the end. Now, the sequel is never quite long though I am working on expanding the chapters but they are never as short as some of these were.
that's not really a cliffhanger, but if you think so thats your right. It was a sold start though. Very short, and I am hoping you don't have Harry and Ginny to gather by the third chapter.
Author's Response: I guess it\'s not really a cliffhanger, it just kind of drops off. I know that you\'ve already read on, so I\'m gonna go ahead and address this in the first review. H/G are together early in the story, but I try to keep it backed off and slightly more casual than normally would be. It doesn\'t play out so well in the beginning and hopefully it did get better as I went on. I hope you\'ll let me know what you think.
Ok the last five chapter were great. It's a good thing too because I was getting tired of the melodrama. Now I like drama but it was getting to be to much. You did a great job wraping it up. I will be reading your next story. Please I beg you LONGER CHAPTERS
The only real complaint I have is your chapters are a bit short. I know the story is done, but you might want to go over it again and find small details you might think could help. Also now that you know where the story is going for sure you clould add a few not to easy to see hints, so later we find our selfs thinking how did I miss that. Oh, well on the chapter 3
Author's Response: Now to address this one as I know it\'s one of my biggest faults. It\'s short. ;) I do need to do a bit of chapter combining and I\'m gonna try and see if I can find a Beta to help me rework much of the earlier chapters. Since my sequel has been comleted I don\'t have to spend all my time writing and can focus on cleaning this one up a lot.
I know I said last review before the end but chapter 22 and 23 could have been one chapter!
Author's Response: *nods guiltily in agreement once more*
The shortness of the chapters is really taking away form the story, I might recomend combining some chapters. Your writing is solid, and so far is getting better with every chapter.
Author's Response: Pretty much ditto. ;) I\'m glad that you think it\'s getting better though.
Ok well you made it to the fourth chapter but since you not much over 4000 words at this point it's more like the second chapter. You rushed it and the game never got started, and the game is the most important part!
Author's Response: I start to play \"the game\" a bit more later with Ginny backing off and realizing that first, they\'re too young for a serious relationship, and that she\'s just not ready.
Ok that was a cliffie,
Author's Response: I went back to see which \"cliffie\" it was and I agree. That was probably the closest thing to a true cliffie that i actually put out.
I am going to tell you the same thing I tell every author who chooses Victor as the DADA, it is a bad idea! He is far to youn to have the post and he isn't even more talanted then may of his students, and then there is Harry.
Author's Response: I don\'t think I really took age much into account when I put that in. I wanted someone familiar without doing repeats and he seemed to lend himself to it, having been a Tri-Wizard Champion, along with the fact that I could add a little R/Hr jealousy.
very good chapter, and would not have a negitive thing to say but I thought you time on the soapbox was unwarented. As a man I don't have a problem with men crying but chastise me for times I may not cry and you think I should.
Author's Response: I suffer a lot from men with the chauvinistic idea that crying is a sign of weakness and it\'s probably not right of me to assume that all men have that problem. I\'m glad that you liked the chapter!
I think I know who is going to die. He is the one person whom I know had to die before the final confertation with Lord Moldy Shorts. I know it since the first book. I will be nice and leave his name blank.
Author's Response: Thanks. The person I am sure you are talking about I didn\'t think about dying until the wait from 5-6.
"When the loss makes you want to love more people and not push them away because you fear losing them, you will be a man."
great line!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. It\'s one of my favorites and I think I key thing that Harry needed to learn.
So I am sure most of the reviews are going to be about Percy, but mines not. I wanted to point out, now I could be wrong, but I don't think I am. Well if I am not mistaken didn't Slythrien beet Harry and Co already in your story?
Author's Response: Technically, though I didn\'t state it, the match was just cancelled. But yes, Slytherin beat them earlier in chapter. . .17 I believe. Somewhere around there.
Ok maybe you not so much with the Authers notes. that was not a Cliffhanger!!! and to be honest you spoilers, well I don't care. The chapter was short but the best so far!
Author's Response: You\'re right about my AN\'s and my cliffhangers that kind of. . .well, aren\'t. I\'m glad that you did like the chapter though.
thats not a chapter, that the first third of a chapter.
Author's Response: *nods in agreement*