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Reviewer: Cariel Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: None

I loved reading this fic on HarryPotterFanfiction.com and I can't wait to read it agan here. It's too bad you can't post all of your chapters at once ;)

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Reviewer: Cariel Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: None

I love the emotions you explore in this one-shot. I've always admired your characterisation of Ginny. You already knew that though ;)

Author's Response: Yes, of course I already knew that. lol

Not Afraid by KatAyanka

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Summary: Luna really want to kill whoever came up with the nickname 'Loony Luna' when along comes someone to cheer her up. “I’m glad my father’s in Azkaban. I realized that all these years the reason I was so cold… so cruel… was because I was a coward. I was afraid of him, and it disgusted me. So I took it out on others…” One shot ficlet.

Reviewer: Cariel Signed
Date: 12/13/04 Title: Chapter 1: Not Afraid

I really like the idea of Luna and Draco together, but in this fic there seems to be no motivation for either of them to fancy each other. Is Draco feinging it? Perhaps if you flesh out your scenes a bit it'd add more dramatic tension and explanations to Draco and Luna's actions.

Also, you can't watch someone 'subtly'....well, it just sounds odd. Elusviely or from a distance sounds better.

Author's Response: Hmm... Okay, noted, I'll try to remember that.