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03/14/11

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Harry Potter And The Slytherin's Stone by Half_BloodPrincess

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Who said that all heroes had to be brave?
Who said that all heroes had to be bold?
Who said that all heroes should be Gryffindors?
Who said that all heroes want to be heroes?

Who said that Harry Potter was a hero?

Harry Potter has never thought himself to be an ordinary boy - and he is proven right when in the middle of the night an old woman and a large man come to speak with him.
This is the story of Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived, Slytherin snake.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Strong Profanity, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Words: 55247 | Hits: 3333 | Published: 12/07/10 | Updated: 12/10/11
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Reviewer: beastmaster Signed
Date: 09/03/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gringotts

i noticed you put an element from the movie into this chapter with quirrels fear to shake harrys hand and his turbin... its a good inclusion cause it adds to harrys personallity and how he enjoyed torturing him

Author's Response: In all honestly, I didn't realise that the whole shaking hands issue was in the film - I just reread that chapter, and found it a little odd that everybody shook his hand, and then Quirrell didn't. And, let's face it, if you were an eleven year old boy, you'd probably enjoy pushing people's limits. I do, and I'm (clearly) much more mature than an eleven year old Harry!

Reviewer: beastmaster Signed
Date: 09/03/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Consequences

this story is awesome... i look foward to seeing how it ends... i hope you do all the books in the series with a "evil harry" twist

Author's Response: The eventual plan is to work through all of the books, with a possible eighth, but as of yet, I've not even written up to Christmas of Harry's first year, due to RL issues, and other commitments, however the next chapter should (hopefully) be posted within the next week or so. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Vengeance is Beautiful by amadora

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James and Harry are dead; killed by Voldemort. Lily was spared. Grief-stricken, but determined, she sets out to avenge their deaths. Everyone that played a part must suffer: their traitorous secret-keeper, the Dark Lord himselfâ€¦ But what Lily didnâ€™t count on was that her childhood friend - who insists on joining her on her quest - is also partly to blame.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: No | Words: 24781 | Hits: 2531 | Published: 10/30/11 | Updated: 01/16/12
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Reviewer: beastmaster Signed
Date: 01/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Night

good story... are all the horcruxes the same? (locket, ring, diary, cup, diadem) and what are you gonna do to replace the ones that were made because of harry ex. nagini and harry

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, all those are the same. Voldemort didn't replace Harry as he never meant to make Harry in the first place, and about Nagini... she's just the same, too. Up until the moment when Lily is not killed, everything has been the same. So with Nagini... yeah, I just kept that the same, even if it's not completely logical. Thanks for the review!