Hi! I'm a college student at the moment, so my writing time is limited. However, I do it as much as possible. Fanfiction has lately gotten in the way of my original fiction (eek!) but as long as I'm writing I'm happy!
I firmly believe that I should be in Ravenclaw, and the only downsides to Hogwarts are no choir, art or Latin.
My great success is "It's Witchcraft"- a D/Hr Ship. *Runner-up for Best Romance, non-cannon, in the Quicksilver Quills.
My work in progress is "Fatum Amoris...The Fate of Love" which is a sec generation sequel to "it's Witchcraft".
And a historical fic called "Out of the shadows" about the origins of the Malfoy family.
Plus, another Draco/Hermione fic that I just started called "Cry".
(and I probably shouldn't say this on here, but I have more stories on Fanfiction.net. My pen is Horcrux7 on there.)
I like the story, but as a fellow writer I feel the need to offer some advice. When writing a story, you should always be careful of verb tenses. At times in the story the tense would change within a sentence,then change back. Creatively, you're doing vey well, but you could use some minor editing when it come to the mechanic of the words.
I like the story, but as a fellow writer I feel the need to offer some advice. When writing a story, you should always be careful of verb tenses. At times in the story the tense would change within a sentence,then change back. Creatively, you're doing vey well, but you could use some minor editing when it come to the mechanic of the words.
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
Come on, you know we all want to read Part II. Please update soon!! Great, great fic. You really show the darkness that I think a relationship between Draco and Hermione would have. Truely amazing!
Continue, thats all i have to say.
*sighs* I really liked it. It made me smile. Sometimes ya just need that. Thanks.
Author's Response: I know what you mean; fluff is good for the soul.
Wow, I can't stop smiling! I really really loved this story. *sigh* keep writing!
I cried, but it was good.
I loved every chapter of this fic; it was my favourite for sure. I'm only sad that it's over now. I cried when I read the last chapter, but it was truely amazing. This whole story was! I really hope your planning another stor. You have such a wonderful style.
Oh...My...Gosh!!! I love this, you're doing an awesome job with this fic. I really hope Draco and Hermione can get together, but I can understand why you wouldn't want to write it that way. But I'll still have my fingers crossed! Fabulous!
You must, I repeat MUST continue this fic. It's really good. I admit, the whole loving her rapist thing is sort of taboo, but the way that you wrote it doesn't make it so awful. So keep writing! (But please don't make it never ending!!!!)
Wow! I keep forgetting to review for this fic but it's seriously my favorite! It's so original and complex and... well, it's just really really good! I don't even know what to say i just love! I want to go back and review for the rest of the chapters! I just have to sya that i hope they get to together! (even though i feel bad when people say stuff like that about my fic when i know it won't happen, but i did it anyway, so it's okay if they don't. I would probably be more logical.) Anyway awesome, awesom fic.
I always smile when I see there's another chapter of this! I laove it so much! Very good chapter as usual!!
The story is pretty good, slightly predictable though. But, the flashback especially, kind made Hermione seem really sluty and, uh, prone to break rules. Way to out of character for her.
I really liked this story, I only thought that Malfoy was slightly too out of Character. His change maybe should have been a little more gradual. But i really liked the bantering between Draco and Ginny, it was quite comical and enjoyable!
Author's Response: Well, I wasn't going for gradual at first-- my idea was he had an actual dare and she was supposed to think he was lying. Then it was all about who could insult whom more... That was fun. He was kind of out of character, I do admit that.... I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for being honest, and for reviewing after you read!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, only I felt that the characters should have had a more gradual change. Malfoy needed more time to warm up to kissing a weasley (Okay, maybe his hormones didn't, but his mind is still strong.) And Ginny was a pretty big tease, but otherwise it was well written. I especially liked the bantering betweeb the two of them, very comical and enjoyable!
Author's Response: The idea I was working from was he was dared to kiss someone and she was the first one he actually saw-- he did say he would go kiss someone else instead, but wanted to see if she'd actually do it. Sort of as a way to taunt her I guess. At first, she was upset about it and then she decided to taunt him back. The kiss was mostly a way to get past him and to annoy him and to tease him all at the same time. She was being a bit of a tease, but then again, so was he.... ;) I'm glad you liked the bantering! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I liked it! Reminds me of me when I wrote my first fic...hehe. It was cute but it had a good mixture of reality. One thing though: a "contraception charm" may work better than an "anti-conception cham" because of the heavy Latin background in the canon.