Ok, interesting start. But, a singing, guitar playing Harry is just a tad too OOC for me. I'll continue though.

Very cute. It's nice that not all their jokes blow up in people's faces!

Interesting point about the postnatal depression. I guess I never really thought too much about Tonks' motives since I always thought of them as a convenient plot moving couple that didn't really make much sense otherwise. She's an interesting character but I never bought that their relationship. But, that's just me.
You, however, did a nice job. ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading this! Jo said she created Tonks just for Remus, but I have to admit I'm glad she left so much of their relationship up to imagination, because I wouldn't have written a series to try and fill in the gaps otherwise. :D

Very cute. I can see Hermione's daughter sharing a book with a Muggle boy. Love that Victoire would have taken little Lily around but wouldn't she have been at Hogwarts at that time? Nice job, though. Very enjoyable.

Nicely done in the spirit of JKR.
One grammar comment though, you used "there" incorrectly twice. Once it should have been "Their" and the other time should have been "They're".

Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!
I hope Ron can get his stuff together in these 4 weeks and pass his exam!

Author's Response: So do I... Thanks for the review!

Cute and witty. Lordy, I'm old enough to remember the original TV series that came from. I wouldn't be surprised if they had a Cousin Itt in the family!

Author's Response: Cousin Itt cursed with a hair growing spell? Maybe he got burnt off the tapestry when he went to America to star in a Muggle television show, hehheh. Thanks for reading!

Interesting idea to get this from Dean's POV. Everyone's so focused on the main characters all the time we forget there are others involved, too. I think a lot probably happened at Shell Cottage that is yet to be explored. And, yes, I sobbed over Dobby's death and Harry's grief. Darn house elf! Thanks for the nice one-shot.

I just want to add that this is so well done and completely plausible. So, if you don't mind, I'm going to believe your version. That this coulda, woulda, shoulda happened and when Hermione dropped the Basilisk fangs was the first kiss that Harry saw. Yep, I'm happy with that because I DO NOT believe that their first kiss would have happened in the middle of the battle.

Author's Response: Haha! Okay, I love Rowling's version, too, but I'm not gonna lie. It makes my day when someone wants to take my version as canon. LOL. I sort of like to think it happened this way too. And when I'm reading that bit in the book, I sometimes think that is their first kiss, and other times think is was just a moment when she couldnt' wait another minute to kiss him AGAIN. Hehe. /delusional

I've read the Potter Family series backwards. No matter. You've done all the little details well as usual. Loved all the little cross references that tie all your stories together. Great plot move to get Harry to St. Mungo's. The only thing I really didn't like and found a bit out of character was that Harry basically tells Ginny in front of the whole family. After his talk about parenthood and knowing about Ginny's temperment (especially with the hormones!) I'd think he'd want to tell her privately. It's their first kid and everything. The last bit was cute with Teddy but I found it incongruous. Nice job otherwise.

Author's Response: I agree with you (sort of). I tried to hint (at the end) that at the very last minute Harry realised that he’d made a mistake. He actually came very close to telling her on the beach. But he thinks she was deliberately misleading him by going to St Mungo’s without him. It’s been a while since I reread this. I’ll take another look at it and possibly do a bit of tinkering. Thanks. -N-