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Hi, I'm CA. I used to be a college student studying (in a loose sense of the word) Genetics and Biotechnology with a minor in Music. Now I'm a part-time secretary with no delusions of grandeur whatsoever.

I am an avid reader. Sometimes I write. Other preferred activities include playing piano, dancing, singing, and generally loving life.

I'm a member of Hufflepuff House. One of those "we'll take the lot" cases more than hard work or loyalty, I'm afraid.

Before I started writing fanfiction seriously, I hated romance. I wouldn't even read it here. Then I discovered Other Pairings and I've unleashed a great power of fluff. I hope you enjoy my work. Feel free to drop me a review if you get the notion.

My favorites right now are "We Need All the Allies We Can Get" and "Catchphrase." "Gratification and Justification" has its moments. "Don't Get Caught" is my one featured story.

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The Mystery of the Lightning Bond by electronicquillster

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: As Andrea Benning starts her fifth year at Hogwarts alongside The Trio, she has her own daily things to deal with, like a life-altering secret, studying, orchestrating Operation Sophie-Roderick Romance and a crush of her own. When one attends Hogwarts, one can hardly expect things to go as planned.

Fred and George Weasley are really only returning to Hogwarts for the priceless market research, but will there be time for other things as well?

As friendships and romances develop, the students at Hogwarts will also have to deal with the second rise of the evil Lord Voldemort and the terrible toad of a Defense professor - Umbridge.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 03/20/06 Title: Chapter 18: The Trouble With Girls

*pouts* I recognized the Pride & Prejudice quote too! Although ... what did you call it? Heskin/Seale or whatnot? It goes by a different name round here.

Anyway, I discovered this story last night and read all the way through it in about two hours and I chose to review this chapter in particular because I wanted to pout about P&P. But it's a really great story so far.

I really like the whole L-bomb thing with Andrea's brother Darren and stuff (and George), it's funny.

I'll agree with miss padfoot down there that somehow Sophie and Andrea do seem to fit right in with the Gryffindors and it's a cool interpretation of "the missing girls," although personally I don't believe there are any. The whole premise that you started with, that they were just cut out because JK didn't want to have to worry about extra plot lines or whatnot was classic and completely hooked me into the story.

I canna wait to see how the mystery of the lightning bond reveals itself, though I have a theory. Good story, your modliness.

Have a nice day! *D*

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 20: The Wake of the Departure

Aw, I'm glad Andrea's holding up all right. I hope this separation doesn't last too much longer, though.

The UFFC club was funny. Really quite strange.... when I heard that someone named Haley had done the decorations, that made me smile, but not nearly as much as Anna Pevensie. That was great.

Poor Sophie and Terry, though. Oh well, it'll be okay, I'm sure. *sigh* I do hate separations.

Great chapter. Thanks for posting it and all. Have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: There were quite a few MNFFers in this chapt...hee. Even MJ was there...>> Hee. I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review. Sophie and Terry will be fine, I believe. This actually comes as great news to certain shippers...

The Return of the Prodigal Son by Sigune

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A very young Dark wizard returns to his old school with high hopes of obtaining the Defence Against the Dark Arts position. But showing an ugly mark on his arm and explaining how it got there might considerably reduce his chances… A different take on how and why Severus Snape became a spy for Albus Dumbledore, a glimpse into his mind, and a peek at an alternative family history.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 04/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Return of the Prodigal Son

I really enjoyed reading this. It was very impressive the way you thought of Snape's argument - the line about Dark Magic being the thing that really separates Muggles from Wizards has been haunting me for some time now. Is that true? It could be ... but I don't know ...

I actually thought Snape was very well represented and that this is very similar (although perhaps not what Jo had in mind) to what I always sort of thought this interview would consist of. The introduction of the sherbet lemon was especially enjoyable and perfect for Dumbledore.

Thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: Thank you! The Dark Magic thing is of course debatable; it's Snape's opinion, and there is something to be said for it - but I wouldn't claim that Snape is always right ;).

To be honest, I'm at once curious about what Jo has in mind and dreading it at the same time... I'm so afraid the canon truth might be love-related :(...

Glad you liked my Dumbledore! He's an adorable character and I strive to write him well :). -S

Black Chronicles - An Ancient Legacy by the nutty imp

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: 6-year-old Sirius Black just wouldn’t listen; he snuck into the family cellar despite being forbiddened to do so... A broken artifact brought about a chain of events that’ll bring us to a different world. Although most of the events stayed the same, his absence brought about some minor changes - now Sirius is in Harry’s time.

This is a story that will reveal what will happen if the most mischievous of the Marauders joins forces with the ever-creative Weasley Twins. This is an epic tale that will reveal the mysterious myths and history of the Most Noble and Ancient House of Blacks. Be mystified, and roll over with laughter, as Sirius bumbled his way through his 1st year at Hogwarts in this alternate tale of the HP tradition.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/19/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Mirror Mirror

Well. I don't know how this slipped, but . . . "Lavender Browned looked to the left and the right" That might want changing, eh? I wish the boys would listen to Hermione. Sirius' antics, while funny, aren't as funny anymore when he's so mean too. I enjoy the action. Look forward to seeing more ^_^ Good job!

Author's Response: *lol* OMG! am I original with my mistakes or what *L* ^_^ As for Sirius, thanks for noticing his meanness ... I'm doing that on purpose, as part of his characterization. I want that mean streak to sprout out once in a while (as JK showed - he's a bully) but he also ought to be charismatic enough, that people will still love him despite this faults. Fortunately Harry does not fuel this mean spark of his, as much as James does. ^_^

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/21/05 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 – Cycle of Chaos

Hmmm . . . pretty good action sequence. You used "low curse" twice in a row, though. I would change that just so it's not repititious. I saw almost no comma errors this time. Creative idea (I enjoyed Sirius' demonstration almost more than the whole action sequence), but now I want to know what happens next--NOW! But I will wait patiently just like everyone else. have a nice day.

Author's Response: Thanks for noticing... corrected. The next chapter has been validated and the one after that with my beta ^_^ ... I try to update fast regardless of reviews. Thanks for being my first (and only) reviewer on this installment.

I don't know if it's good that you enjoyed my sub-plots over my main plot *L* ... But it's good to know that you had as much fun reading that as I did writing it.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/30/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Aftermath and Reflections

Uh-Oh--You left Orlaith's comments on the bottom there, so everyone knows what's improving and what she had to say about it. Not that that's bad. Anyway, on to my review . . . . Hah! I loved it! Dumbledore and Moody in perfect control of their situations, hah! Hermione's "reflection" being the kelpie all the time, hah! I had no idea there was anything fishy about that--so much for textual clues. (and so much for a pun. ha, that was a funny one.) I refuse to be nitpicky and tell you any errors that I found, so I've purposely forgotten them already. It clearly got accepted anyway. I can't wait for what Rita Skeeter comes out with. I expect that will be fun. Oh, I loved this chapter! Have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: Whoops ... *L* am such a scatter-brain ... thanks for telling me *lol*

^_^ Guess my clues were too subtle :) so much for the 'Mystery of Hermione's Reflection'.

You still found errors? *L* I can tell you and Lei are already in that 'Beta Frame of mind' ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 02/09/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Siriusly Wicked Ideas

I found it! The story ascended out of the depths of the MNFF Archive and I was able, finally, to log in (I always forget that part) and add it to my Favorites list. So you should have a new one, since that's only a couple days old.

I don't know what else to say, but . . . you're funny, miel.

How many more chapters have you got going?

Author's Response: maybe 5 more ... I really have to go finish that pending chapter for this one ... too many contests got me distracted *lol*

I do enjoy making people laugh -- although lately I've been writing those dark stories ... I really should quit those challenges ... *L* too serious for my own good :)

Author's Response: *squeals* another one who placed this in their favourates! *squeals*

Hate Bordering to Obssession by the nutty imp

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Draco / Hermione love poem on how he feels about her. This was requested by 'nightgoddess'. Personally speaking I don't go for this type of pairing. But I tried to keep it canon. ^_^ Feel free to use it, or excerpts of it, on your fic.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 10/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Hate Bordering to Obssession

Hi, it's me again (that was me, Moonbright, down there.) I feel okay in submitting another review because I'm practically a different person--I didn't even know who you were, I just liked your poem. I still like it. No constructive criticism at this time, amazingly enough! Have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: CA *L* Thanks! Not in the mood to nitpick? *grin* know exactly how you feel ... it gets tiring after nitpicking a chapter ^_^ Same to you. ^_^

Much Ado Caused by the Weasleys by the nutty imp

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Shakespearean Parody written in a style akin to the original (well almost) featuring Fred and George Weasley
This crazy author was bored ^_^ This is my laughable attempts to massacre some the famous play-wright's most notable lines. ^_^

Act 1 Scene 3 - Validated!

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/28/05 Title: Chapter 2: Act One Scene Two

I had to reread these once I decided I wanted to leave a review. I remember now thinking when I read them it was such a pity that you only had two scenes up. I am very happy that scene 3 is in queue and that this story will continue. With any luck, since it's poetry, it will be validated quickly. I enjoy recognizing the references to Shakespeare. I think I kinda like Shakespeare. Well, um, good job.

Author's Response: *L* I like massacring his lines ... so much like song massacres *snicker* but song parodies aren't allowed here so Shakespeare it is. *grin* You're right about the quick validation @_@ I'm surprised myself. My poems used to take a week or more ... guess the limiting of one chapter a person does help quicken the queue.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/30/05 Title: Chapter 3: Act One Scene Three

Good show, good show! I suppose this means you'll be updating this fairly regularly? I do enjoy the lighter fanfiction every once in a while--yours is always so refreshing! Have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: It may mean I might go a bit slower since now I have 3 different fics to update. ^_^ and am thinking of updating that Marauders one as well ... ^_^

A Road of Shattered Glass by Ennalee

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Three years after Voldemort’s first fall, Tonks and Ninette, a metamorphmagus and a dancer, each struggle to find their own identities apart from the deceptions of mirrors. Meanwhile, in the caves underneath Hogwarts, someone may be searching for things better left lost.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Stone Walls Surrounding

I want them to be friends. They're both so unhappy! I also hope you update (I know, weird to say it at the third chapter when you're at six or so, but there's a method to my madness, as I'm sure you'll realize). I think you do really well with Tonks and her clumsiness and all. Well done! You're on my favorites list, you know.

Author's Response: I\'m honored to be one of your favorites. Thank you for your wonderful compliments! As for whether or not they\'ll be friends...you\'ll have to wait and see! ;)

Patrick Thatcher and the Colonist's Compass by Dean Thomas

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Patrick Thatcher’s older brother teases him, his mother worries about him, and his father defends him. His family sounds very much like any other, but somehow Patrick’s is far from average. In Patrick’s world, adults disappear into thin air, owls deliver mail, and the most popular sport in the country is played on broomsticks. Not to mention that every member of his family is, and always has been, a wizard. When your grandfather is a famous American veteran, being a Thatcher isn’t the easiest life to live. When his acceptance letter to the most prestigious American school of magic arrives addressed to another student, Patrick’s position in his former world begins to take a tumble—right along with the newly elected President of Magic’s approval ratings. With the Wizarding world’s eyes shifting toward a new wizard, can Patrick figure out just why his first year is off to a rocky start? Inspired by J.K. Rowling’s wondrous Harry Potter Series, Patrick Thatcher’s adventures of wizardry in the United States is a tale all its own while still respecting its English origins. Readers are sure to find that the magic across the pond is just as unforgettable.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 08/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Message Mishap

This is a very intriguing story, and I find that I am enjoying it immensely. So much so, in fact, that I am finding hardly a thing to quibble about. I look forward to seeing more about how America educates her wizards.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. More of this story to come!

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 09/01/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Quidditch Team

Er . . . good job on this chapter. I especially like the tension between Professor Sumpton and Patrick. Anyway . . . oh, you like commas, I can tell. There's one part where it's like "the remaining, two, [somethings like hopefuls maybe]" you don't need either of those commas. A couple little things just like that, I just thought of another one "his robe to flap open, furiously" doesn't need a comma either.

Author's Response: Yeah...I have a problem. "Hi I'm Dean T." "Hi Dean!" I change around sentences so much and place commas everywhere and when I go back I always forget to get rid of unnecessary commas.

Author's Response: Yeah...I have a problem. "Hi I'm Dean T." "Hi Dean!" I change around sentences so much and place commas everywhere and when I go back I always forget to get rid of unnecessary commas.

MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.

Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 01/17/07 Title: Chapter 39: Home for the Holidays

This always happens. I was looking for something to read last night and chose the last few chapters of your story. And then today the new chapter went through...I didn't even have to catch up because I'd read it so recently. That happened last time, too.

I love this story. I love it so much I'm not even going to pick out the typos you made. I can't wait for the next chapter...except I can. I will be very patient. I can always just reread old chapters because it's a great story and I get sucked in every time.

I just had to laugh at the ending.

Author's Response: *gasps* TYPOS? *screams* NOOOO! *thinks about looking for typos* *realizes she would never spot them after looking at this chapter all day* *considers hunting down Cinderella Angelina and forcing her to write a SPEW review* *LOL* *is kidding*

:) I am so glad to know you are enjoying my story. It really means a lot to me to know that you would even enjoy rereading old chapters. Of course, I hope you don’t have to wait so long that you would feel the need to, but I can’t promise anything, so I’m glad to know you are patient. ;) And I always love to hear if someone laughs at something, so thanks for that, too. Thank you for reviewing, CA. I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 02/26/14 Title: Chapter 71: The Scent of Heaven

Oh man. I'm not sure Remus will ever see Lindi again. All of a sudden I'm invested in this story to see how you're planning to end it. (If you're ending it. I mean, I know you will finish, I'm just not sure if you're near the end of not.)

And I am so curious about the note!

Whenever you write the next chapter, I will read it.

Author's Response: Ahhh...Cinderella Angelina!! CA! How exciting! I remember you from many moons ago... When the forums were buzzing and Electronicquillster was a mod, and ...*wistful sigh* the good ole days. :D It is so good to *see* you and to know you are reading. I am definitely planning to end it, but I'm not as near the end as I should be after 8 years! *non-wistful sigh* But getting closer by the year! I will say, I'm pretty sure it won't take another 8 years, even as slowly as I'm updating these days. >.< Thank you so much for reviewing. It's always a thrill to *see* someone after a long while.

A Glimpse at the Life of Dolores Jane Umbridge by d3pr3ss3dNhappy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Dolores Jane Umbridge. Nasty Professor Umbridge. Angered students, was attacked by centaurs. This brief one-shot offers an insight into her life and her last days at Hogwarts via her point of view.
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

I think you did an excellent job portraying Dolores Jane Umbridge in this story. How she didn't necessarily hate Harry, she just saw him as . . . well, what HermioneDancr said. And how she learned to use her intelligence because she didn't have any looks to help her along . . . and how she got so close to Cornelius Fudge . . . I feel like you covered all the bases. Well done!

Wand Stories by SeaIsleWitch

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: For over two millennia, Wizarding Britain has chosen the Ollivander family to guide them in the selection of their most essential magical tool. Ölvir Ollivander, XVIII, Grand Wand Master, senses the innermost needs of his patrons and matches them with the corresponding wand, which he never forgets. Mr Ollivander tailors his approach to the individual, while dispensing information and giving advice; and finally answering the age old question: “Why did that wand choose me?”

Written for the Spring Faire Festival, Wand Stories was recognized as an Honorable Mention by the Wizengamot at Sycophant Hex.

Written just before HP&HPB was released. I will not be updating the minor canon changes.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 03/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wand Stories

First of all, I’d just like to say that this is a very original and well-researched piece of work, and enjoyable to read. You made Ollivander a more real person, with a sense of humor and a good heart.

My favorite part about the Ron story was how funny he was – he couldn’t realize when Ollivander was teasing him and was so quick to judge it was almost sad. But it was still enjoyable. I thought the mention of being allergic to wands was very interesting – makes me wonder how folks like that function at Hogwarts.

I loved the Petunia you created. She was very frightened, but still ladylike and sniffy, the way we know her now. In fact, I think it was this story that prompted me to write a drabble on Petunia fleeing Hogwarts several months ago. Even though I hear Jo has squashed the “magic Petunia” theory, I think what you suggest is quite plausible. The introduction of Muggle liaisons and Beginners’ Wands was a cool thing. I’m amazed at the thought you put into the wand process.

The interchange between Olvir and Neville was very touching. Knowing Neville’s Gran, the poor boy wouldn’t have known much about his grandfather – and I think you made a very good story for him, being an Auror after all, even though he was very into plants. Even though I don’t see Neville being the Auror type, I can imagine that he would be proud of his heritage all the same. The title of this segment, A Gift, is very appropriate.

Another image that has stuck with me through all these months (sorry it took me so long to review, I am very lazy) is that of Sirius rolling his eyes at Severus and getting rebuffed. For some reason I can very easily see that as the beginning of their rather acrimonious relationship. I think, though, that Severus was too polite, even through his thirst for knowledge. I see him in this circumstance being a little more reticent, a little less thankful. But it was fine the way you wrote it, and the information was fascinating.

Just a couple little nitpicky things. There are a few times that you use more commas than necessary. For example, in the paragraph following, the commas in bold are unnecssary: “Ron knew that today it was not a racing broom, but a wand that he would take home. He realized, with a start that this wand might be the first thing he’d ever bought new.” Just something for you to consider in future if you’re too lazy to go in and fix it. I know I would be. *ducks head*

Overall, wonderful job, and I loved the quote you found that’s at the very end. This story was a good mix of information (which Jo might have considered when assigning wands) and characterization and made for an enjoyable read. Thank you and have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: Hello, Cinderella Angelina! What a wonderful surprise it was to get such a lovely and thorough review. This collection of mini-stories was my very first completed fan fiction, which I wrote for a competition at Sycophant Hex. Much to my surprise, the story earned a nod from the judges. I spent over a month writing, researching, and editing Wand Stories. I had several betas during different stages for feedback and also a final proofread to make sure all those commas where in the right places. (BTW - I fixed those two commas. I agreed with you, and I'm never too lazy to fix a mistake. LOL)

When writing this story, I wanted to show how Ollivander might approach each wizard or witch who enters his shop, so I wrote about four unique situations. I tried to imagine the look on Ron's freckled face as Ollivander presented him with the choices, each worse than the previous one. Petunia has such hatred toward Harry and magic in the books, so I wanted to show a situation that might explain some of it. JKR says Petunia's not a Squib…but there's something about Petunia we don't know yet. Neville needed some additional confidence and wise Mr Ollivander knew just how to help him. Snape knows that knowledge is power. He wanted to learn as much as he could, and being polite was a way to get what he wanted--very Slytherin.

Thank you, Cinderella Angelina, for taking the time to give such detailed and kind feedback. It's very much appreciated! -SIW

The Severed Souls by Magical Maeve

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Summary : The sequel to Daughter of Light. Maeve has a very bad end to her honeymoon as things come to light about Severus that astound her. Why is her husband so keen to keep Draco Malfoy alive at all costs and can she really get over her loathing of Narcissa Malfoy to work together to save both Severus and Draco from the fate that Voldemort would like to inflict on them? Why is Harry so furtive and will Neville save the day when Maeve’s necklace is returned to her by her father. Oh, and our favourite bad-boy Auror is back!

There has been rather a long break in the writing of the story due to work commitments, but I'm back on the case and hoping to get it finished - if there's anyone left still reading!! :-)
Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 08/07/05 Title: Chapter 2: An Uncomfortable Alliance.

I thought Narcissa was portrayed extremely well. So Maeve is going to be at Grimmauld Place? I imagine some ordeals, or at least some uncomfortable conversations. This was a very intriguing chapter. As always, I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Grimmauld Place is definately not going to be the welcoming place it once was.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 4: Malfoy Manor

Amazingly enough, I think I may have found a typo. "Why else would be visiting Malfoy Manor when there was no Lucius here?" should probably have a "he" somewhere in there. Of course, it does not affect the chapter, and, as usual, I'm just waiting patiently for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ooops! *Goes to fix typo*. Next chapter is posted so the wait is over! Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina Signed
Date: 10/07/05 Title: Chapter 9: Godric's Hollow

I liked this chapter--Harry's visit to Godric's Hollow . . . I liked the way you did it. I also like how Draco is being so, I think you used the word "petulant," and now he's going to run away . . . probably not the smartest thing he could do, but I suppose I'll wait and see . . . just like everyone else! I never found out what was wrong with Ron, though. Was he put out because Harry didn't want to hear about Hermione over and over? Or maybe I'm just not a careful enough reader. Anyway, great job again. Seeing that this story is updated brightens my entire day.

Author's Response: Ron was being a jealous boy over his father's attention being on Harry. Ron is getting older and perhaps starting to resent the treatment he gets from his parents while Harry is allowed to get away with murder. (not literally!) And I'm glad it brightens your day... I'm about to update again. :-)