So, where do I even begin?
Well, I'm 16, I live in England and I'm obsessed with many different things, of which Harry Potter is probably the main one. As you may have guessed.
I was a reader and writer here for about four years and a moderator for just over two and half years. And I am ever so slightly insane.
My Stories
If you're looking for my higher quality writing, it's advisable that you stick to stories uploaded in or after 2007. There's not much I like about my earlier writing, but it's still up here because I did put quite a lot of time and effort into it. Love Conquers Everything has been discontinued.
Good, story, I'm enjoying it! But don't make James like Audrey - it would break my heart!! 10/10 keep updating
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! I just sent chapter seven in recently, so it should be up soon! Thanks again!
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
Great story, a really interesting way of portraying Lily's thought process, I'm left wondering how she's going to end up hating James...I'll just have to keep reading! Good character development and not too slow-moving - excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks for all of the compliments, and yes, if you keep reading, you will find out how she begins to hate him...I'm trying to make it happen as naturally as possible, you know, like, he doesn't just call her a name and she never likes him again!! thanks again!!
Great new update, I really liked the snow scene! Poor, you not having snow in Australia. (I live in England, and it sometimes snows, but mostly just rains, lol!) 10/10, keep going!
Author's Response: Great, thanks!! As I've said, I was most nervous about that part, as I've got really no idea what I am writing about in that chapter!! I'm really glad you liked it!! Keep reading, and thanks again!!
Wow, really good chapter - I was really scared for James - but I knew he'd survive, I guess! 10/10, keep updating!
Author's Response: Excellent!! Thanks for the review, I'm actually surprised that I managed to create some suspence there, but really pleased!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
That was brilliant. You really captured Hermione's emotions in this story. The beginning was very haunting, when Hermione forgets her meaning in life, and you wrote it with such delicate accuracy that the reader could completely undestand her. I liked the way you made her realise her importance by having her save a little boy - nothing can be more rewarding than knowing you've saved someone's life. It wasn't just Hermione saving him, it was him saving Hermione too. The writing style was fantastic. Truely wonderful.
Wow! That was fantastic! I really liked the fact that you chose an unusual topic and managed write it so beautifully. The imagery was wonderful, and you conveyed Narcissa's raw feelings so well. The change of emotions from when she was walking towards the platform to when she was being "auctioned off" flowed excellently - the transition felt natural.
I think you captured the cruelty of the situation perfectly in the descripitions - your use of words is brilliant. My favourite part was probably the reference to her mother: Mother and daughter were locked in eternity. She wondered if she should have told her. Perhaps there was a magical method of concealment, of . . . enclosure. Mentally, she reached out to the older woman, and found their hands interlocked. They were warm, and she knew her mother loved her still; it was enough to take her through what would come of this.
I enjoyed this fic immensely. Congratulations for writing such a fabulous, imaginative story.
wow, that was really good, but very sad. good luck in the contest!
very good, i liked the bit at the end about fred asking ron about hermione's underwear! keep updating!
I saw the banner for this story on your sig, and I thought I'd check it out. Wow, this is really brilliant. I look forward to reading the next parts!
Brilliant story! I loved the Kingsley/OC storyline - it worked very well for me. I was suitably surprised when I found out that Maureen knew about the magical world; you managed that part in an excellent manner. The ending was simpky perfect. Overall, a winner for me! 10/10.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Rita! This story will always have a special place in my heart and I'm always glad when someone likes it. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Very good story, well done! I liked the way you handled the R/Hr relationship. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Great story! I have to say, I'm not a big fan of Harry/Luna stories, but I'd heard such good things about this one that I thought I'd take a look. And what a look it turned out to be! Delicately written with style and elegance, your story truly narrates their love very well. You've got an excellent concept of Luna's character and an interesting little tale here. Oh, and that last line was fabulous - I loved it. 10/10
This is very well written, I like your use of descrpitive language. Interesting pairing- not a stereotypical one. Really good, well done!
Author's Response: I'm glad you find the pairing interesting, and that's what fan fics are for: Expanding your fantasy.
Definitely an interesting take on things - I enjoyed it. This stryline could have been clumsily done, but you managed it very well - well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, Rita. I was worried about the storyline myself, and am relieved to hear it worked for you.
Ginny’s little slipup to Romilda about her satisfying married life with Harry would get him all worked up…
This was really good, nice and fluffy, but not to the point of suffocation. I'm impressed that you can write both deep, meaningful bittersweet epics and also uplifting one-shots. Well done! A fun and satisifying story - I enjoyed it very much. And don't worry, be happy! 10/10.
Author's Response: It's my first time writing something pleasant for the perfect couple. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
It's New Year's Eve, late at night, and most of the world is out and about, except for two people. One person is lost emotionally, perhaps beyond all mortal repair, and another one is up, unable to sleep, just sitting. What happens when the two meet?
This was an excellent story, I really enjoyed it. I liked the storyline, and I think Remus was a perfect candidate for redeeming Harry. Well done!
I loved the comparisons that you used, and I really liked the general plotline of this story. Wow, brilliant! 10/10
This is a very powerful story. I particularly liked the unusual pairing, and the comparison of the chess game and real life was excellent. Well done!
Author's Response: I noticed once upon a time that McGonagall is the only person we've ever seen Snape appear genuinely glad to see, with no apparent ulterior motive (at the end of OotP.) They also sit together at a Christmas dinner and gang up on Lockhart. I doubt we'd ever catch them in the famed broom closet together (sorry, Rita, nothing for the quill here...) but suspect they get along reasonably well when their students aren't looking.
Thank you!
Ooh...very interesting start! I can't wait for the next chapter, you've got a very good plotline going here! Excellent -10/10
It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.
RL/HG, Post-HBP
No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.
Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!
See, I'd heard about this story a long time ago, but never got round to reading it. When I saw it in the Most Recent section I thought I'd take a little peep to see what it's like.
Well, you're amazing, Lei! I loved this chapter so much that I'm going to go back and read every other one. Your characterisation is brilliant and the descriptions are simply beautiful. Well done!