This was a great chapter. I love seeing the family dynamics between the family members, especially with the spouses. I can't wait to hear more about Jacqui, and maybe her history. I remember in one of the early chapters about her maybe having some magic blood in her, hmmm, wonder if that is going to lead anywhere?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Jacqui's observations of her new neighbours will continue to puzzle her for some time. Harry suspects magical blood, but isn't certain. That information may not be important. The full moon approaches, but before then, Jacqui meets Lily Luna Potter's godmother.-N-
Oh Luna, how I love you. I can't wait until the party. I'm excited to see how the magical friends and muggle neighbors mix. Another great chapter, thank you Neil, for you wonderful stories.
-Cherise
Author's Response: Cherise, thank you.
Next: A Breakdown, a Bike, and a Barmy Blonde Again. Jacqui, Harry, Luna, and Mary. What could possibly go wrong?-N-
Great Chapter! Its wonderful to see everyone as adults. The Ravenclaw boys all talking together, then of course Dean's and Seamus' families are going to be super close. Lets hope that plant doesn't make another appearance, at least in a bad way. I can't wait to see what else Jacqui picks up on, especially with the town folk arriving.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
There are an awful lot of arrivals in this chapter, and there will be more (there's only one Gryffindor from Harry's year missing). Dean and Seamus have been friends for as long as Harry and Ron. The plant may simply be a plant. But Jacqui will pick up a few interesting snippets.-N-
Great Chapter! I can't wait to read what happens at the party. What will the town folk think of the Potters other guest?
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Other guest? Harry and Ginny couldn’t have a housewarming party and not invite their oldest friends. Weasleys and DA members (and their spouses/kids) will outnumber the Muggles.-N-
Sweden, in an hour? I wonder what Jacqui will think/say about this. I love the other accounts of the party from the other mums. What a pot stirrer Mary is! Naughty Naughty! Thank you Neil, another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You'll find out hat Jacqui will think in the next chapter. Mary has, it seems, made up her mind. Will she regret that decision?-N-
I really enjoyed this look into the life of Lavender and Mark. Those poor boys have no clue what happened, which is a good thing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They know something happenned, but they have no idea what. -N-
What a great Chapter! I am so glad that Mark and Lavender are no longer hanging. I was wondering if she was going to transform to help save them. The three muggle boys sure got an eye full, not only with the magical world but also with Lavender, I bet Mark is glad he can Obliviate that part from their memories lol. Great Chapter as always, can't wait to see what the Auror office says.
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So are they, I'm sure. The boys did get an eyeful, Mark will do his best to sort things out. The next chapter won't take so long to submit. I want to finish at least one of my chaptered stories, and this is it! Thenext chapter will be the last.-N-
What a great chapter, and story for that matter. I love the interaction between the girls, though through another's eyes. Luna is a true Ravenclaw, question everything! =) I'm grateful that Ginny saw through the snotty shop owner and went with the more down to earth Sandra. Can't wait to see more of the wedding plans, or any of your other stories. I am always exiced when I see a new addition to anything you write posted!
~Cherise
Author's Response: Cherise, Thanks for the review.
This entire chapter is nothing more than interaction between the girls. I only need to add Luna to the mix to turn everything sideways. Jocasta was heading for a putdown from the second she called Ginny Virginia. Next, possibly Strangers, More likely Hunters and Prey, and an outside chance of a new Mark/Lavender story.-N-
I love the relationship between Neville and Hannah. Now we know why Hermione is so upset with Ron, and with good reason I might add...but do I detect some office gossip (Hermione going to France with her Boss) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As Lavender would tell you, just because it's gossip, that doesn't mean it isn't true. This chapter is the midway point of the story, and from now on, there will be more answers than questions.-N-
Neil,
What a wonderful chapter...thank goodness some questions are being answered. I can't wait until Linny's interview, I also can't wait to hear how Harry is going to escape the werewolf camp. Those naughty, naughty Slytherins', I never suspected them! Sorry took me so long to comment. It was wonderful, like you produce anything else, lol. Can't wait to read some more of any story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You will get more answers in the next chapter (The Hunt: Tooth and Claw) which will also be the last of the “Hunt†chapters as Harry finally approaches the “Interlude†(way back in chapter 2) with all of his aches and injuries finally explained. I’ve just realised that whatever arrives next from me will contain Lavender. Whether it’s this, Browns, or Strangers.-N-
Great Chapter! When I saw a new chapter had been posted I decided to re-read the story. While re-reading I picked up a lot of information that helps bring all your stories together. Poor Harry has to wait to see Ginny, I can't wait until the next chapter is posted. So much is starting to come to light, Ron & Hermonie, this ministry party, what's up with Linny is she trying to purposely get Ginny into trouble, she is sounding a bit shady to me. Thanks for the great writing, I always look forward to reading your stories, oh side note is there any progress on Aurors & School Girls?
~Cherise
Author's Response: Cherise, thanks for the review.
This is an important story in my timeline (I'd like to think that they are all important, and also that they all stand alone as stories). You'll no doubt have spotted Mark Moon. There are several references to things Harry believes need changing and innovations he wants to make. All of which have been implemented in future stories.The next chapter (She Wolf and Cubs) will be ready soon, and after that you'll get a Neville's-eye view of events at the Ministry reception and afterwards. Aurors and Schoolgirls will be some time, sorry, I'm currently concentrating on this, Strangers at Drakeshaugh, and Moons (which I hope to finish soon). If I can get this and Moons completed, that will be two less chaptered fics to worry about. steangers isn't at the halfway point yet.
Readers are certainly beginning to distrust Linny.-N-
You had me on edge from the start of the chapter to the end! I can't wait for more. I love how now that Lavender is "stable" she is insisting on talking to Harry about what has been going on since his absence. Lets not worry that she is in a Werewolf colony, but that Harry must know about Ginny not being her self and Ron and Hermione had another row. HaHa...oh Lavender!
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I had to smile at the cunning way you fitted the words Lavender and "stable" into the same sentence. She's still injured and she's trapped inside a werewolf village just before the full moon. Why on eartnwould a minor inconvenience like that prevent her from gossiping?-N-
Great Chapter! I re-read the whole story yesterday so I could remember the small details. I'm glad I did because I would not have picked up on the missing fingers at the end of this chapter. Great job with the whole Susan and Terry partnership, and with Susan's thoughts on Lavender.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The man with missing fingers. :-DYou might be interested to know that the next chapter will feature Mark Moon, plus more of the Susan/Terry partnership.(And probably no Harry). -N-
I know I have not commented yet, but I stumbled upon your stories a few months ago. I quickly read all your stories and fell in love with how they perfectly follow cannon. You became one of my favorite authors. Now on to this story, it is so good, I like how your have two stories in one, I hope an update is posted soon because I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story will continue to flip between the two timelines until chapter 15. I'm only interested in following canon. These are JKR's characters, she knows what happens to them, and she can't possibly be wrong.Despite appearances, this is one story and there are things going on Harry knows nothing about (yet).
-N-
What a great chapter, as always, I am dying to know more. Does Harry get the girls out along with keeping Lavender safe? What is Scabior going to do? HIs retaliation is not going to be good for Harry, I have a bad feeling about that. You left me biting my nails.
~Cherise
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The great thing about alternating chapters is that you won't get the answers until chapter 11 (which is called "Wolves at the door).-N-
I was so excited to see this chapter up. I love his grandparents. I love how a certain character was so certain he was the heir and he wasn't. It is great to see a person/family receive this honor. It was wonderfully written, as always. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks.
I'm happy you liked it. The Black family crest bears a certain similarity to the crest of Sir Brunor le Noir. Once I discovered that, and figured out the succession, this story wrote itself.-N-
Oh wow another great look into Harry's life, I wonder if they'll find the heir. The part with the painting made me cry, how wonderful for Harry to now "know" his grandparents. Thank you for your wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Will they find the heir? You’ll find out soon. Harry’s grandparents will reappear, too.-N-
This was so wonderful to see from George's point of view. I can't imagine what birthdays must be like for him...oh the farting card is so something that I could see the twins doing. I hope that Angelina kicks Romilda's butt...that might just be because I have never liked Romilda lol. I also hope there is a sequel, I would love to see more of George and Angelina's beginning relationship.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The ideas behind this have been rattling around in my head forever, it’s taken this challenge to get me to write this. Angelina kicking Romilda’s butt? This was supposed to be a one shot but who knows, there may be a second chapter one day. Perhaps Romilda might kick Angelina’s? No, that’s never going to happen. :-D-N-
What a wonderful story! I'm so glad they figured it out with out having to wipe her memory. I could really feel her emotion when she thought she killed James! Thank you for writing this and giving us a peak into James and Lily's life.
~Cherise
Author's Response: You are welcome, and thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm really glad the tension and emotion came through at the end there. Thanks again, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)
Great Story! Poor Mark and his worrying. I know that it all works out in the end, but because of his worrying I'm worried about if Lavender is going to go back on their "status". I can't wait to read more!
~Cherise
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Mark is a worrier by nature. I hope to have the next chapter ready to post soon.-N-