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Let me tell you a little about myself.
My birthday is 08/09/1994. I am seventeen years old (I'm of age, haha(: ), but I turn eighteen in less than a month. I was born on a military base in Tacoma, Washington, but now I live in Denver, Colorado. My email is crb809@gmail.com for anyone who wants to email me about my stories. I am also a member at www.harrypotterfanfiction.com and I am known as Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever there, so feel free to check out my stories there and the millions of other author's there. And lastly, I love reading the Harry Potter series fom J.k. Rowling, I love reading Harry Potter stories from other people, and I love writing my own Harry Potter stories!!!(:
DISCLAIMER: Unfortunately, I am not J.K. Rowling. Never was, not am now and never will be. No matter how much I wish to be her genius, it will never happen. So, inspite of that, all of my stories will be playing with the wonderful world she has created for us to enjoy. And for this kidness, I thank her!!!(:
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The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit
I've said this a countless number of times and that is, you probably don't even visit this site anymore because thi is your only story and it looks to me that it's doing reasonably well on the reviews, seeing how it has the most of any story.
As for the stoy, it was interesting. We know Lucius Malfoy would never let his son marry a muggle-born, but she was right in saying that he wanted his son to marry her just so he could become popular again with the wizardin world. I enjoyed his chapter now I'm movingnkn to the next!!!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Lucius Malfoy’s Order
I know that this was made before the sixth and seventh book, so it's hard to read in that aspect since it's so different, but I like your rendemption of it, haha!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Sharing A Dorm
Nice!(:
Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years • Summary: Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 2: Midnight Eyes
Ooh, this is getting good. You probably don't visit this website anymore, but I'm glad I clicked on your story about Regulus and then found this! It's really good!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 3: Helen Nestowe of Germany
Does this Dumbledore know what Hermione is up to? And I don't know much yet, but wouldn't it have made more sense if Hermione was in Slytherin with Tom? Another good chapter if I don't say so myself!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 4: Of All People
Okay, shouldn't Professor Slughorn be the Potions teacher? He is in the books after all. I think that's all I have to say for this one. O=Outstanding for this!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 5: Late Night Suspicions
One thought struck me while reading this. Doesn't Tom already have a horcrux made? He can't die, in other words... If this story was made a little bit earlier, it would work, but by Tom's seventh yearv at Hogwarts, I believe he had a Horcrux.
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 6: Sunset Tears
I know that I'm starting to sound annoying to you, but the dark marks etched on the skin of Tom's followers are actually seen at anytime not just during the full moon... Otherwise, good chapter...(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 7: Enemies Closer
Uh-oh! And I have one little thing to say... "That, and the fact that he found her devastatingly attractive." Dumbledore was gay, he never found Minerva McGonagall to be attractive...
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 8: Best For Them
Interesting. I have nothing bad to say here, This was a really good chapter!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 9: Empty Space
"He had kissed girls before..." Tom Riddle never shown love before, therefore he never once kissed a girl.
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 10: Sillver Slippers and Peacock... Hats
Okay, you've cleared a lot of things, haha. I'm sorry, just forget about some of the comments I left before... I forgot to mention the kiss btween Tom and Hermione in the last chapter, that was unexpected! I read earlier in this story that Tom wasn't a murderer yet and you just said now that he killed his father... And I think in the fourth book it said that he hated his father, so he did hate his father for abandoning his mother and he was also a muggle which Tom knew before the sixth book came out, I believe. Again, I apologized for critisizing you on the chapters before this one because the sixth book is obviously out by now and I didn't know this was made before it came out...
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 11: Moonlight Masquerade
Wow, haha. I'm glad I can move on!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 12: Moonlight Masquerade, Part II
Hmm?
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 13: Of Puzzles and Riddles
Nothing can fool Dumbledore, but something tells me I don't want him to know...
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 14: Price of Immortality
You're doing great!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony
Just for saying that, I have to read the next chapter now. I was going to anyways, but my interest is even more peaked!(:
Date: 07/02/12 Title: Chapter 17: Worst Nightmare
I wished that this really happened. So many people who have died, wouldn't have. But this doesn't happen, unfortunately.