06/26/12
Hi, I am 'TheLoonyHermione'.
I love to sing and play guitar. Some of my favorite bands/singers are: The Head and the Heart, Gotye, Taylor Swift, James Taylor, and The Beatles.
And, obviously, I like to write. Harry Potter fanfics are mostly what I write, but I have other stories and fanfics as well - I have one that I'm doing on my own about a boy who lost his best friend, his dog; 3 HP fanfics by myself and 3 with a friend; One Hunger Games Fanfic by myself, one with a friend; and one Warriors fanfic with a friend. I also enjoy writing plays that me and some friends 'star' in.
I'm American but can do a fairly good British accent (I wish I was British...waah) and once someone asked me and my friend which part of the UK we were from...haha!
My favorite books/series are: Harry Potter (duh), the Percy Jackson series (although I found the movie horrendous), and The Hunger Games (I am currently obsessed).
My top 3 favorite sports are: 1. Tennis!! 2. Swimming (if you count that as a sport) 3. Softball (I'm a pitcher :))
My top 3 favorite HP characters are: 1. Neville!!!! Extremely cute!!! Even cuter in the movies!!! 2. Hermione!! I have been told that I sound like her (while speaking in a British accent), that I have the same personality as her (I do, however, think that I am more loud and rule-breaking, and also not quite as obnoxious), and even once that I look like her (which I seriously doubt, and I seriously thought the person who said that was insane). 3. Uh....can't pick between these guys...Lupin, Tonks, Snape, Sirius, Dumbledore, and Luna. There may be more, but I can't think of them at the moment...
My BFFLE is Kreacher Feacher!! She's amazingly loony, and I think you should read her stories!!
Guess what? I also love reviews!
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Room for Healing by Louisa Chocolatecake
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: After the final battle, Ron and Hermione push away their grief - and each other. Back at Hogwarts for the last month, they find each other again. (One-shot)
Date: 07/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: Room for Healing
Oh my gosh!!!! This was amazing and you wrote Ron really well!!!
Moments of His Life by LilMissGranger
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is the story of the adventures of Lily and James Potter as they watch their son grow up from afar, only allowed these small moments....
Date: 07/05/12 Title: Chapter 1: Godric's Hollow. Halloween. 1981
WHAT??? NOOO!!! LILY!!! Just kidding, I knew that would happen. But not so suddenly. Take that as a compliment.
Date: 07/05/12 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue: The Journey Begins
A bit confusing how you skipped through the moments, but good job anyway!
Date: 07/05/12 Title: Chapter 4: The Choice
I liked James' immaturity, it brought out his character and his old self really well. :D I love when they say "Not go back" together, however sad it is that they didn't.
Date: 07/05/12 Title: Chapter 6: It's Been...A Year?
AWWW so sad poor Harry and Lily!!!
Castle On A Cloud by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: One shot song fic to Castle on a Cloud from Les Miz... Its a cold Christmas Eve for a six year old Harry Potter...
Date: 07/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awww, Harry!! I feel so bad for him!!! By the way, was the car backfiring actually someone apparating?? Sorry, I have an overactive imagination.......:D
Blind by pheonixflame
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: What really happened on that fateful Halloween night in 1981?
Songfic to "Blind" by Lifehouse.
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Night, 1981
This was beautiful!!! Great job!!! :D
Chasing Away the Dark by Chaser921
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ginny's PoV starting from when McGonagall brings her and the twins to Dumbledore's office and ending when she convinces Harry that Voldemort's not possessing him.
I am Chaser921 of Gryffindor writing for A Different Viewpoint of the Spring Challenges.
Edit: This story won second place in the Different Viewpoint category! How cool is that?
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
This was really good! You did really well writing Ginny, and I liked how she called Voldemort 'Tom' instead of 'Voldemort' or 'You-know-who'. Good job!
More Than You Know by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily Evans can’t help but have noticed something isn’t quite right. The inseparable Gryffindor boys aren’t speaking to one another, and Remus Lupin seems particularly withdrawn and upset. Figuring she should do something, Lily resolves to speak with Remus, but what should she say?
I'm Five Today by hateater27
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's little Harry's fifth birthday, but will his special day turn out to be quite as special as he had hoped?
A Time to Fall by Ennalee
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Molly Weasley lost two boys in the first war. She doesn't think she can bear to lose another.
Date: 07/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: A Time to Fall
This was really good! I especially liked the Ginny part.
Small by InDreams91
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "My thoughts settled for a while as I set my sight on the vast water. Its overwhelming nature made me feel small, a feeling I wasn’t fond of and usually tried to suppress. "
Ginny slips away to reflect.
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Small
I. Am. Speechless. That was beautiful! I can't think of anything to say!!! Great job!!
A First and Final Birthday by Prongs92
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is Harry's first birthday as described in Lily's letter to Sirius that Harry discovered in Grimmauld Place. Please read and review. I changed the title of this story from 'Happy Birthday Harry!' to 'A First and Final Birthday'.
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: A First and Final Birthday
This was wonderful! I really liked the broom part, Harry did have some experience before Hogwarts after all. Great job!
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: The Shell Cottage by aamishi
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This story takes place during the Deathly Hallows in the chapter, The Shell Cottage. Hermione faces the dilemma of having two young men who care about her deeply and only want what is best for her, but both forget to ask Hermione what she wants.
Date: 07/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma
Awww, so cute! I love the relationship between Hermione and Harry, and I also love even more the relationship between Hermione and Ron. One mistake I found:
In this section, '“I know Harry.†She smiled slightly and blinked rapidly to chase away the tears that threatened to escape.' I think that there should be a comma between 'know' and 'Harry'.
The Man In The Moon by whatapotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Ever since his father told him about the man in the moon, Remus has never been afriad. He knows the man is up there, high above, watching over him and keeping him from harm. That was his father's promise to him, after all.
But one life-changing night, when the moon is full and bright, high up in the sky, little Remus will discover that some promises, however well intentioned, just arn't meant to be kept.
Date: 07/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Man In The Moon
This was really good. I really liked how you wrote in the part when Remus got bitten, it was really vivid. Only one mistake: you spelled 'afraid' wrong in the summary. Other than that, good job!
When All Hope Was Lost by junior_achievement
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Five different people attempt to cope with the events of the Final Battle. This is the DH chapter "The Flaw in the Plan" from the POV of five of our most beloved characters.
Date: 07/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was really good! I especially liked Ginny and Neville's parts, I think you wrote their perspective really well. It was a bit confusing trying to figure out who was who in the beginning of some sections; for example I thought Ginny was Ron at first, but if you wanted to be that way, I guess I can live with it. Again, good job!
An American Girl at Hogwarts by starkllr
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Jane Barnaby thought that moving from New York City to London, England when her father's job was tranferred was a big adjustment, but that was nothing compared to her shock when she received a letter delivered by an owl one summer morning...
Submitted for the August New Beginnings challenge by starkllr of Slytherin House.
Date: 07/07/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I had a few questions and comments:
Is it normal for there to be more than one witch or wizard in a muggle family?
And I am surprised that Flitwick became Headmaster, I would have expected it to be Mcgonagall, for she was deputy headmistress. Although, it is your story, write it the way you like.
Is there magical schools in the US? I always imagined the americans to go to Hogwarts.....but once again, your story.
I liked how Harry was the DADA teacher, although I guess I could have guessed that.
The part where Mr. Weasley shook their hands 'violently', as you said, confused me a bit. He seemed a little bit out of character, but it's fine if you don't change it, because he became more like his normal self when he was talking to Jane's father about the muggle things.
I found a typo in the second chapter. When you say, '. I heard him mutter something, I think it might have been “Beginner’s luck!†bfore going back to work with George.' You said bfore instead of before.
And in the third chapter: I'm pretty sure Impendimentia is a spell to slow down your enemies, not trip them.
Also, did you ever say what house Jane was in? Maybe I missed it.
Good job, I liked it a lot!
To Be Back by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Against his better judgment, Remus Lupin takes a teaching job at Hogwarts. And being back is not quite what he expected.
A submission to the Extra Credit prompt in the Autumn Challenge by solemnlyswear_x of Gryffindor.
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: To Be Back
I have always loved Remus and this story brought out his adult character really well! I liked the comparison between Lily and Hermione, I had never thought of that before. Great job!
Only Her, Always Her by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Severus Snape had been brewing potions since he was eleven, and had never found one he hated more than Amortentia.
When Severus finds Amorentia brewing in Slughorn's classroom, he thinks of someone he didn't need a potion to remember.
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: Only Her, Always Her
This was really good! I haven't read a lot of fics in Severus' perspective, but your summary got me interested!! Good job!!