hey, i'm sara, and i just adore harry potter! all seven books in the series are exquisite, and the fanfiction is generally pretty awesome too! some other favorite books of mine include: lord of the rings, pride and prejudice, wheel of time series, any books by shannon hale, terry pratchett, gerald morris or l.a. meyer, and many others that i'm inconveniently forgetting...
so, now that you know a little bit more about moi, i'll end by saying this little tid-bit: i love to read, i love to write and i love reviews. the three "r's". so how about i write, and you guys read and review, yes? great! oh, but please don't get angry at the three-month long gaps in between updates...
Severus Snape has ambitions to rise above his humble beginnings. Eris Greyback has a family debt to repay. Their romance is a more complicated brew than the trickiest of potions. SSEG, LEJP. The sequel, The Potions Master's Apprentice, is also complete.
*Winner of the 2007 QSQ Award for Best Marauder Era Story*
wow, great chapter! i love the action of that last bit, as well as the lovely faeries! also, when eris visits spinner's end, i feel that you really captured the feelings of severus and eilieen really well. good job, i can't wait for the enxt chapter!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the action, since chaps will be action-packed here on out- lot to do in a only a couple more chaps! I hope to have the first chap of the sequel in before the queue closes, so wish me luck editing quickly! ^_^
awww, sweet! very good job, i really enjoyed eris' memories and her thoughts on muggles. also, her advice to severus on what to do in front of voldemort was good. all in all, very nice chapter!
Author's Response: Merci! Chapter 18 is *Voldemort* so Severus will be putting that advice to good use! :D
this was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! i loved the plot--it's romantic and complicated, realistic and fun. you make all the characters real and yet likeable too, and i love the ending line--it reminds me of the goblet of fire movie, when harry and moody are talking about the dragons, and harry says, i'm not allowed a broom, and moody replies, you're allowed a wand. great job, i can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: I can\'t wait to be able to post the sequel, :D, so thanks for sharing my eagerness! I didn\'t remember that line, but those kind of responses resonate, don\'t they? Thank you for reading, and especially for looking forward to the next story!
this is awesome! i love how much hermione doesn't want herself to like draco, you portray that really well. great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
wow! this is excellent, very mysterious and exciting! and your writing stlye is great, really descriptive and, although there are a few odd mistakes (when hermione tells harry to "take care of you" instead of "take care of yourself"), it's really very well written. great job, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Thank you for pointing out the mistake, it\'s a French-related one (I am NOT surprised...); I\'ll correct it. As for the next chapter... it\'s already up, so you won\'t have to wait for too long. Normally :)
oh my god!!!!! you cannot just leave off like that! we need to know what happens, and we need it now! please. anyway, i disagree with you that this is an insipid chapter, i liked it very much. and i do hpe very much that ron doesn't die. you would never kill off ron, would you? ::puppy dog eyes:: thanks, this was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Would I kill off Ron?... Aaaah... (*looks mysterious*). I\'m not telling yet. I\'m happy you disagree with me -- as weird as it sounds! -- and... well, you\'re welcome. Thanks for the nice review, and I\'ll try to update soon!
this was great! very unexpected and very creatiive. it's all very mysterious and very well written. this is a great story! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll try to...
wow! this is really great! i love the long chapters, and the plot is interesting and mysterious! i feel so badly for harry, and i really want to know why he's so insensitive! couldn't you just give me a tiny clue? *insert puppy dog eyes* anyway, this is very imporessive, not to mention the fact that english isn't your first language! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! That\'s a lot of compliments here... I\'m afraid I can\'t give you any clue, even tiny, because the explanation is so... weird... and unheard of, that it would take two pages to explain it properly, and even then...
Ah, well. It\'ll be revealed little by little, and hopefully it won\'t be confusing. Have you never noticed how something very clear in your head becomes awfully muddled once you\'ve written it? But it should be fine... I\'ve been thinking about that story for too long for messing it up.
Next chapter should be submitted in about a week...
WHO IS IT?????????????
Author's Response: Wait for Part 6!
Really funny. I like it a lot. Love the battleship scene too.
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
well, i think it's an interesting start! you could try to be a bit more descriptive and have better flowing sentences, but otherwise it's well written. i like the idea so far. i can't wait to see more!
Well this is a bit pointless and pointless can be good, and this is one of those cases. A VERY good job! Nice writing and a good plot too. I really liked proffesor Flitwick!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed Flitwick. I am also happy that you think I did a good job. *blushes*.
HermyRox12
Well this is a bit pointless and pointless can be good, and this is one of those cases. A VERY good job! Nice writing and a good plot too. I really liked proffesor Flitwick!
Author's Response: This seems familier. Hmmm...
HermyRox12
awwww, this makes me sad for ron! but it makes me happy for harry and hermy! yay! this was really a great one-shot, good job!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!
this was great! not very funny, but clever and nice. great job, i can't wait to see more of your writing!
this was great! not very funny, but clever and nice. great job, i can't wait to see more of your writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for writing. I should have some others posted in other categories eventually. (My niece/editor is getting impatient, so I must keep writing!)
-Daisy
very good! i love the light and witty banter that keeps the letters interesting, you have to continue with this! great job, 10/10
haha! oh, that was a great ending! this was a clever and funny story from the start, and very well written. i love the letter format, too. great job1
this is a good start! you established the characters really well, and it's very well written. great job, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: yay!
Within the Marauder band of Merry Men, Sirius is the dashing Will Scarlet. Seventh year, his goal is not to rob the rich, but to help poor Robin woo Maid Lily, avoid sermons from Friar Moony, aid a rat in need, and win the love of a fair lady.
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Non Canon.
*Chapter 30 is 'To Be Loved'*
haha! this is great! it's really well written and funny. good job! i can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work. (i'm just miss happy-go-lucky today, aren't i?)
Author's Response: Happy-go-lucky is a good thing! You lift people\'s spirits and make them smile. You rock! :D