okay, i read this story the other night and i didn't have the chance to review, so here it goes:: HAHAHAHAHA! i was on the ground laughing. Well, not really, but you get it! lol! this story is so funny! update, asap!!
Wow. It took me two days to read the first chapter. I'll review more! Great job!
Author's Response: Lol! You got there in the end, though. That's what matters. =)
Yay! I hope you do. =)
Thanks!
Crap, my first fic sucked! This rocks!!! I love it, I feel her pain...actually it's because my cat died, but I still had to grieve and...well our cat didn't help with our income. Okay, on with the review: I really really liked it!! And the best part is, it's only the first chapter, so I still get to read more!! And you thought this one (pardon the pun) was short? The first chapter of my first story was only 550 words!!! It took me about ten chapters to get to 1000!! So, I'll keep reading! And I'll review again!!! Great job! *10*
Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm sorry about your cat! I really would love a cat *sigh*-my dad's allergic though.
Well, I've seen larger chapters, so to me it was short. The next few ones will be so much larger it won't even be funny. I'm so glad you liked it- Especially since I'm beginning to hate my first two chapters!!
Okay...getting better! How did you write such a good fic as it being your first?! Good lord, mine sucked!! This is awesome, and I just can't help but put you on my favorites so I can see when Hermione falls in love with Draco and all! Great job, keep it up!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wrote a lot before I started this so I guess that might be why it is a completely crappy story ^_^. You added me to favorites? *is touched* Awwww...*hugs*. I seriously am working on chapter three this time and should have it betaed soon and then- poof! Finally I will have updated!
Okay, I have not read your story (in which I will one day) but, I'm working on my own Harry/OC story. Does it get good reads? Do you like writing this story? Do you think it does better than other stories? I just need to know this before I post my story! Thanks!
Author's Response: Well, you should, but thats beyond the point. Oh, you are? Well good luck with it. It gets good reads depending on when you post it and who you have read it, or who reads it. Yes, I enjoy writing this story. If I didn't then why would I continue writing? Non, I don't think it sounds better than the other stories because I haven't read them all yet, which is on my to do list.Ok, you're welcome.
btw, don't email me the answers. tell me via respond.
Author's Response: I have already answered so no worries.
hmm, that was an interesting story! very good, you're a good writer! but, add more humor, it does lack in the humor for being a humor story...but it was very good, i really like it! thanks for all those wonderful reviews you've left me! keep up the good work!
Authors Note Okay, guys. This story is going to take some time to update! I need to write a few more chapters before I update it. I've already written the last chapter, but I've started heading a different direction than where it ends. So, that means I just need to tweak the last chapter, and then it'll be fine. But, please keep reviewing, and reading! I'd really appreciate it.
okay, the reason i have not updated in forever is:: 1) I've been sick. 2) I am soooooooo stuck on what to do next. 3) I have writers block. I probably have the worse writers block known to man kind. I would appreciate it if you all would still read, AND review. For some reason this story doesn't catch people's attention. I think it's pretty cool, but I'm the author I should think that. So, I think that you all should still read and review! C'mon my people! Help me get to 100 reviews!!!!
Author's Response: how pathetic am i? reviewing my own story. listen, all i ask for is a few good reviews. *gives puppy dog eyes* pwease? for me?
holy cow! that was so funny! very random! i love Sirius' own language! Hai I do! lol!!! favorites!!!!!!!!!!
wow. just, wow. really good for your first fic! i'm sorta jealous...my fic isn't this good! you have such good discription, and detail. that was awesome! go on and read my fic (Harry Potter and the True, but Unwanted Prophecy.). your writing style matches those of JKR and Tolkien. good job! you should go pro! lol! keep up the great work! you're going on my faves!! can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much, its the inspiration from people such as you that keep me writing, i haven't updated lately because i'm on christmas holiday and being in 11th grade means i take whatever leisure i can get, but as soon as school starts, i will start writing again, thank you so much though.
yet another great chapter from the noble Xain. *bows before you*. this is really great, I can see you're trying to make it as much like the real book as possible. so am I, but I suck at it....your story is definitly one to make mental notes whilst reading it, i think the detail is great! i love how you aren't afraid to bring out emotions. bravo! bravo! lol! *sits and waits anxiously for an update*
Author's Response: sorry about the wait, but I'm so glad that someone noticed that i tried to make it sound as if JKR was writing it, I read the books over and over to try and match her style, like little details that you only notice after reading the books about 20 times, I think I'm on my 24th time around lol. I'm such a loser, but thanks again.
Hey, man, don't call yourself a loser. No one is a loser unless they make themselves that way. So, if I can say you're a great writer, and Shantell can say that also, they you are most likely cooler than most.
Author's Response: thanks
guess what miss lady? your instructions didn't work! you wanna know why? because i couldn't see them!!!!!! come to my story and tell me, my new one and read it too!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm gonna bug you forever until you read my stories!!!!!!!! grrrr!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, I thought it came out! Well I'll come over there and tell you then! Sorry...I'll help with the reviews too! lol Peace Out!!
Um, besides Hoku, and any other Hawaiin name, what would you like to be called? They said that Hoku seemed like a Mary Sue (I know, I wanted to respond back saying: But her name is Hoku, not Mary Sue.) So, just something that would make it seem more believable. Oh, and your time on my fic is short lived.....
Author's Response: You can look at my Bio, and pick any name that you want. Besides Georgina! lol. I don't like that name...he he he. Well don't worry about my name being a Mary Sue! lol. Oh, well I'm sad to see my character leave. lol. Hey, go read my one shot fic! lol Its finally up! Peace Out!!
Okay, my newest story is up. It's called...dun dun DUN!!!!!! Hogwarts Sweethearts - An Epilouge!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH! You have to read it!!!!!!!!!! I think it's cute! Okay...read it!!
Author's Response: Wow, you wrote another one...sheesh woman, try and finish some first before writing new ones. lol. I'll go and take a look then. Peace Out!!
okay, the newest chapter of HPTBUP is up!! you havn't read it yet!! oh, and i found a song, it's a Gretchen Wilson song. Thanks!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks. I'll go and check it out when I have time! And you found the song, cool...can't wait to read it. Never heard of that group before, so it should be interesting!! Peace Out!!
Guess what? I have 96 reviews on HS due to putting a bribe in my bio!! And suggesting people read it before WLTYWB. FL has a new chapter. I just wrote the most important chapter of WLTYWB! I'm not going to tell you what it is. But it's going to be my best chapter out of any of my stories yet!! It's going to be awesome and boost my reviews!!! Well, check it out when you can, bye!!
Author's Response: Wow...that is awesome! I'm going to go and read all your stuff. I've been totally busy, updated my chapter...he he he, and I've helped with other people's stories. I've decided to make a one shot story for fun...that's also been talking time away from me reading. So I'm totally on it, tomorrow I'll do it! I promise!! Peace Out!!
Ha ha...go on a date...funny....
Author's Response: Yes, go on a date. You have a lot more time than I do...and you're home school. So just make your guy take you to eat pizza and go watch a movie somewhere that's not HP related and have fun! lol. Peace Out!!
you know, in a few days time i'm gonna have 200 reviews. people love my story! yay! i don't know why, actually, it was going to be like all my other humor fics, only one chapter. but, people loved it, so i had to go on! lol! well, i have to go ask QueenJKP something, so, bye!
Author's Response: You know...in a few days...I'm going to have 200 also! lol. I know that people love your story...its funny! lol. Okay...you can go and ask her something! lol. Peace Out!!