OO oo! Can I help you and Honeydude pulling the mods ears off? With WLTYWB, they like, rejected the 8th chapter. I don't know why. But it just wasn't there!!! Yes, it's a very boring chapter, but it's also sweet. Someone doesn't like me, I know it...*Shifts eyes like a psycho person* They'll never find me, I'll show them for rejecting my chapters!!! *While mod is reading chapter, 'magically' appears behind them and hits 'accept'* Ha Ha Ha!!!!!
Author's Response: lol! The mods are getting on my nerves! I wait for 5 long days for tham to approve my chapter and then I get an Email saying that It was rejected for one little accidental speling error!!!!!!!!! I hate them!!! Now just for saying that, I bet they will reject my next submission!
Ha-ha. That was funny, can't wait to read more! I like it when Harry was screaming, "It's back! It's back!" For some reason I can picture him doing that...hee hee!
Author's Response: Thanks! lol, I like that part too. Well, I guess that's obviouse, if I didn't like it I wouldn't have wrote it.
I was in there! Then, I have a plan to get you more reviewers! I'll put YOU in MY story! It'll be funny! HEHEHEEH! Oh, and, how many shine sprites do you have to get? I have 20 now, and i didn't know. Oh, and, can you read my romance story? Hogwarts Sweethearts? I'm trying to boost it's reviews! Then, when you're done with that, can you read my other semi sequel to HS, What Light Through Yonder Window Breaks? lol! I have done, sooooooo much for you! Please do this for me! And, when Harry said he hated my story, i thought it was going to be because I made him stupid! lol! bye!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I am honored that you are putting me in your story! Thank you soooo much! I believe you need 50 shine sprites to fight Bowser. I would love to read your romance story! I will as soon as I can! Oh, and can you read my cousin's humor story, Harry's childhood? I originally did have Harry hate it becouse you made him stupid! Thanx! Bye!
guess what I just bought?! Super Mario Sunshine! I know I said I had it before, but I borrowed it from my cousin, this story made me want to get it again! I love this story! Update soon! I'm off to write the ninth chapter!! Bye!
Author's Response: lol! Thanks. I finished writing the next chapter and I am about to post it. I can't wait to read the next chapter of your story! Bye!
i agree with your cousin! lol! okay, i submitted the next chapter of my mall story, i only did it fearing the death of one of my best reviewers "Raving Writer", so now you can update your story! if you know how to hack then you can see it before everyone else, if you don't then ask "Psychofreak" she told me how to do it. anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! i told Goy to bug off! woo!
Author's Response: Yes, I read your his reviews and your responces, along with the review for the other story that he said was wierd. You go girl! lol. I will update my story now, but I must warn you that I had a severe case of writer's block when I wrote it, so it is a bit random and very strange. I will find out how to hack. can't wait to read the next chapter!
i love that! 7 years into the future! hahaha! i cannot wait to see Ron obbsessed with the gamecube! i love my gamecube, and am often found in the middle of the night playing Mario sunshine! 1000 stars! i love it!!!!! i really liked the, "I'm Sirius, I mean serious!" That was so funny! read my humor stories if you want, you're going on my faves!!!
Author's Response: OMIGOSH, THANK YOU SO MUCH! You gave me a better review than my cousin! I am truly honored that you are putting my on your faves! I can totally relate to being found in the middle of the night playing game cube! It is ironic that you said you can't wait to see Ron obsessed with the Game Cube becouse the next chapter is called- well, you'll see. I like the Sirius/seriouse joke too. I will be sure to read your humor stories. Please keep reading and reviewing!
100!!!!!!!! woo!!! That was such a funny chapter! "He's not exactly a crimnal mastermind, is he?" i was rolling on that one! I defeated the mecha-bowser! yay! and the strange gofer dude! he was easy! lol! can't wait to read more!!
Hey, that's just like my ending to one of my chapters! But, I really like this story, sorry I haven't been reviewing, but I couldn't stop reading! This one I just had to coment on! lol! They seem so cute together....Isn't that kind of risky, you know, it's in Ron's bed/house I know they are engaged, but, it just seems funny! Great job!
Listen, I was thinking about it and I would feel much better if you actually thanked me in like, your summary or something for the inspiration for this story. I would feel better considering most of my one of a kind ideas that I worked hard on are now in this story, and I don't mind, because yes you did ask me before you wrote this story, and it is really good, it's just Hogwarts Sweethearts is my baby and I wrote it and came up with all the ideas off the top of my head, so I'd really appreciate this if you'd think about doing this. I am the rightful owner of HS anyway, so, this is all I ask. Hey, I could have been real mean and called you all sorts of names and demand you delete this story, but I wasn't about to do that, I'm nice. Great story, and I can't wait to read more, but I do seem to get deja vu every chapter I read, I wonder why......?
Hmm, I like it, but it is an awful lot like my story. That's fine, but it's odd. I love it still, but just pretty much the same. Great Job!
No, no, no dear. You made it all wrong! Okay, how about this: You don't, I repeat do not find out what you're having on the very first visit to the doctor. Once a month they go to the doctor, okay? And my cousin got pregnant in August, she just found out what it's going to be in late December. Okay? That's the only flaw. You used my idea of the changing paint. Funny. Can't wait to read more!!
Could I ask for a quick favor? Yes, another one. But, I'm trying to get Hogwarts Sweethearts up to 100 reviews, and I've even put a little bribe in my bio, so could you help me? It's okay, if you don't, but just think you may not have this story without mine!
Cute! That reminds me of my cat, she's a runt, and very fat so she ran and hit the side of the couch and fell down! It was funny! lol! Great job!
Nothing really taken from my story...Except for the kitten as a gift. And you so totally used the Oliver James thing because of the hot actor from Raise Your Voice, didn't you? lol! Really good chapter...Kind of short though.
Author's Response: Actually, I never have seen that movie! I got it from James & Oliver Phelps!! Lol, well, thanks so much for the review!!
i like the plot! very good! keep it up! oh and don't listen to Goy, he's got something very wrong with him. if i were you i'd ignore his reviews. keep up the good work! add more description and stuff! bye!
Author's Response: Thanks for the tips!!! I just sent in the next chapter today!!! CAn't wait for your story to be updated!! Thanks again!
Awe, cute. Very short though. Maybe try and make everything a tad longer...Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, I know it's short, I'm trying to type more!
Oh, well Oliver James was also in What a Girl Wants. He's a hot British actor...*Starts drooling* To bad he's like, 26......
it's getting good, but add more detail and description. try and get over 1000 words! bye!
okay, i know this is your first ff and all, but i didn't know that dinner lasted three minutes. like what color are Layla's eyes? how's her hair fixed? this chapter was too short! and remember that when you abbreviate "you are" it should be "You're" just a bit of advice! great chapter! i really like this story! but make them longer! it's so short, it's crazy! and just remember that no one else can tell you when to update, don't feel rushed, take your time, and you'll have 1000 words in no time! bye!
Author's Response: Ok! Thanks, but in the first chapter it said what color her eyes were. Their dark brown!!! But any who i'll try to make it longer!!! Most of my chapters in the sequel has longer chapters! I sometimes just run outta ideeas!
good story! cracks me up, you're only eleven but yet you're writing "R" rated stories...hmm...read my drk/angsty fic! (Harry Potter and the True, but Unwanted Prophecy)
Author's Response: How did you know I was eleven? Anyways, read my new story, Harry Potter and the Charnicols of Voldemort! But I'll read your story!