Kay, well, the name's A so you should call me that. I've got a lot of fics/ficlets and such and those that I'm too lazy to post on here are either on my writing journal (link above) or on Marauders-Map Fanfiction. At the moment, I've only got three of my 2938740928734923 ficlets on here, but I'll be adding the others at some point, as well as my full-length fic, Moonshadow, once I get back in the swing of actually writing it.
Go ahead and contact me if you want a new friend thing. But you should know some shizz.
I am a Harry/Hermione shipper and I will be forever, so don't even start with me.
I hate Ron. He should die.
Ginny-Sue is a piece of poo. That rhymes!
I have an obsession with Remus, but I'm not a freak newb who's all, "lyke omg remus iz MINE!!!!!"
Yeah. Unless you want me to eat your brain, you should probably not argue with me on those things. But if you don't I'll love you forever and we can go have lovely snogfests and be happy and squee.
That was absolutely brilliant. The style of writing was great, and it was just so moving! Keep up the good work!
Now, I've only read chapter one, but I still have a few things to say. First off, this is NOT intended to be a flame 'tall. It is beyond me as to why anyone would flame something, honestly. So please take nothing I say the worng way, but merely into consideration. Now, for the real review. As I said, I've only finished chapter one (I've gotta go so I can't read the rest right now) but it's not very... intriguing? In-character? Both. I don't know, it just seemed... odd. It sort of made me want to read on, but then it sort of didn't. I think I mainly want to so as to see what's in Lily's diary! Anywhen, the characters were just... far too out of character for my liking. Harry, though trying to put on a show, as it seems, was the oddest of the bunch. You should've made it a little clearer in saying that he was merely faking to get away to his bedroom with the diary. Vernon also seemed a bit OOC. He was exceptionally kind to Harry, even managing to call him Harry at the dinner table! Even when Vernon is in a good mood, he doesn't call Harry by his first name--it's always "Boy" or "Potter." The writing itself is not the best I have seen, but it's totally not the worst. You could use a bit of work in the area of the writing, but not much. After all, everyone has their own style or writing. :) Nevertheless, I'm still adding this to my favourite stories, so as to read up. Please take my words into consideration! Thanks for the story (and for listening)!
Not bad, totally not bad. But it does seem a bit odd about Hermione's "change" (the cliche one...) and all of that... And Harry seems a bit... odd, as well. I don't know if he'd suddenly realize any feelings for anyone; often times they must be built up. But keep writing! Love ya!
Jhjsadhkasd. You make me speechless. (And that's saying something.)