Hey, Amy! I love you second chapter. (Especially since you mentioned Bellatrix in it :-)) You are a talented and unique writer. Congrats! Take a ten!
Author's Response: *Sobs tears of joy ... sort of* Thank you! You're great too, Lala! Bellatrix is growing on me thanks to you! Apart from the whole evil thing where she kills Sirius, the person whom this story is based upon. But hey. Thanks for reviewing!
Awesome!! Maybe Sirius will give Lily some Amortentia or something to get things started and take it off later? I know LaLa's not really relevant to the plot anymore but maybe, given her expertise in manipulating people to get together, she could help out or something. I am soo curious to see what happens! Update soon! ~LaLa (the real one)
Author's Response: These are all reasonable suggestions ... but is Sirius a reasonable kind of guy? Am I the kind of author to write something that actually makes sense? Maybe ... maybe not. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Hey, it is me again. I couldn't help but rereading your second chapter for the billionth time!!! It is so amazing. I cannot wait for the third chapter, and I must say,you get chapters up fast. It takes me a very long time to write my chapters because I'm so critical of them. Ch 2 of mine is in queue, and I only started Ch3. I must have redone the first few paragraphs five times already. Anyway, I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT IS AWESOME,AMY! KEEP WRITITNG!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay for LaLa! Thanks, and by the way, if you're reading this anyone at all, go read ForbiddenLove's fic! It's great! Review it too!
Yay Amy! After all your hard work it has finally been accepted!!! That's awesome! I loved Sirius and the Sorting Hat! Can I get a thought in edgeways? Loved it! Keep it up! ~LaLa
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the reivew, get well soon LaLa!
YAY! This has to be about Bellatrix! *does happy dance* YAY! for Bellatrix writers... YAY! for the mystery of her hidden feelings... YAY! for Rodolphus!!! THIS ROX MY SOCKS! Bellatrix...Bellatrix... (as you can tell she my favorite character!) YAY!!!!! 100000000000000000000000000/10
In my mind, I think it was about...mm... this is tricky... I'll take a guess- a DE murdering someone??? I'm probably wrong. Anyway, I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS! IT ACTUALLY RYHMES! THIS IS LIKE THE FIRST ONE OF THOSE I'VE READ (I can't ryhme myself) IT WAS ABOUT DEATH EATERS YAY! I LOVED THIS!
Author's Response: Yay. =D thankkkksssss
That was awesome. I also believe that the lucius/narcissa marriage is rocky (that's what you were trying to point out in one of the verses, right?), and I loved the inherited eyes part.
Ooo, awesome. I used to be a Hr/R shipper, but now that JK actually announced that Hermione and Ron are actually gonna get together, it's way too overrated. Dr/Hr won't happen so it's my new fave (I know that's kind of weired). Anyway, awesome poem. Great job. And it's ten points for the Hermione/Draco poet...
Author's Response: Thanks. I completely understand, although anything is possible, that\'s what fandom is for. Yay for underrated pairings.
"Aside from blood, he didn't believe there was anything left in the world that was truly pure, but Lucius lifted his glass anyway."
After the betrothal dinner, Malfoy's tete a tete with Narcissa transforms a marital arrangement into something more satisfying.
Okay! Great story... Now here's how Rodolphus really looks:
Just kidding! While I imagine him quite differently as you portrayed, I will not bore you with my fanatical "hott Rodolphus" theory.
Anyway, awesome story! Unique.. original... has Bella in it... What more can you ask for?
P.S BELLATRIX ROCKS!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to go back and double check, lol, but other than saying he had a "dark moustache" and "black gaze" his looks were left up to the imagination. Do you think he looks more like Lucius/Draco? Pale and perfect, :D? I'm more the 'wants to punch Bella in the face' type, but she is quite a vivid character! Thanks again for enjoying the story! ^_^
Well, actually I kind of imagine Rodolphus as being light-skinned but not pale (not Lucius/Draco) with wet, black hair. Macho... really hott! Anyway... Bye!
Author's Response: Okay, now I'm going to have to do a search and see if you wrote a story- you should! :D
WOW! This was great! My favorite chapter. All the flasbacks were amazing. However, i don't think italicizing them was a good idea. Since you already wrote -Flashback- there's no need for it. It makes the story easier to read if it's in regular print. Consider changing that. I'm really glad you updated. I want to know more about Bella's childhood but I guess that's another story. This is so exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next! You portrayed Bellatrix so well. I have my own fic that centers around Bellatrix and I don't think I did half as good a job with her as you did. This was my favorite chapter yet and I know the next one will be fantastical too :-). Keep writing... PLEASE!
Author's Response: I LOVE reviews like this! It\'s an author\'s dream to get such a good review, so thanks for making my day! Thanks for the advice about the flashback!
oh!! This is very good! I knew he'd try Rodolphus... “I’m not giving you any information, and I hope my wife kills you,” answered Lestrange in a raspy voice. Yay! He didn't betray his wife!!! I hoped he wouldn't. And I loved how you had Harry saving Draco, and how Harry put Lucius in his own place using Narcissa instead of Ginny in the situation. And the "Think of Draco" part was very good. Yes, I love the way this is going!!! Spectacular!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
ooooo! Read all the chapters! That was really good! Keep going! By the way, if I might just make a guess, is it Rodolphus Harry's going to meet in Azkaban? Is he going to squeal on Bellatrix...Oooo! So interesting! YAY! I'm putting this is my favorites! 10/10
Author's Response: I\'m in heaven with the words you gave me! I am soo glad you have enjoyed it so far! As an author, you LOVE when your readers are totally into your story! So I am sooo HAPPY! ( Okay, I\'ll stop rambling and get on with it...LOL) Harry\'s Azkaban visit will be very interesting (I think at least) *wink wink*
NO! NO! NO! Bella loves Rodolphus!!! Nothing can break them up! NOTHING! Anyway, now that I'm over my rant, that was a very good piece of writing. I especially liked the ending conversation between Rodolphus and Rabastan. (Bella and Rodolphus were made for each other) BELLA AND RODOLPHUS TOGETHER FOREVER! I know I'm a little fanatical about that....
Author's Response: Wait for chapter two-- it's got some more Bella/Voldie, but it ends up Bella/Rodolphus. I swear. Thanks for reviewing.
Cheers,
MadMar
Hey, I'm back. I can't believe that more people haven't reviewed!!! This is an awesome story. Now I have to go yell at someone!!! It makes me angry to see a fic being neglected! Well, 10/10!
BTW, if i'm getting annoying (which i tend to be) I can stop reviewing.
Author's Response: Forbidden Love, I strongly advise you to stop reviewing with outrage that others haven't reviewed; the mods would be angry if they knew. It's considered spam. Although, I did appreciate your first reviews, this third one is a bit much. And there's no need to yell at anyone. If they don't read my story, I don't really mind. Besides, it's an author's privilage to do the advertising. ;)
I am so happy to hear that!! Yay for Rodolphus/Bellatrix fics. I have one too if you'd like to read it. There are two chapters already up, and I will be back to read your ch 2! RODOLPHUS AND BELLATRIX TOGETHER FOREVER!
Author's Response: I\'ll be looking for/at yours soon. Bellatrix/Rodolphus intrigues me too. I\'m thinking of writing Rodolphus\' reasoning for staying with Bellatrix. Thanks for the review. -MadMar
Is it done? I hope not! I need to read more of the Bella/Rodolphus stuff! I loved the ending! Loved it! It is a work of art. More beautiful than the Mona Lisa! Harmony is created when there is love between BELLATRIX AND RODOLPHUS! 10101010!
Good bye, and long live the Dark Lord!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was beautiful-- my friends said it was too "Fluffy". Ah well, better to bring a smile to someone's face, right?
Wow! Another great piece of writing. I love how the whole story is a letter. Again, very original. Draco's voice simply shines through the whole thing. Before this, I had never really shown much interest in Ginny/Draco, but now I'm in love. You are an extremely gifted writer, and I mean that!!! 10/10
by the way, I loved the last line "May it never be sent, just for you..." AWESOME!
Hey, it's me, author of that poem you reviewed. Congradulations on making it to the top of the page *scowls as she remembers how she was here once* ! This was really good, and you deserve to be up here!!! If you like to READ other pairing fics, I also have one if you want to R&R. Just clicko on my namo. Anyway, back to your story. You have a talent for writing; that's supremely evident. The way the writing flowed so soomthly from one paragraph to the next amazed me. Fluency is my ultimate weakness, and I think it's the most difficult thing in the universe! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment! I'll check out that story!
Author's Response: Wait a minute.... my fic being at the top of the page is a good thing? i neva thought it was a bad thing, but i also didnt think it was a good thing. i thought it just had to do with the way they set up the page... Well, i guess we both have things the other has. i want ur poetry ability and u want my fluency ability.... lol