Umm..are you sure this is Hermione/Draco fic? It doesn't seem like it because you never mentioned the characters except one who was playing Draco Malfoy. And if it's not Hermione/Draco story, then i think you should change the category. You're story is pretty complicated, good grammar though. I think you ought to add who's going to play who. Anyway, update soon so i could know what's this story is all about.

Author's Response: I know I needed to move it but then they closed the site and I was unable to. But don't worry I moved it.

WOW...i just finished watching the LOTF movie on my Civics class and another one from you! I haven't read the book..but wow...i really enjoyed the movie..Ralph is cute...similar to Harry's apperance..black hair..and Jack compare to Draco's image except the atittude! And omg..i can't believe Jack's groups killed Piggy and the other guy! Oh my god what am i talking about? Lol..i was always thinking about your story while i was wtaching the movie. lol..just wanted to say that i enjoy your fic...you're one of the greatest writers i've ever know...well you should know that by now;). Lol..please update soon!

I must admit that you're plot is very good...but your grammar is really bad...no offense, but you need a BETA or another word, an editor. I htink it'll improve your story and it'll sound better than it is right now...am i guessing English isn't your first language? Well, if you need someone to check over your work, i'll be glad to help.

Wow...pretty good plot. It seemed fast and OOC but all in one, it's very good. UPDATE soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on 3 right now.

Okay well i guess it didn't work...well it did, but it didn't show the code. Lol..lemme try that one more time: < i > THE WORD < / i > Note: there's suppose to be linked together, no single-spaced because if i linked them together, it will show the same thing i did on my last review. And if you still don't understand, it shows all the italics, bold, underline codes on the 'Add Chapter' page on the right side. You'll see!

Author's Response: oh my gosh, thank you so much, you do not know how much you have helped me!

I can really see their scenes! I've read Romeo and Juliet from my first year in highschool...i can't wait!!

Hmm..not bad for a starter. But you ought to read the books more carefully..i mean the fifth book. You got to decide which side of the family member Diane is from...kinda agree with dracolover. Diane could've been Tonks' mother, but then why would Diane wanted to know more about muggles if her husband was a muggle already? To be honest, you could've thought about your story more before you started. OR, you could've asked someone to help you fix your story before you posted it. And mind you, you should look for someone who knows the books at the back of their hands so you don't have to struggle with writing. That fact i don't get is that Lucius and Narcissa allowed him to be spending time with his Aunt who adores muggles. I mean there will be no way Draco's parents would let him live near muggles even though he's staying with his aunt. Just incase you were wondering, the Malfoys doesn't deal with any family members who have in contacts with muggles or who likes muggles; they'd kick him/her out. You know the Malfoy's reputation, they're pure-blood and loathes muggle-borns and muggles. Anyway, be descriptive too next time! But all in the same, the plot is good=)

Author's Response: I've thought about changing it to an all witch/wizard community, but then Hermione's parents couldn't be there... so I'm not sure... I thought about changing it to having Draco's parents not know that Diane likes muggles... but I don't think that would work either... I'll come up with someting... anyway, thanks for your review!