A Canadian 16-year-old wondering whether she's any good at writing, and waiting impatiently for the HBP ON JULY 16!!
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Wow; you are an awesome writer!! So, is that the end?? Not saying it wouldn't be a good ending, but there's definately room for more, and definately a following to enjoy it!
Like your story! Even though it's a bit, er, graphic, it's well-written and entertaining. Please write more soon! (But don't make Hermione pregnant!)
That was a really cute chapter! I don't think she forgave Severus too easily; nobody wants to prolong a fight when understanding has been reached..
Only 3 chapters left?? Oh no! I can't wait!
I hope you start another story afterwards!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad everyone has thought the same way. I do actually have two really short stories which are a contiuation of this one, and I'm working on a longer sequel as well.
Hahaha... Ron... You need to add in a bit where we actually see Ron, and how righteously pissed he is, but how he has to forget about it, in the face of a marriage and a baby... :-)
Can't wait for the last!
Author's Response: Well, I didn't want to bog the chapter up with Ron's reaction. But suffice to say that Ron and Hermione's relationship will never be the same. I'm posting the final chapter on Monday. I hope you enjoy it.
I like your story! You've set up a really great plot!
But, I don't want to be mean or complain, but lately the quality of the writing has gone down a bit. It's more intriguing than ever, plot-wise, but judging from the earlier chapters, you can write it much more convincingly!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm not sure what to tell you about the quality of writing going down. I think while writing it I was pretty consistant. But, maybe you see something I don't. I hope you continue to enjoy this.
Wow! Still loving your story, but what a cliff-hanger! (Thanks for the assurance of a happy ending, though.) I think that Severus took it pretty well, there (except that he followed her in the first place). What I would work on is trying to make the instance of Ron actually saying that more believable.
I'm already waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Raz, thanks for the feedback. I had a hard time with that particular scene. I saw it one way in my head, but just was never really happy with the way it came out in words. I'm glad you understood the gist of it though. I'll have another chapter uploaded this evening.
Great story; lots of potential! Please update!
"I mean, when Draco Malfoy walked in the room styling his hair with gel like in first and second year, you practically hear the tune playing in his head. Feelin Hot Hot Hot... my God." This actually made me laugh out loud! For several minutes. Anyway, nice story! Cute & frivilous (sp?); lots of fun!
Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.
RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.
I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!
Can't find this chapter!! There's something wrong with the site... It makes me angry. You need to e-mail them & get it fixed!
I want to read it! Your story is a little graphic, but I like it so far..
Author's Response: I have it fixed...
You have lots of reviews now; please update!! I really like your story; I've been following it even though I'm not a Hr/R shipper.
P.S. Go Vegetarianism!! (Unless you're a vegan... or a squash... ?)
Author's Response: Thank you. I've been a vegitarian for two years. I dont eat mammals or anything that flies but i eat seafood on occasion.
*cackles* Sirius is way OOC, but I like it. Sort of 'cartoony'... I'm just dying to find out why Sirius has such a hair thing...
Hi! Cute story! You're a really good writer, but --with this story, atleast; don't know if you've got any others yet-- it seemed like you were just explaining the circumstances, and then it was over! Therefore, I petition for sequel! ;-)
Excellent! *applauds* OOC, but still really funny and entertaining.
Like the story so far; you're a talented writer!
But I think you should change the title (I will be very sad if this story turns out to be all about sex; reading about it gets boring after a while...)
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. But it's not. If you read my response to the other reviews, it just explains why. In a few later chapters though, I'm going to show entries of Hermione's diary, and it's going to follow the certain... issues... between her and Malfoy among other things... shh! Don't want to give anything away!
Glad you're continuing the story! I like the "Raven & Kat" thing, it was a good idea.
Just one complaint: does Pansy HAVE to stay??
^_^
Author's Response: LOL, aw come on, you don't think Harry redeemed her? As you can tell, I have a penchant for odd relationships. She's not really around much, but she isn't going to be a jerk when she does show up. I've got one more one chapter story, then I'll begin posting the longer sequel. Thanks for reading.