that was a great chapter!!!!! i loved it so much! i'm gunna check out all ur other stories also cuz ur an amazing writer! :)
that's a great idea for them to get to be friends again! my compliments :)
this a great story! especially for your 1st fic. wow, i'm impressed (not that that's saying much) :)
i luv this chapter! i put this story on my favorites list!!!!! i luved how lily asked sirius out! ok, she sed "as friends", but we all know that it's never just as friends. lol. :)
o my goodness, this story is very unique, in a good way i assure u! u really don't c james and sirius fight, and it's really weerd now that they r! i luv this story!!!! off 2 read the next chapter!!
graet chapter, vey funny. update soon. sorry 4 the uncomplete sentences, but then i'd feel like i was in school. ;)
wow, this is great!!! i'm sorry that the 2nd ch. got rejected cuz now i'll have 2 wait 2 c wut happens! i LOVE this story, so i give it a 10!!!!!
great story! it's very funny, update soon!!!!!!
this is a really good story! i hate cliffies though. of course, i'm a major hipocrit (or however you spell it) because i use cliffies in almost every chapter of the fic i'm currently writing. and again, the hipocrit (sp? jeez) in me is saying that you should really hurry with the next chapter, but my last three chapters have taken me FOREVER to write. oh well. 10/10 oh yeah, btw, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE FRED WEASLEY!!! believe it or not, i like him over george. don't ask me why, i just do.
Author's Response: yeah, i know how you feel about cliffies, and also fred. Love him!!!! But I think I'm drawn to him over George because he's mentioned more in the books, or he's just a lot more funny, outgoing and likeable.
that was really, really good!!! i'm not muck of a dark/angsty fic person, and i think i've only read one other one, but this was realy good! please hurry with the next chapter! :) keep up the good work. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the story,I tried to make it dark/angsty, but with a bit of hope as I hope you can tell from the ending. Thanks for the review! :)