I am a 40 something year old mother of two living in Florida. I work full time as a nurse caring for children with cancer and I am in school to get my PhD. I'd love to improve my writing so any reviews are appreciated.
I am a huge Harry Potter fan. I actually started reading Harry Potter after listening to one of the parents at work reading the first book to their child. It sounded very interesting and I got the books for myself. I was hooked after that.
I love Harry and Ginny, I think they make a great couple and think it was hinted at in the books since the first book. To me they are a great couple and very well matched. I don't really like reading stories with Harry and other characters or Ginny with others. I like Hermione and Ron as Harry's best friends, but I am just not sure they are good together. I can easily see Harry and Ginny getting married early as they have been through so much and are rather more mature than their friends. Ron and Hermione just are not at that point, both are still rather immature. Hermione is a brilliant and very book smart, but she does not have the best people skills and she doesn't know much about relationships. Ron is still rather immature, I think the events at the end of the war would mature him, but I don't think he would mature to the point of wanting to marry right away.
Absolutely love this story! I've read it on another site, but not sure if I ever commented on it. It is so sweet and so the way I see Harry and Ginny.
Cute idea. I thought the way you portrayed Ginny in the beginning was spot on and well done. Not a huge fan of Harry being excluded from the delivery room - he should have been there not some Death Eater's wife and a woman who makes Ginny uncomfortable.
Author's Response: Hmm, I wouldn't put it like that. I know a lot of guys that wouldn't want to be there while their wife's having a C-section. But thank you for the review. :)
Very cute story! I thought both of them were well within character. The Weasleys were well written and that is rather how I would expect them to react to Harry and Ginny. I liked how Ron leaves first so he can pretend that Ginny leaves as well :).
I loved how Harry knew Ginny so well that he could tell when there was more to the story.
Very sweet little story!