Working on:
-Nothing at the moment. Taking a very extended break.
-Love's EmbraceWill definately be taken down from the site. Just giving two weeks notice. Sorry to all the loyal readers and reviewers.
Finished:
1. Past, Present and Future
2. Behind Blue Eyes
3. Remorse and Purfpi
4. From Hermione with Love
5. Never Say Goodbye
6. When You're Gone (New!)
7. A Whole New World (New!)
lol! This was so funny! I especially loved the little kids. There is nothing like smart, mischevious little kids that deny everything innocently. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I had actually thought about this story before I even finished The Long Wait. I wanted to do something like this with all four of them just sitting on a couch, with their heads hung low trying not to look guilty. Thank you so much for taking time and reading all of these.
Too short a chapter for this good a story!!! Ooooooh, I can't wait to find out what happened. Most importantly how Bella's goona react when she finds out about Lucius!! Urghh!! I'm DYING to find out!!!! Post soon!
Author's Response: Sorry, I really didn't have any idea the chapter would look so short once I uploaded it. But I do have another one waiting to be validated, so you will have more soon. Bella isn't going to be happy at all about Lucius' betrayal. Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I really appreciate it.
It's funny cause I was just reading PoA like 10 minutes ago and I was at the part when Peter (stupid rat) was pleading with Sirius and HArry, and I was thinking just how BADLY he desrves to die! Thank you for killing him! (lol) And now on to Bella's long awaited death (or at least I hope so) Post soon!
Author's Response: I actually wanted to have him pleading a lot, since I remembered that scene in PoA. LOL, I wanted to also show Osiris' dark side as well. He is quite unforgiving, as well as his little lion. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Aww, I loved it~!Well, I haven't posted review for a long time, but I've been real busy with my own fic and I haven't read anything for awhile. Now let me just say your last three chapters were absolutely lovely! I loved all the in-between jokes and I cannot wait to see what Crooks and Osiris are planning. I have a feeling it's not something bad at all. Also, I must say, I really like how Tonks' and Lupin's children are named Sirius and Lily! The only thing I think it's a bit overused is Dumbledore marrying the two. IN almost every fic that there's a wedding, Dumbledore is the one who does it. But apart from that I loved, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I very much agree with you. But for the life of me I couldn't see anyone better than him to marry them. I'm glad you liked the naming of Remus and Tonk's little ones. I thought it was appropriate and within Remus' character to name then so. I'm thrilled that you have enjoyed the last few chapters. These final chapters have been difficult to write because I've got so many side projects. So I'm happy that you liked them and they read well. I'm hoping to have the final chapter up some time next week. Thanks for reading.
Awww, poor Lupin. I really feel for him, I mean he's really the only Marauder left now. And poor Raven, too, bring pinished like that. Anyway, nice chapter... Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, Remus doesn't have much to look forward to if he keeps up like this. Yes, Raven did go through a lot, but he's got to learn his lesson. Don't worry he won't be punished forever. I'll have a new chapter soon. Thanks for your comments.
Wonderful chapter! That part about Lupin was really good, I was impressed. I guess the end of the story is near? If that's true, you definately have to write another story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Remus deserves something good doesn't he? Thank you for your encouragement. After this story I'm going to take a break for a bit. I may just write short stories and ficlets. I've become incredibly busy with my work and shorter stories may be the way to go for me for a while. Thanks again.
God, I love it when Harry loses his temper! She's finally dead!!! YEY!!! Brilliant chapter! Don't worry, we'll be waiting for the next chapter even if it comes after a month!
Author's Response: LOL, yeah, Harry had just about all he could take from her. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. And thanks for waiting. It's just been super hectic. Hopefully things will die down and you won't have to wait a month for the next chapter.
Fab! Really great. I loved the part when Crooks swatted Osiris with his tail. It was so funny! Anywho, I wish Remus would get cured in the books as well, but ... Yep, great chappie! Post soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I needed to get the duo back in there. I'm glad you liked that. And yes, it's too bad Remus can't be cured in the books, but hopefully things will get better for him there too. I'll have more soon. Thanks for reading.
Finally some justice is about to be handed out. HA! Serves Petigrew right! I'm really glad you updated this soon!!! I wonder what Harry and Lucius are gonna do....Hmmmm.....Can't wait for post!
Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter up soon. Everybody will get their just rewards. Thanks.
Ok, I just caught up. Great work as usual. This is really interesting, especially since it's not like almost every other fic. It has a different style. I really hope Harry has a role in killing Bellatrix too, since she did kill sirius. Update soon!!
Author's Response: I appreciate your comment. I tried to make this something different, and not like every other story out there. Harry will have his role, don't worry about that. I'll have more early this week.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! Cliffy!!! I know better than to think he died though! Nicely done! Post sooon!
Author's Response: I hate cliffy's, and hate when they are done. But I had to stop here. I have begun the next chapter though so hopefully I'll have it done soon. You are right not to worry though. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Of course they'll come home safley, Hermione!!! tut, tut. Bella clearly didn't think of everything!! Post again as soon as possible! 10!!
Author's Response: I'm sure she's very glad she had Remus make that map though. Bella slipped up a bit, yes. She was so keen on getting Sev there she missed a few things. Like her tracking spell, which you will see soon. I'll have another chapter up very soon. Thanks!
Aw, so sweet. I have enjoyed reading this story so much and it's so sad to see it end. It gave me a different taste; something new, apart from all the other stories I've read. I do hope you'll post your other fic soon. Best regards, ~mspadfoot89~
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to do something just a little different than the stories I myself had been reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'll have more at some point.
Oh my God! A portkey! Who would have thought of that? Great job! Ooooh, I really hope Severus can handle her! Really, really good. And I love the way Lucius is sweet, it suits him better. 10 all the way!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked how Lucius reacted. I think it was something good to show, how he has changed. Thanks for the 10 btw, it's nice to know how much you like this. Thanks for reading.
Aww, cute and fluffy. I wish I had someone to love :( . Anyway, nice job, hpe you update soon.
Author's Response: Me too :(.
Oh wonderful! You finally updated! You cannot imagine how happy I was to see your new chapter. I have to say: great job! Hermione's characterization is spot on! If Hermione ever kept a diary it would probably look just like this. I also love your subtle hints as to what's going to happen; like Lavender's words. Totally awesome! I hope you update soon, because this chapter took quite some time. I'll be waiting though! Rating:10
Author's Response: Yes, it took me a while to get this accepted, but better late than never! =) Anyways, you have no idea how much reviews mean to me, they're what keep me writing, so thank you =)
**sigh** Do guys like that actually exist?? Anyway, really great story. Keep writing!! ;)
**sigh**
Do guys like that actually exist?? Anyway, really great story. Keep writing!!
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Author's Response: I wish. ^^
Thanks I will :)
Oh, I definately enjoyed this. Now I'll say one thing that I loved about this chapter and another that I thought could use some improvement.
I loved how you described Hermione's feelings and Harry's sense of protectiveness towards her. Also the bit about the gold chain being blasted to smithereens--beautiful.
I think, however, that you could have gone into a little bit more detail when describing the lttle scene between Harry and Hermione. Like make us see how Harry helped Hermione and that way we feel that little connection between them.
Overall, I love this story and I cannot wait for you to update! Rating~10.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and I am glad you pointed this out to me! I love to know how I can improve more, so thanks!
I really like this story. I'd never actually thought of Hermione and Seamus together, but why not? Keep wrting please. I