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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
*Completed*
“I’ll always protect you.”
Date: 09/20/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Conversations and An Invitation
The dream... Whoa. Intense. And it was so very real. The little girl was... extremely frightening in a brilliant sort of way. (Yes, that was a compliment.)
I loved this chapter, and I cannot wait for the next one you post. =)
--Kate/RP
Author's Response: Thanks! The dream was rather intense, you\'re right, but the main point I wanted to get across was that Lily wasn\'t the only one that suffered (though James suffered a great deal less, of course). I\'ll try and have the next chapter up soon!
Date: 06/19/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave
This is definitely your best chapter yet! I'm glad James finally heard some of what Lily went through, even if it might be too late for him. He's got to patch things up, though, right? And we still haven't heard James' side of the story yet... Update soon? I'm sitting on the edge of my computer chair! =)
--Kate/RP
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you think so! I was a little proud of this chapter myself. Yeah, James did need to hear what Lily went through, so they can be on the same playing field -- but more of that later. Thanks for the review, and I\'ll try and update fast!
Date: 08/31/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Seven Ways You Know You're a Sissy
I really like this chapter. Well-crafted, well-planned. Great job! =) --RP/Kate
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you think so!
Date: 07/14/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith
Yay for your updates!
Okay, so I absolutely loved this chapter. The whole situation reminds us that they all are, infact, teenagers. Wonderful job!
=) Kate/RP
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The First Day
GREAT chapter!! Excellent job. My favourite line was the ending lines by James. I love that Lily kissed him so randomly, too. Way to go, and send us more!! =) --RP
Author's Response: In most Lily/James fics James makes the first move, so I like the idea that it was Lily who, out of the blue, kissed James. I\'m glad you liked the fic, thanks for the review!
Date: 07/14/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith
Yay for your updates!
Okay, so I absolutely loved this chapter. The whole situation reminds us that they all are, infact, teenagers. Wonderful job!
=) Kate/RP
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked this chapter.
Date: 06/15/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers
Oh, gawsh! Jamesie Poo Poo, what's wrong with you?! Stupid prat. Well, I mean, if that really is James... *suspicious eyebrow-raised look* Polyjuice? Imperious Curse? It's all a nasty prank, right? *hopeful eyes* But, he just got her a kitten! He can't be cheating on her...
Oh, I'm so curious! Please update soon! This cliffhanger is killllllllling me!
10/10 of course!
=) --RP/Kate
Author's Response: What\'s wrong with him indeed! It was a terrible cliffhanger, as many people have told me, but I\'ll try and update quickly, I swear! Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/15/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers
[Continuation of Last Review]
I hate Andy. He needs to go find a friend and stop bugging Lily. This is all his fault. Ignorance is bliss, and he totally messed that up for Lily. Poor dear, bless her heart!
Okay, now I'm done bugging you! =) lol.
=) Rp/Kate
Author's Response: You could never bug me with reviews! I hate Andy too!
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down
I'm reviewing the first two installments in one review, so here it goes:
First Installment: Very orginial idea with Lily's beauty. I like the idea of a transformation, and the tweezer lines were great!! Quite funny, and I'm really glad that you showed how normal she is. Great job with the Mauruaders and Madeline scene. Also, towards the end, the Slytherin scene was good too. Nice way to start off!
Second Installment: The idea of Lily thought to be dead is very orginial. The emotions you give James in this chapter are amazing and so real!! You definitely understand the characters. The "HAHA" spelled out with dead bodies/body parts is also very orginial, but also very believeable from the Death Eaters, so even though that was morbid, it was sinister in a very real way. I liked that you had Sirius check the papers before James' read them--that showed how close the Mauruaders are. Having Peter find the bodies under the leaves was another orginial and terrifying moment. Finally, great cliffhanger!!
Overall, you've got a really orginial plot and a very good start here. I can't wait for more!! One suggestion would be to italicize the last line of the 2nd installment, if nothing more, to show the intense impact it has!! Great job so far!!
Author's Response: Oh, reviews like this make writing and the endless submitting process worth it! I\'m glad you like it so much, I was afraid Lily/James fans wouldn\'t like the seriousness of the whole situation. I love to write Harry/Ginny, but really I can do the most with stories about James and Lily because so little about them is really known. I can really cultivate their characters--I\'m glad to see you liked what I decided to do with them. Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose
Yay! Great chapter! I loved the "task" Lily set... Perfect. I can't wait for an update!! =) --RP
Author's Response: That\'s clever Lily for you!
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand
Aww, very good chapter. In this chapter, I especially loved the flashback. It seemed to flow very nicely with the rest of the flashback. Also, the chapter's motif of corniness was good; it was humourous and cute! In my opinion, this is the best chapter so far. Two thumbs up and a smile sent your way! =)
RP
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I\'m glad you thought the memory fit into it well! The corniness was pretty sweet, wasn\'t it? :)
A Thousand Patronuses by belladonna803
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is an HBP missing moment, so beware of spoilers, folks. This one directly follows the events at the end of Chapter 24, and contains no angst, no tears, and no violence. Well, unless you count the threat of a Bat-Bogey hex. ;) Enjoy!
Date: 09/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
lol, funny little ending there. Very cute. I loved the fluffiness but reality of it all. Great job!! =) --RP
Author's Response: :D Thank you! There\'s just something satisfying about fluf, isn\'t there? *giggle*
Date: 09/28/06 Title: None
Kind of confusing... I think you have a good plot idea, but you needed to spring it into action more... Give us a two chapter fic. This chapter could be a 2nd chapter and the first could be them getting drunk or whatever and then switch to this chapter and tell us how she knows she's pregnant. Also, I'd like to see Ron's reaction... Just some of my thoughts. It 's a good idea, but I feel like you didn't follow through completely. Definitely a good starting point! =) --RP
Reminiscent Rain by EtherealElation
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
One foot.
One foot in front of the other.
One foot in front of the other, step-by-step, walking –
So careful not to tread upon the crumbling dust and bones that is all that is left of –
Them.
Date: 10/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: Amori
Wow. This had so much truth embedded in the piece, it was like it was braided with imagery and meaning... Lovely job. Brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: Sentiment is always a good thing. I\'m not a \"tissue reader\", so to speak, so I always like to know if my writing inspires such. :) Thanks!
~Juli
My Light in the Darkness by GryffindorGoddess711
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lavender is convinced that her life is as great as it could be. But when she finds that her boyfriend has been cheating on her, she is left alone in the darkness. Will there ever be a light in her darkness? Please R/R!
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aww, very cute. Lovely little fic...+10/10! =) --RP
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Not a Maybe Thing by HoneydukesAddict
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily knew that James was nothing but trouble. He was rude, conceited, and indifferent to anyone that wasn't in his group of friends. She had known him to be that way for six long years.
But their seventh year comes, and Lily slowly begins to see that he is no longer the boy he was. Now Lily sees herself more clearly, and she isn't sure she likes what she sees.
This is the almost-forgotten story of Lily and James's romance, and what they went through to become the heroes that were Harry Potter's parents.
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven
Oh, no... That's a good cliffhanger, by the way. Good chapter! Can we look forward to a quick update? *hint hint* =) 10/10! --RP/Kate
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three
Great start!! Keep these chapters coming!! =) Update soon? 10/10 so far!! --RP
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
Is it James? Who's the figure? Update soon, please! Good chapter, btw! =)
--RP
The First Kiss by LadyLuna
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: James and Lily's first kiss. And the next one, and the one after that. Why did Lily give in? Did James start it? What happened?!
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: The First Kiss
Aww, very sweet fic. Nicely done! =) --RP
Author's Response: Thank you!
Love your username, btw.
The Perfect Cliché by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*
Edited 10/26/08.
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Looved it! Perfecto!! Favourite line was Sirius', "'Atta boy Prongs, 'atta boy." Good one!! =) --RP