Name: Isabel
Age: 14
Birthday: October 4, 1991 (because I thought it was worth mentioning, personally)
My favorite pairing is Ron/Hermione. I also enjoy a good Harry/Ginny (which excludes stories where they use pet names like 'love', eg, "Ginny, love, pass the tripe.").
I'm not a very good writer. That is, I can be a good writer if I tried, but my fanfictions tend to flop, and I'm only really any good at writing short stories and poems. Ah, well.
If you are looking for one of those fantastic reviewers who leaves in-depth reviews, advice, and constructive critisism... I am not one of them. Occasionally I may have a spurt of brilliance, or nitpickyness, or something. But usually I just say "Ahh! That was so good! Update soon!" and annoy everyone.
I have a Xanga and a Myspace, both of which are protected/private (friends only) respectively. I will, however, subscribe to and proceed to constantly comment on yours if you decide you wish to. It can actually be fun. I am an interesting person, and I leave much more helpful comments on everyday life than on fanfictions. Strange, yet true.
So... yeah. That's about it, really.
Incredibly well written! A well thought-out and well-written look into Hermione, showing her very in character by analysing everyone and everything in a sensible, unbiased way. I also liked how she sees Mundungus as more than just a drunkard and a bit of a bum. That is a first! I enjoyed the bit about Ron and Harry. It really seemed to fit her without leaning peticularly to either Hr/R or Hr/H. I congradulate you on the whole!
Whoa! That was *amazing*! I can't help but agree with everything that was written, and it was written so well. Beautiful. I'm speechless.
Ahhhh so close. Phew that was a long wait. Hopefully you'll be able to update soon, though.
::Thanks God on bended knee for update:: Ach! Finally! I love this story! That was a great chapter, I loved Fred and George sticking up for Ginny, as well as Hermione's compliment of Ron's quidditch skills. Hooray! also, all th awkward moments were kind of cute ;-) Anyway as I said, update *soon*!!!
Well worth the wait! Hah, poor Ron saiud I WILL out loud. Fancy that. If I had been Ron then I'd have just crawled into a corner and died. Embarassing. Well, update soon!!!
Author's Response: awww thank you! I know what you mean, if that happened to me I'd just die of embarassment! lol! well at least he covered it up sort of.. ah well.. gotta love Ron! hehe! I'm glad that you liked that scene! I'm going to try to update soon! Thanks so much for the review! :)
::pokes you:: Update. ::pokes you again:: C'mon! Update! Pleaaase?!
That's very sweet of Fred and George. Now you actually see brotherly love. It was somewhat out of character for them, but that was ok. ::sigh:: Ron and Hermione were meant to be.
Ha ha just reread. I loved it when Ron stuck up for himself! It was so... cute. Update, soon... pleasseeeeeee
(Laughing) Poor Ron. Cologne just isn't what it's cut out to be.
But ahhh very good ending it's makeing the little people in my head cry for more! I love Ron and Hermione together.
As one last point, I think you portray Ginny very well ;-) Heh heh "“Sorry, got a little carried away there.”"
Author's Response: lol yes, cologne definitely is not what its cut out to be, thats for sure! That's a lesson that Ron will probably remember for a long time! hehe! I love R/Hr as well! They're perfect for each other! hehe! Thanks for your thoughts on Ginny, I just thought that since she's starting to be a bit more talkative in the books, why not in here? Besides, what's a sister good for if she doesnt annoy her big bro once and a while. lol.. actually I wouldn't know, as I'm an only child.. anyway, thanks so much for your review!! It's much appreciated!! :)
Ahh! We still have yet to find out how the game goes! Bwaa.
I think it's very good so far, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Ahh!!
Author's Response: lol well it's here so enjoy!! hehe! thanks for the review!
Your first fic? Wow. You get Lupin's character just right and stick to it. Very well written, too. I'm speechless.
You've ended on a cliffhanger! Ahh! Update soon, or I think I'll die; it seems great so far!
I think the plot it very interesting and I think it shows great potential, but your syntax confuses me sometimes. A little work on wording your sentences better and it would be great!!
I'm kind of lost for words here. I loved it! I'm glad to see a fic where Lupin actually feels like tearing himself apart a bit. Usually it's Harry feeling like that and Lupin being all calm and bringing Harry back down to earth. Thumbs up!
Whoa. I just read the first 10 chapters. This story is awesome. Update soon!
Very funny point of view to choose, and unique. I really enjoyed it!
Nice writing style, you have a great talent. That was so cute!
Author's Response: Ta! If I were Ron, your review would have turned me bright red by now :)