Lovely story..It's still building up the plot, and it's very interesting. Everyone is still in character, except, perhaps Ron, who I think would normally be more paranoid, but I like him like this. Update soon! I'm curious to see what the intercepted note from Draco was about! ~*Cammy*~
Hey, Awesome fic. I'm crying right now..it was very natural. The beginning I thought was really strong and the middle part seemed a bit cheesy and could've been made better, but it was still good. I've got a question. Was this based on personal experiences or from the experiences of someone whose close to you? It just seemed like you were really into it and knew what you were talking about rather than making it up..Anyway, let me know(e-mail), if you don't mind sharing..awesome fic! Keep it up!