Its now 7 years on, but god I want this continued. I just spent 2 hours reading a fantastic story (recommended in a Daily Telegraph newpaper as better than JK Rowling!) and there is no end :(
Silver Selena Moon and Salazar Scorpio Moon -
Determined and forceful
Emotional and intuitive
Powerful and passionate
Exciting and magnetic
On the dark side....
Jealous and resentful
Compulsive and obsessive
Secretive and obstinate
Destiny Sev Snake -
Practical and prudent
Ambitious and disciplined
Patient and careful
Humorous but reserved
On the dark side....
Pessimistic and fatalistic
Miserly and grudging
Twins spawn from the Dark Lord himself and a daughter of an ex-Death Eater. Together they are the Youngest Death Eaters. Forced into a life because of their heritage but who are they truly? Who are they faithful to, light or dark?
Love it. Seriously imo its better than the books (sorry for any offence queen Jo I still love you).
Just brilliant. I am lost for words at how good it is. The way you slotted it in with the actual scenes in the book. It totally does read like the Slytherin version of Harry Potter.
I cannot wait to read years 2 and 3 (and hopefully all the books please).
Love Destiny, have a crush on Drake and admire Silv and Sal. Just brilliant charactisation, and kept true to character the whole way true.
In the books Slytherins are just protrayed as being "bloodist" and elitist. I love how you have shown more of the cunning, behind the characters and that everything is a bit more black and white. Also the fact that the twins didn't want to work with Voldemort because they want to be the best, themselves not just due to their blood, just feels so true to life. If you are that keen for power, you wouldn't want to be a follower but a leader.
The work you put into this is a total accomplishment.
One wee thing can we get more Draco interaction? I would love to see him be put down a peg or 2 by the twins. Im already looking forward to the moment, it comes out that they are Voldemorts children (which i hope it does but not for a few books yet im sure)
*I wish to ask your permission. Can I print off the story to keep. I like to re-read books and this I can see myself coming back to. I promise I will not share. I'm just in love with this.
Argh it's just so, so me. I just wanna kiss you, for writing something so perfect.
Author's Response: I know that this is a bit old but thank you so much. You are very kind. Since I know that you have read to the book three I know that you have noticed that Draco is just a small character as of now. I still have the twins as being cautious about being known by everyone. Knocking Draco Malfoy down a peg would make a name for themselves and they don't want that yet. Besides Silver at least feels that Draco is a waste of air and not worth her time. And though Salazar is more verbal about his hatred, it is not his style to go out of his way to get Draco.
To your question about printing the chapters out, I don't mind at all. I also don't mind if you share the story. Fan fiction is a fun hobby and its not like you could steal the story and get publish because of Jo's copyrights so have fun and enjoy.
Author's Response: I know that this is a bit old but thank you so much. You are very kind. Since I know that you have read to the book three I know that you have noticed that Draco is just a small character as of now. I still have the twins as being cautious about being known by everyone. Knocking Draco Malfoy down a peg would make a name for themselves and they don't want that yet. Besides Silver at least feels that Draco is a waste of air and not worth her time. And though Salazar is more verbal about his hatred, it is not his style to go out of his way to get Draco.
To your question about printing the chapters out, I don't mind at all. I also don't mind if you share the story. Fan fiction is a fun hobby and its not like you could steal the story and get publish because of Jo's copyrights so have fun and enjoy.
Year 3
A year of hard choices and tough talks:
Destiny learns about the grim reality that is her dad’s past. Then it is a power struggle between Salazar and Severus as the trio takes up Occlumency on Dumbledore’s orders. Drake finally asks Silver to open up to him but can she do so? And, is Silver the only one that is confused about feelings? Drake doesn’t think so. Will Salazar awake to the reality that lies in his heart?
Voldemort’s servant returns to his master and while two have discussed their status, the third must choose. Destiny must decide where she stands in the next war to come. The end of the year comes as a blow. Will the long time allies decide to separate or will they finally become something more?
I cant wait to read more. I went into a lot of detail in my review from year 1. But I have seriously not stopped reading this. My favourite story writer/story by far.
Cant wait to finish year 3 and hopefully follow your writing up to year 7.
Author's Response: I will definitely write to year 7 and possibly thereafter. Thank you so much for your kind words and I hope you like the future chapters.