Hey everyone, my name is Nora!
Please read my fics and review!
Most importantly, please read and review my newest story, "Rose's Ramblings". Thanks!
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*laughs her head off*
Harald, this is THE funniest parody I have ever read!! I love it! Especially the line, "It's not the fog," said Ginny. "The author is smoking." and 'Not THAT kind of climax!' and how China revevealed that she's a man... you know what? I love the whole thing!
*huggles*
-Nora
Author's Response: Nora!!!! *tackles* I\'m so happy you liked the story!! *huggles* Thanks for the review!
This is the funniest story I have EVER read.
And I love you for it!!!!!!!!
hey! when are you going to update? I love this story :D I like how "things" are happening between Draco and Morgan
What an intruiging story! This is really, really interesting. It's a new and fesh idea, and I think it's awesome. :)
Just one little nitpick: "Go ahead," she whisperedd" has two d's, but that's so minor that it hardly matters.
Wow, let me start off with just the first paragraph. It was such a great way of starting the story, it really grabbed the reader in.
I loved how you only gave away small details before actually telling us what was going on, it kept me hooked!
The character of Morgan is just so sweet! She's really kind and caring and somehow I already feel sorry for her. After all, she's stuck with a complete stranger, and she doesn't even know that he's a wizard! I think that you've really created a great character here, although I'm looking forward to seeing some of her flaws, too, and her reaction once she finds out that Draco is a wizard. (Asuming, of course, that she will find out!)
Draco, meanwhile is so in character, it's wonderful. True, we don't see him this way in the books, but let's look at it this way: he's hurt and scared, not sure of who to trust, and who not to trust. When Morgan offers help he accepts, although he can't help but sneak in the comment about having sunk so low! Draco is so in character, which is great because it makes everything so real!
I love the scene with Draco taking a bath. (And no, it's not just because it's Draco taking a bath!) The thing with switching from paragraph to paragraph is cool, if you know what I mean. One paragraph you describe Draco taking his bath. The next it's him remembering that fateful nigh. Then you describe him bathing again. It was a really cool way of showing us not only what was going on, but also what was going through Draco's head.
The part with Draco trying to scrub off the Dark Mark was so sad and pathetic, in a way. It really made me just want to jump in and make that stupid mark disappear.
Your idea of the final battle was very original. I kept rooting for Harry, but at the same time I was really worried that something might go wrong! I've never before read a fic where Harry kills Voldemort with his own hands. Really cool. It kind of reminds us of PoA, when Harry attacks Sirirus, trying to kill him with his hands. He just forgets all about his wand and kills the muggle way. I love how you have him do it the same way here. It's awesome.
Draco's guilt over killing Bellatrix is so human that it kind of makes you feel for Draco, even though he murdered his aunt. I'm glad that he realized how many people he was actually saving by killing her, though.
All in all, this is a great, really gripping first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more!
-Nora :)
What an intruiging story! This is really, really interesting. It's a new and fesh idea, and I think it's awesome. :)
Just one little nitpick: "Go ahead," she whisperedd" has two d's, but that's so minor that it hardly matters.
Wow, let me start off with just the first paragraph. It was such a great way of starting the story, it really grabbed the reader in.
I loved how you only gave away small details before actually telling us what was going on, it kept me hooked!
The character of Morgan is just so sweet! She's really kind and caring and somehow I already feel sorry for her. After all, she's stuck with a complete stranger, and she doesn't even know that he's a wizard! I think that you've really created a great character here, although I'm looking forward to seeing some of her flaws, too, and her reaction once she finds out that Draco is a wizard. (Asuming, of course, that she will find out!)
Draco, meanwhile is so in character, it's wonderful. True, we don't see him this way in the books, but let's look at it this way: he's hurt and scared, not sure of who to trust, and who not to trust. When Morgan offers help he accepts, although he can't help but sneak in the comment about having sunk so low! Draco is so in character, which is great because it makes everything so real!
I love the scene with Draco taking a bath. (And no, it's not just because it's Draco taking a bath!) The thing with switching from paragraph to paragraph is cool, if you know what I mean. One paragraph you describe Draco taking his bath. The next it's him remembering that fateful nigh. Then you describe him bathing again. It was a really cool way of showing us not only what was going on, but also what was going through Draco's head.
The part with Draco trying to scrub off the Dark Mark was so sad and pathetic, in a way. It really made me just want to jump in and make that stupid mark disappear.
Your idea of the final battle was very original. I kept rooting for Harry, but at the same time I was really worried that something might go wrong! I've never before read a fic where Harry kills Voldemort with his own hands. Really cool. It kind of reminds us of PoA, when Harry attacks Sirirus, trying to kill him with his hands. He just forgets all about his wand and kills the muggle way. I love how you have him do it the same way here. It's awesome.
Draco's guilt over killing Bellatrix is so human that it kind of makes you feel for Draco, even though he murdered his aunt. I'm glad that he realized how many people he was actually saving by killing her, though.
All in all, this is a great, really gripping first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more!
-Nora :)
Author's Response: Oh my...this is the longest review I\'ve ever gotten...I love it! I\'m glad you think so highly of my story! Oh, and thank you for pointing out my spelling error, I\'ll fix that right away. Maybe you\'re the one who can point out if something isn\'t right, you\'re very observant. And not only that, you\'re comprehending everything that I\'m writing. Thank you!
Sincerely,
On Angels Wings
Very cool poems! I especially liked the last one. You managed to create a descriptive secene with only a few lines! Very nice!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed them. :)
*squee*
Okay, sorry, this is just one of those stories that make me smile :) Maybe it's the foribidden love, I don't know!
Just one thing- maybe you could have been slightly more in depth with the descriptions? But I get that this is the opening chapter, and therefor the "real" story starts after the letter.
But I really look forward to reading more!