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Date: 11/16/05 Title: None
hey, loved it. does this mean the whole staff is gonna be hungover tomorrow? that would be halarious. anyways, plz update, it's awesome!
Padfoot Prohibited by Liveley
Rated: •
Summary: Giving high school essays a Marauder twist, this fiction is centered around the idea that some seniors in high school are require to write a letter to incoming freshman before they graduate. At Hogwarts, Seventh Years are given an assignment to write such a letter for the new First Years. Sirius decides to actually take an assignment, well seriously...sort of. He decides to look back on his entire Hogwarts years and write down his list of things not to do at Hogwarts.
Date: 10/26/05 Title: Chapter 14: A Legacy Left Behind
this is the funniest marauder era/not really a romance story i'v ever read!!!!!!! so so halarious! i luved it, and u should write more, mayb u could like write about some of the things that happened on the list or something. that would be cool. this is a classic!!!!!! 20/10 : )
Date: 10/26/05 Title: Chapter 14: A Legacy Left Behind
this is the funniest marauder era/not really a romance story i'v ever read!!!!!!! so so halarious! i luved it, and u should write more, mayb u could like write about some of the things that happened on the list or something. that would be cool. this is a classic!!!!!! 20/10 : )
This Is How the Story Ends by venusgreenight
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Harry and Luna's married life is busy. Harry works for the Ministry, and Luna for the Quibbler. But when former Minister of Magic, Cornelius Fudge, is found dead, Harry must make sacrifices to find the murderer, even if that may involve losing the ones he loves most. Soon he realizes that Cornelius Fudge isn't the prime victim here. Harry embarks on a harrowing mission that may be his most dangerous one yet. Please R&R.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Dark Mark
Loved it loved it loved it! I can't wait to read all of this to see how it turns out. Two things I caught : Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Virginia (even though Virginia is a nice name) and when Arthur said: "There's no time to loose." There's only one 'o' in lose. It was great though, like I said, I can't wait to read the next chapter. *10*
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 2: Memories On the Hogwarts Express
The part with Crookshanks really being Forrest Evans was interesting. I liked the part where you put "Ron knew it all along", that made me laugh out loud. Their baby sounds so so so cute!!! Blonde hair and green eyes... aww. Do you actually know a guy named Forrest? I do.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 3: Trinal Prophecy
I loved Dumbledore's speech about un-sorting them so they all became equals, postively wonderful. There was an OOC in here though. Snape and Harry are ... friends, sort of??? Scared the crap out of me, they were talking like old friends. Ugh. Other than that, great.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Gray Mare, The Better Horse
Okay, I'm reviewing every single chapter just because I like your "Reviewisms of the Day". This chapter was great, I anticipated George messing it up somehow. He needs to get with Katie Bell or Alicia Spinnet. Lee needs to pair up with the other one, and they can all be a happy Quidditch/Quidditch Commentator family. Anways, this chapter was great, Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 5: Weasley Wizard Wheezes; Diagon Alley
Wow. Hermione pregnant. Wow. George's outlook on honeymoons might have been a little off, but it was funny, never the less. Wow.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 6: Clue Hunt
Okay, I'm going to play a game now... REVIEW replaced the word 'letter'. Am I right? Am I? Am I? Am I? Anways, this chapter was good, the part with Krum and the werewolf was really unexpected. *10*
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 7: Dead Man Behind the Veil
I love that Harry can talk to Sirius again!!! That is so awesome. ANYways, the REVIEW is supposed to 'library' right? When in doubt go to the library? I am guessing who the murderer is ... Cho! Cho had that advice column and the dude was talking about his Dorcas. Or something like that. I know, it's probably not going to be Cho or anything, but still, I hate her, so I 'm guessing her. Are you sure this shouldn't be a mystery?
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 8: Furtive Confessions and Casualties
NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Must I make my point any clearer? Screw my game, what's up with this???? First off, RON is absolutely dead, and secondly LUNA?!?!? What the heck!?!?!? Was she under the Imperius or something? It better be something like that. Harry killed the love of his life! This is so so so so so wrong!!!
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 9: Guilt of Murder
Are you implying that REVIEWS are stupid or something? Ron is throwing them in the bin? RON... RON... RON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I forgot, YOU killed him. I am getting way too emotional over this story... I love it, don't get me wrong, but it's so so so so so so SAD!!!!!!
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Dark Mark
My God!!! I can't believe it was Malfoy!!! All along, it wasn't Wormtail, it was him. Everything is coming to me now... That was most definitely THE best chapter you've written. They all had a common motive... And now I'm positive, this needs to go in Mystery or something. By the way, Nott's son was named Theodore.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 11: A New Beginning
Oh my God... The ending was so so sad!!! It leaves me with a lot of questions as well. SNAPE AND RITA???????????? EW. But still, it was very good, and it summed everything up very very nicely. Who did Lily get married to though? I like how George stayed single. Anways, until we meet again, your faithful reviewer, SIRIUSLYINLUVWITHSIRIUS
Penname: Hermione Granger by Cassiel Oliviari
Rated: •Summary: Hermione and the gang sold their story to a Muggle author, who turned it into a big hit, but skewed the facts. She tries to retaliate by writing her own fanfiction, but finds out it's harder than it looks. AU
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: Part One
Wow, this certainly twisted things around. I thought it was a very good, and gave everything a new look. It's very interesting, and I hope you add more!
Happy Birthday, Granger by Cassiel Oliviari
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione's had some odd gifts, but Malfoy's really takes the cake. One-shot, written for a Hermione birthday challenge
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
That was a very good story, I liked it a lot. You should add more on to it.
Catching a Flower by Messrs Fuzzbutt and Fantail
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary:
“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”
Date: 11/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Going Back Home
I just wanted you to know that your story was my reason for getting into fan fiction and for becoming a Lily and James shipper. Your story is the best!!!!!!!!!! 50/10 :):):):):):):)
Author's Response: Really? I feel so special! Isn\'t fanfiction amazing? I adore it. A lot. And if Lily weren\'t around I would definitely marry James. I wonder if he likes brunettes? Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/24/05 Title: None
I liked this first chapter, this story seems like it's off to a great start. It's sad that Lily is drawing away from Harry. I feel so bad for him. Why hasn't he been talking to Hermione? You'd think she'd be one of the only people he would talk to, ya know?
Date: 12/24/05 Title: None
The letter was sad... But the chapter was good.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: None
I'm happy that Luna - I mean Lily - I keep calling her Luna!!! Anways, I'm happy she's getting to know Ron - I mean Ronny. He turned out to be an interesting mix, Hermione's reading and Ron's Quidditch... Lily seems exactly like Harry though. This is wonderful, I can't wait to read more.