I love it! Your description of the conflicting emotions, thoughts and actions of the characters seem truthful and realistic as in some stories those tend to be overly dramatic and unreal to me. I hope you continue writing since I'm already hooked! :) X
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked with this chapter a lot trying to get the emotions right, so I'm glad you like it. The next chapter is in the queue as we speak so hopefully it will be up soon :)