I've just read all five chapters and I have to tell you that your writing is amazing. Truly. The flashbacks are relevant and interesting and add depth, your characters are interesting and complex, I love where this story is headed, and again, the actual writing, the grammar and dialogue, is all so good. Please keep writing!

Author's Response: This is awesome. Thank you so much, glad you are enjoying it. I just posted a new chapter, hope you like it!