I've written fifteen Harry Potter stories. I WAS Plagiarized this year and so removed them from all other sites than this one. If you read one of my stories somewhere else then it has been stolen. I hope to be a published author some day. I live in Wyoming in the US- in case no one knows where that is- on top of a mountain in a log home. I am old enough! I like posting to this site because of the readers. You are great at reviewing. The main problem are the inexperienced adm. My last post was rejected twice because I used Romani words in it and has now been in queue for six days. Sorry about that but I don't want to put up the aggravation of posting to mugglenet. So alas, my stories are gone!
Yes I agree with Sniviellus. You've done a good job starting off. You've given us good descriptions and set the emotional scene, although I'm not sure Harry would be so willing to let go of his guilt so soon. However, you have started a good story and I'll be interested in reading how it proceeds. Natasha