Wow, that was good. I agree with whoever it was who said it, you have BIG explaining to do. Still really good though. I felt hungry just reading it! Then again I feel hungry all the time. CHOCOLATE.......... :)
Wow. This is a great story. Are you sure you're not J.K Rowling in disguise?
Author's Response: Well actually...haha, no I'm not JK, but I have a J in my name! erm, close enough I suppose. Glad you're enjoying it!
The first bit was good, this bit is better! Carry on, PLEASE!
Author's Response: I certainly shall carry on - writing's too much fun! I'm sure you'll like the rest, so check back, seeya, Dave
Author's Response: P.S. Does your user-name mean you're for the theory that Neville is actually the Chosen One, not Harry? I've submitted this several times on theory boards, but everyone thinks I'm loony; grrr, it's SO TRUE!! Glad you agree! :)