I've never written fanfiction before and so I'm a bit nervous about how this story is turning out! I hope that you lot like it and I really hope there aren't too many holes or such. I just got into the books this past summer and I fell into them hard! I love them so much, and in waiting for book seven I fell into fanfiction and the rest is history. I hope you guys like it! Please keep the reviews coming and I will try to work really hard to write a great story!
This was such a great story! Really in depth and totally touching! I loved the storyline, and you did such a great job of writing it! I'm sad that it's only a one shot! Excellent!
Author's Response: Hi. Thank you very much. I love to hear from my readers, and your words only encourage me keep writting. I'm glad you found it touching, as I tried the best to express all the intensity. Don't be sad :) as I wrote in the summary, this used to be a one-shot fic. Chapter 2 is already posted, and I'm almost done with chapter 3 (probably the last one, though). Keep tuned :P
And I let out a great big sigh. So sad! I was really hoping that she didn't die, but I like that you really killed her, gives you integrity as an author. Good job, love it.
Ahhhhh! No! Hermione can't be dead! That just can't happen! Oh goodness, I'm so worked up, please update soon!
Oh, yeah for Ron and Hermione! This certainly one of the more believably stories, and it's fantastic. Can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: I know just how you feel! I hate it when the character's are just not like themselves, which is exactly why Chapter Three got rejected!!! I was kinda mad, but I changed it and I like it better this way and hopefully it'll get accepted (and he thought I needed a beta! HA!!!! I don't need no stinken beta!!! (no offense to beta's or anything))
Excellent writing! The chapter didn't have too much action, as you said, but it's a wonderful foundation, and your writing style is absolutely fantastic! On to chapter two!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for not only enjoying the story, but for also appreciating my writing style *a silence fills the room at a certain lack of modesty* Anyway, thank you very much. On to your next review!
Good one! Ginny is the right person, probably the only person for that matter, that can actually give Harry the kick in the pants he needs! I loved the description of her when he first enters the room, too, just great! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! As I was writing this, I thought along the same lines as you. Ginny, aside from Harry, is the only one who suffered from the breakup. Frankly, Ginny's brothers or even her parents could not have fulfilled the task of showing Harry just how much of a prat he really was.
I never liked the Malfoys so I don't mind that you killed them off, although now I'm wicked intrigued to see what happens with Snape. Good or bad, my friend? Good or bad?
Author's Response: I'm thrilled to see that you are using my jargon my friend (you said WICKED!) But as to what will happen to Snape...it's just as good a mystery as to the people he is looking for. (But if you already know who he is looking for, then you might be able to discover what happens to Snape on your own.)
I liked this, interesting plot points. I didn't think it would lead this way, that's for sure, and I like to be surprised! I look forward to more secrets!!! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm really happy that I surprised you! Usually, I'm not that much of a surprising person. And as for updating soon, I'm taking a very, very, very short break. But all for good reason! I've just submitted my second fanfic, called Binds That Bond. This time, however, it is a fanfic about Ron and Hermione. (I'll give you one guess on where to find it.)
Oh gosh, so sad!!! I hope something good happens to them, they deserve it, geez!!! So stinking sad!
Author's Response: I get that a lot on this chapter : ( And you're right, they do deserve it.
Author's Response: I get that a lot on this chapter : ( And you're right, they do deserve it.
Oh, good! I got scared there for a second when they offered Harry the job in the US because I didn't want him to be seperated from Ginny, but you've obviously taken care of that! Nice little twist on things, wouldn't have predicted it! But I wish they could hurry on a have a baby, Harry wants it so bad!
Author's Response: A baby is a ways off. I'm not going to say anything but dosh gamnit a baby is not the only thing Ginny and Harry need to sort out!
Absolutely love it. Love it. This is so cute! I was really sad about the twins, and I would love to see them have a child of their own, too, but this is perfect!
Author's Response: YEah- maybe, but I'm not promising anything. Thanks for reviewing (even though I say it all too often ) You all rock
I loved this chapter, and I love that they are just trying to work on life and spend time with each other and their family!
Author's Response: Isn't that how life goes though>
I really like this chapter! I like that she's awoken already, gets things rolling right away! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, the long wait sort of thing really isn't me. I couldn't do that to myself- plus, this story isn't about Hermione finding the antidote is it?
Good, I'm really happy that they showed up to surprise her! Great idea. And I like that Ginny doesn't want to start a family right away, she shouldn't have to! LOL.
Author's Response: We couldn't have the family miss out on everything now could we? And No- she shouldn't. Peoples' dreams change
Ah, she's pregnant? That's so great!
Author's Response: WEll...... *sobs... hysterically...
Author's Response: sorry- didn;t mean sobs : ( = : )
Ah, I loved this chapter and I totally see those two as the eloping sort, so that makes me happy! However, I agree with everyone else, Molly will freak out at first, but I think she'll come around. Molly has to get mad about it, but she can't stay mad forever! LOL. I can't wait for the wedding!
Author's Response: Ha.... do we always have to follow the trend? I think you all will be surprised that he wedding doesn't hap- wait... errgg! shouldn't have said that!
Your writing has really improved with this chapter, it's great! And I'm so happy that they are having twins! Oh, please don't let anything happen to the babies!
Author's Response: WoW- thankyou. I wrote this back in... August (I Think) so It has been a while- but I have kept writing. THis story has a few more chapters left- and after that I will be updating SOLE, the prequel. And nothign is going to happen to the babies this time... heheheheehe
Great chapter, and I'm wicked happy that Ginny wants to have more children! I like the excitement of Malfoy coming back to get them, keeps the action moving. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thankyou- I though that we needed a little potter running around- though I am not saying any more!
I just love this story! This is a nice chapter, and it's good they got out of Hogwarts! That would have gotten really cramped really fast! The best, however, is the fact that Hermione is going to have a baby, too! I'm so happy for all of them!
Author's Response: Yes, I had to entertwine another Weasley child... hehehe! I have always loved Hermione- ever since book 2 (partially because I have neverread book 1)
Love it! Can't say much more, nice little one-shot there! Great!