I've never written fanfiction before and so I'm a bit nervous about how this story is turning out! I hope that you lot like it and I really hope there aren't too many holes or such. I just got into the books this past summer and I fell into them hard! I love them so much, and in waiting for book seven I fell into fanfiction and the rest is history. I hope you guys like it! Please keep the reviews coming and I will try to work really hard to write a great story!
I really liked this! I'll be honest, I didn't know that I would, but I just loved it! Such a cute little story, and I love that Ginny demands to go with him, good for her!
Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the story. Thanks for giving it a go. :) And for the review as well. :D
This was really good, good writing and I like the descriptions of how they looked. The fact that Ron doesn't want to eat is a definate sign of his depression (lol). I recommend longer chapters, though, because this is too good to cut short!
Author's Response: Oh thank you, and I worked hard on that part, so I'm glad you liked it! I never really thought of it that way, so good eye! I'm going to write Chapter 4 longer, so hopefully that will fit your satisfaction, and chapter 2 is in queue! Thanks for your review!
This is really good, farely well written and interesting plotline. I'm anxious to see where it's headed!
I loved this chapter! You've totally drawn me in, however now I want to know what happens! Stinking noble Harry, he's always doing that, isn't he? Please tell me they get together!
WHAT? Goodness sakes alive! This is insanity! You better update soon, I can't believe this crazyness!
Author's Response: Sorry, I know I can be insane sometimes! But this is only a one-shot - so no updates I'm afraid! If I tried to write any more, I think I'd probably ruin it, and it was only ever meant as a one-shot. Sorry!
I love it. Love it! This is great and I absolutely can not wait for your next chapter! This is going on my favorite list, for certain.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you like it, i may have to rewrite the ending to include more information because it's a bit rushed. The next chapter will be up real soon.
I love that you think Snape is innocent because I just can't see how he could really be bad! I like all of your little plot points, really, because they're excellently developed and well-thought out. Everything is well put together!
You're a great author and I totally find myself drawn so deeply into the story! I'm still trying to sort out the Neville thing, although I understand where you've gotten it, so all right. And how awkward for all of them to have the "big talk" from Molly like that! Gosh! That was actually rather funny! I can't wait for you to update-I'm totally following this story!
Rip out my heart and beat it, why don't you! Gosh, this is totally well-written, and really powerful, too. I mean, I was getting so emotional and I didn't realize it was a one-shot until the end and I was like, ACK! No! He can't die like that, it's so horrible! Great story!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing my story! I'm really glad you liked it, and you're my first reviewer, so you made me happy :) I appreciate it very much.
A bit odd they wouldn't notice the baby, I agree, however I still liked the chapter and still think you're a good writer. I hope you update soon!
This is great, I love sequels! Hooray! I can't wait to see what happens and where you take this story!
Author's Response: It is going to go in what I think is a interesting direction. Of course I think it is interesting because I'm writing it. As I said in response to an earlier review, it will focus on past events for the next chapter or two.
Yeah! She's having the baby! I hope she's okay, though, it would be dreadful if she wasn't! And this is interesting about this Mike fellow, what exactly did he do for Dumbledore and what did Dumbledore teach him?
Great second chapter! I'm so excited, been waiting for this one! I love that it didn't take so long for them to get together, they belong together, and it's quite funny the way they sort of danced around it, not wanting to actually say what they were both thinking. LOL.
Author's Response: *heehee*...Thanks! I couldn't bare to keep those two apart for very long. It just kills me when it gets drug out over so many chapters. I wanted this one straight to the point and there already, you know?
I'm glad you liked it and I hope that you enjoy the next one too. I posted it as soon as Chapter 2 was validated. So, hopefully Chapter 3 won't be in queue for that much longer.
Thanks for reviewing.
I loved this chapter! I'm so happy for those two, they deserve to be happy after all they've been through!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!!
Author's Response: I love this chapter too. It\'s one of my favorites.
Everyone deserves a happy ending.
Really glad you liked it.
Love it! One thing I really like about this story is that each chapter is lengthy and full of information! There's nothing more frustrating than getting into a story that ends right when it should be getting good! I love this story, it's definately one of my favorites! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't wait to update!
Author's Response: *hee* So glad you like it!!
I\'m so glad that my story is among your favorites. I hop the the rest of the chapters continue to do the story justice and are still to your liking.
Admittedly, all my chapters will be lengthy...with the exception of chapter 7 that is. It\'s only about 2600 words. Actually, the reasoning for that is because the now Chapters 7 and 8 were supposed to be one. But, it got to be FAR too long to let it remain as one chapter...and since there wasn\'t a better place to cut it, chapter 7 ended up the smallest of them all. But....it\'s not terribly short. It still ended up being like 8 pages.
but....just so you know, when it comes. :)
I love this! Great story, love the idea of it all, and I really like that they've not kept in contact, it makes it super cute to see how they react after all this time. And I really like how you go back and forth between views! Good idea!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you like it. I have 5 chapters of this story written so far. Already started working on Chapter 6. I've posted 2 so...it's just in queue... Hopefully it'll be up shortly. I really hope that you like the next bit. I really enjoyed writing 3 and 4. And...I think 6 will be great too. Once I get a chance to write it all.
Anywho...thanks so much for the review. I really appreciate it!
I really loved this chapter! I think that the story is really sweet, there's not a lot of crazy drama which is good ebecause that can get exhausting to read sometimes. I can't wait for the next chapter to be validated! This is most definately one of my favorite stories!
Author's Response: Thank you...I\'m so glad that you liked the chapter.
Ah...I think you may have spoke to soon about the drama thing. Shhh! Don\'t tell anybody. *hehe* ...but there\'s a bit of drama in the next chapter. Because, what is life without a little...but I don\'t like to make it as overdramatic as some stories can be...because I too will give up on a story if it just keeps going on and on with the unnecessary drama.
I hope that you like the next chapter. Let me know what you think about it, once you get a chance to read it.
Thanks for making my day even better!!
So, I always love this story! It is most certainly one of my very favorites and you never disappoint! It's so intense, but in such a wonderful and romantic way! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love, love, love this story!
Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so happy that you still like it. I\'m always afraid that I\'m going to lose readers...but I apparently seem to be picking more up as I go. Which is terrific, of course!
Thank you so much for your beautifully kind words. They inspire me to do my absolute best as I continue on.
I always appreciate every one of your reviews. THANK YOU!!
These chapters only get better! On to the next!
Author's Response: :) I hope they continue to do that!
Yeah! Twins! This story is so cute! I love it, I'm not really sure why, there's just something really sweet and endearing about it! I'm excited to see where this story is going to go, what sort of drama you're planning to bring in! This just makes me happy. LOL. Excellent, keep it up!
Author's Response: haha thanks!! Yeah the second chapter is submitted!