I'm just a poor college student who spends her free time working and studying. Sucks to be me.
I don't know if it was intentional, but I saw a lot of parallels between Lily's relationsip with Hagrid and Harry's relationship with Hagrid here. I like that, it's good to see some reference to Harry in these early times.
Come on, for the love of God. Ron's never been that mean to Ginny.
I gotta say, I'm not so thrilled. the main characters seem way ooc, especially hermione and ginny, even before the pregnancies. Harry and Ron don't seem quite right either, especially in relation to Draco, who is very wrong. It's a captivating storyline, but not one that deals with the characters as we know them.
Okay, having sex under the imperius curse is the same as being raped. Malfoy is a rapist. And Harry and Ron are okay with this? yeah, right.
Wow. It's all over. I only hope I can bring it to such a decisive conclusion in my own story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There are so few that it's a pleasure when I get one!
I would really like to see an update to this. It's a great idea and a great start.
I love the concept and I think this is the kind of thing that needs to be written, but there's just no way I'm gonna be able to finish the story. You've got continuity issues crawling out your ears, Run-on and fragmented sentences, massively long dialogue, and blatant OOC-ness. I would suggest major revision before you continue. Best of luck to you!
Author's Response: Thanx for the constructive critism. I'll try to fix that and I hope Chapter 2 isn't like that since I wrote it many times already. Also who is OOC? I've been thinking and couldn't really think who it could be.