hi there, I am loving this story! It's great. Can i ask have you written this story before? I am sure I have heard about the girls that are Lily's friends in the story before. Either way it's fantastic!
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Silly girl!!!!!! That was very good though, brilliant! Such a cliff hanger, so well done!!! 100000000000/10. excellent writing
Oh please let them find her, please!!!! I'll miss Raven if we don't!!! well done. 100000000/10 for suspense
Oh please Raven, turn up, please!!!!! Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She'll be in the shack, won't she??? She might get bitten!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway, well done, that was great work as always! 10/10
Oh no............................. But James wasn't a werewolf! Maybe he stunned remus or something? well done, I won't say more as I am so anxious to read the next part......
Your descriptions are great, everything is fantastic. I like also how Lily and James are arguing over this, it's really good for the plot as it could make them stonger. anyway, well done, it great work, keep it up. 10/10
Mmmmm, let's hope no one gets hurt. Anyway, well done as always, I think you probably know my drill but your writing is so good I don't know what else to say, and I am not good with long reviews. Well done, 10/10
few!!!!!!!!!!! They're all good now, no more tears, etc. Anyway, well done as always, I am a huge fan, so yeah. It's all good. Will Sirius ever ask Raven out??? Just wanted to know. 1000/10
Ooooh, I can't wait to read. I love the fluff, so I don't mind. I think that was great, very good, so well done. 10/10
Oh, that was was really good. Not really a lot of fluff, but yet there was, which worked really nicely. I really liked it overall, so well done. 10/10
oooooooh, I like it. This sounds even more interesting........ well done 10/10
oh no! Lily must get scared now! that was good though. hee hee. suffer sirius. suffer raven. that was eally creative and I love how they hte each other. well done. 10/10
oh, that was sad. Annabella gave that desperate feel to it, I agree. well done. 10/10
I really liked that, and I realy liked the idea of Timothy. He's sounds cute, but terribly annoying. I also like how Stephanie likes Sirius, because to me it seems like Raven and Sirius having some under lyin flirting going on, making it a love triangle, which would make the plot thicken so much. ehh, maybe I am wrong, but it was great anyway, well don. 10000/10
Don't worry about Hagrid, He is fine! You made him just like he is! Anyway, I loved it, it's greatwork. Keep up the good work. 10/10
oh Timothy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, he was a pain in the backside, but still!!!!!! And Lily will be next, right? Oh no!!! Well done anyway, I love how alll those moments when Lily thinks she likes him she is interuppted. anyway, well done. 10000000/10.
That was good, I was on the edge of my seat when Lily and James nearly kissed -what a shame!!!! Anyway, well done, I like how you used the Prejudiced view on things to your advantage, it worked well. Anyway, well done, 10000000000/10 for sure
nup, I am glad they are both staying as it could be interesting. Well done as always, that was really cool and I liked it. 10000000/10 for sure
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HORRAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahem, heh, yes, um well done Lily and James, very well done. I like how Sirius called Raven a hippo again, that was just so good. I think she likes him, right? This should be interesting. well done as always, it gets better and better by the minute. 1000000000000000/10
oh, poor Raven. I nearly cried. And poor Lily as she had to see her friend so torn up. It was very well written, I wanted to jump through the screen and hug Raven so tight. Poor thing. Well done though, it was great regarless of mr. and mrs. Sheppard's death. 10/10