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12/05/05

Reviews by Ravenclaw 24

The Hunt Begins by Jenn_Weasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A little adventure...A little romance - rolled up in one story.

Harry is still coping in the days after Dumbledore's death. He's ready to take action and is anxious to find another Horcrux. With the help of his friends, Harry takes another step closer to defeating his nemesis.

Over 1500 reads!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Ah very nice! The shattered glass was worked in well, and Ginny's boots- fantastic! Nice well written story. Well done :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for another review! I really appreciate the time you take to leave such nice comments.

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Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/06/06 Title: None

Ooh, looks interesting. Nicely written :-)

Rest In Peace by Jenn_Weasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Name: Jenn_Weasley
Challenge: Term - Holidays Abroad Yay!! Second Place!!! Thanks!!!
House: Gryffindor

Neville Longbottom changed a lot in his last three years at Hogwarts. We catch up with him a few months after the final battle as he goes to celebrate Mexico's Dia de los Muertos. He only hopes to come to terms with his parents' deaths but finds a new love as well.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Oaxaca

I've been looking foward to this chapter! Well written again and very sweet. The attention and detail in this story is good...the mention of needing to freeze the photo is something many authors would overlook and it also reminds us that Neville is in the Muggle world. And now we have a little cliffhanger...I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have the 3rd Chapter back from my beta and ready to submit. You won't have to wait too long.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/14/06 Title: Chapter 2: A Surprise Visitor

Uh whoops that last review was meant to be for chapter two!

Author's Response: LOL - no problem!

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 3: Night of the Dead

Ooh very cute little chapter. It was Susan! How sweet. Having her working for a Healer is good, I can imagine her working in Healing. Well done, as usual :-)

Author's Response: Well thanks - I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Oaxaca

This looks like it will be a great fic, I'm looking foward to reading more. It's great how you explained not only why he was there but also how he found out about it. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I have Chapters 2 & 3 with my beta right now so hopefully I'll have a new chapter up soon.

Amortentia by Cruciatus Love

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Merope Gaunt has what seems like a flawless plan to get Tom Riddle to love her. She has everything worked out to the very last drop of Amortentia in his glass each morning. Watch as a country called Romania and a celebration of love takes it's effect on this 'perfect love.'

Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ooh, what an interesting fic. Great idea, incorporating, well, something that we know happened into this challenge. Having them go to Romania for Martisor is a good idea. I like how you skipped foward and just showed a bit of the wedding at the end of that chapter. I'm eagerly awaiting updates :-)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks. This being my first fic, I know the writing is exactly Jo's, but I try. I'm glad I have one fan...

T'was but a Puddle by Mind_Over_Matter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was but a puddle, a muddy mud puddle,
But it’s now changed indeed.
To find out more, do look at my tale,
And please review after you read!

Twelve hundred square metres of thanks go to HermyRox12, who nominated this little ditty for Best Poem in the QsQ's. I'm all a'flutter!

Reviewer: Ravenclaw 24 Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only Chapter... 'The Muddy Mud Puddle'

Very good job :-)
This has a good rhythm and structure, it's clearly written...
I like it :D

Author's Response: I was going to make a terrible pun linking your usage of the word \'clear\' with my repeated \'muddy mud puddle\' line, but, for the sanity of all will not. Thank you for your review, and I am glad you liked it. Ever so!