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12/11/05

Reviews by eshak

Ferret and Female by madlucy88

Rated: Professors •
Summary: After recovering from a fever, Hermione starts to collapse at odd momments. Madame Pomfrey says it could be a side effect and Hermione starts taking vitamin potions. When Draco Malfoy is 'too sick' to patrol with Hermione something happens. So what is going on?

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Mystery Begins

Your story is amazing and I simply loved it. But don't you think you've had us waiting long enough. I hope you update soon.

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Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: A Life Apart

Amazing story. Update soon. :)

The Ninth of January Ritual by Grainne

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: How does Snape spend his birthday? Turns out the Potions master is a wee bit vain about a certain aspect of his appearance.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Ninth of January Ritual

I couldn't help feeling amused. This one is truly nice.

Selena Anarya by Miss

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Can a letter change things? Can the life you have known forever, turn around because of it? Follow the life of Draco Malfoy, after he receives a most unexpected letter. AU since HBP.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/29/06 Title: Chapter 11: Finding Out

This is a very good story, Martine. I thoroughly enjoy reading it. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Real life keeps on interrupting, but I\'m sending of chapter 12 to my beta today.

A Day in the Kitchen by Alessa

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Mum and daughter enjoy some female bonding time while baking cookies.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: n/a

It was a really nice story. Kinda sweet too. Wish you'd write more. Let me know if you do and Good Luck

Whatever You Do by Emily_the_Poet

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This story of love proves that even the coldest hearts can be changed in the face of love. Yay over 500 times read!! (It is a romeo-juliet-esque fic. It is set in a diferent time period so forgive the opening....)

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Drink the Champagne

I really don't know what I can say about this story, the only thing that comes to mind is that it is really beautiful.

His Draught of Delicate Poison by Subversa

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In the wake of the Final Battle, the Order has opened Headquarters to house its youngest members during a summer of Ministry-sponsored social events. With Snape as a chaperone, and engaged to another woman, the advent of a busy Hermione, determined to see her friends in love-matches, can only be a recipe for disaster.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/14/06 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Beautifully written, Subversa. Poor Stormy. make her well soon, will ya?

I'm looking forward to your update.

Author's Response: Thank you, eshak, what a nice compliment! I am working on the update now. I appreciate the note!

Wed To Orange by Shena

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Why is it that Snape always finds himself in unfortunate situations? Is it because of his connection with the Dark Lord? His connections with Harry Potter? Now his worst nightmares begin to come true… ONESHOT

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wed To Orange

Crazily funny! Good story and keep it up.

Author's Response: Thankyou! I definitely will keep it up, glad you enoyed it! Shena

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wed To Orange

Your story was entirely amusing and I had a tough time keeping my laughs in check. Good one. Do more in the future. Good Luck.

Author's Response: Thankyou for the great comment, im glad you enjoyed it! Shena

Creating a Ghost by DaniDM

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: PreHP as seen through the eyes of a new student. Alicia had always been told that she was special but now her life was to take a drastic turn. Orphaned, in a new school and different from the others, can she find solace with Severus and Remus ?

A/N - The rating was changed due to the content of the Epilogue. Warning to sensitive readers.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 10: Chapt 10 - Lessons Taught

You've got a skill for writing. It is a very good story and I'm really looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you. The story was stuck in my head and needed to get out. I post about every 4-5 days, then, of coure, have to wait for validation. Sometimes it\'s fast, sometimes it\'s not. I\'m working on the sequel at the moment which will be an AU when the characters are in their early twenties. If you like the main character...stay posted. :)

Grow to be Proud by LadyLupin827

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem Lily wrote for her infant son, Harry.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Grow to be Proud

Beautiful poem. I loved it.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!

A Slip of the Tongue by Ginny_W

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Ron wonders why he and Hermione have yet to start a romantic relationship and he takes drastic measures to find out.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 6: A Victim's Rights

Very good work. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you, eshak! ~Ginny

The Ringing of the Empty Sound by cmwinters

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Originally written for the HP_Remnants challenge community on LiveJournal, given the prompt "and the picture frames are staring down, and the ringing of this empty sound, is deafening and keeping you from sleep", a lyric from the Dashboard Confessionals song "This Brilliant Dance".

Although this is not a song-fic by any means, I did listen to it several times while writing the fic.

After the war, you have to begin picking up the pieces.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 05/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Taking Stock

Your story is really good. I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Moondance by Ziggy_stardust

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Entering his sixth year at Hogwarts, Remus realizes that he has to face quite a conundrum. Should he follow his lustful heart, and find comfort in the arms of a beautiful young woman, or not dishonor James, and stay away from her entirely? Caught in between the heat of the moment and what is right, Remus finds himself in a situation that he cannot control.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: It Had to be You

Hi, nice story.

Did you know that there is a book by the same name (Moondance) by Somtow.
Read it if you haven't already. Its good and might help with any future fics you may like to do with Lupin as the main character.

I would dearly like you to continue the story.

Author's Response: *Stares at Somtow\'s Moondance on personal bookshelf*....wow, yes...I did know that. However, the two didn\'t add until you said it. =^.^= Actually, I took \'my\' title from the jazz song \"moondance\" I thought it fit the mood of this story perfectly.

A Blues for My Father by Tabletop_Joe

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Set post-HBP. Hermione hasn't seen her parents since the Quidditch World Cup. Now an enigmatic letter has sent her back to London, alone, without Harry or Ron... Will she be able to come to terms with her past as the Order makes its first moves against the rising darkness? Rated Professors for drinking, fighting, swearing, and other grown-up stuff.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Criss Cross

Good story, TJ. Keep going. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: It\'s coming, I promise! My beta is a captive audience for this month! Just have to get time away from the kids...

Life in the Interim by DaniDM

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Part 2 of 'Creating a Ghost'. -- Alicia's life, as she knows it, is over. What do you do when all that you have worked for, and everyone that you care about is gone? How do you carry on? You live life in the interim.

This story picks up a year after 'Creating a Ghost' and follows the growing relationship between two old friends. One must trust and have faith before love can grow.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: Yes | Words: 69241 | Hits: 5215 | Published: 06/29/06 | Updated: 02/21/07
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Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/14/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Memories

Hey, good work. Keep posting.
I've been looking forward to your sequel.

Author's Response: Good! :-) This story is already up to 18 chapters and they do get much longer. As I keep saying, as soon as a chapter is validated by the moderators, I post the next one. It\'s coming out as fast as it can...

Fair Exchanges by fawkes_07

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Snape isn't known for doing favors out of sheer kindness. Both may learn something unexpected before it's all over...

This is a Book Five canon fic, hopefully fun and poignant. Enjoy.

Categories: Hermione/Snape
Characters: None
Warnings: Dubious Consent, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: Yes | Words: 42060 | Hits: 42491 | Published: 07/14/06 | Updated: 12/11/06
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Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 08/04/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Compound Interest

Good work. I found it a bit short though.

Keep it up. :)

Author's Response: Hee hee...I\'m deliberately going for short, intense chapters in this story, but if you\'re in the mood for more, there\'s always my biggie fic, Heirs of Slytherin...It even has some Snape romance action, although not with Herms and not till the final 5 chapters.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 07/26/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Old Habits Die Hard

WOOT! for you.

Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: *snerk* on its way--but it\'s going to get really squicky pretty quickly. Hee hee hee.

Letter from Exile One Merciful Morning by Textualsphinx

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Oh how can I lure you to Read and Review?
When this was first penned all its clichés were new.
There’s angst laced with humour and tender enchantment,
The grammar and lexicon serve as enhancement.
And who could object to Snape’s wholesale redemption,
Or thoughts about sex – sufficient temptation?

PRACTICALLY THE OLDEST SNAPE-HERMIONE ON THE NET.

Reviewer: eshak Signed
Date: 08/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Reading

Very good writing. It felt great to read something so mature. You have depth in your writing.
Good Work and keep it up.

PS: When is the next one coming up?

Author's Response: The \'coda\' is uploaded and currently awaiting validation. Thanks for the kind review!