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12/12/05

Hmm. Time to rant.

Half-Blood Prince. This book frustrates me to the hair-ripping point because:

1. LENGTH. Jo- we LIKE to read what you write! It was too rushed!

2. HARRY AND HERMIONE. Yes, I'm a shipper, but she just blatantly seemed to rip them apart- I think she got tired of people guessing "Harry or Ron" and just comepletely destroyed their relationship. I don't know about everyone else, but the eye-rolling-scathing-Lavander-gut-hating-typical-horrible-NOT Hermione was not present in the first five books.

3. KING'S CROSS. It's a little thing, but it bugged me that she just cut it off at Dumbledore's funeral.

4. HARRY. Does anyone know what he was thinking? Besides having totally-random-out-of-no-where-I-love-her Ginny daydreams? Can we say, "huh?"

more later.

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Bright Eyes by Padfootsgurl263

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: How can the light that burned so brightly suddenly burn so pale? A sad Hermione, together with Harry, promises herself one thing...

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 02/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: C. 1

*does first-reviewer dance* i like it... especially the metaphor bright eyes. very nice. just work on some of the wording like "now more than EVER" not never (i think). you're off to a good start. update soon!

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Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: None

*stares at screen in shock* First reviewer! EVER! Awesome. I like where this is going, and you'd better update soon! One thing, though- I think you're supposed to use quotation marks when people speak- like this- "Hello," said Harry, instead of 'Hello,' said Harry. I'm not sure if it goes either way, but if it does, sorry for wasting your time. Very good start- now UPDATE!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the story so far. And yes, there is a reason for the single quotes (') instead of the doubles ("). I'm trying to write in the same style as JKR, and, if you look at the actual books, only single quotes are used ('). They are sometimes harder to see, but I'm trying to stay true to the books there.

Love Happens by Tenebrus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What happens when two friends, who had never thought of each other in a romantic way, meet in the most unlikely of situations? Love happens. Harry Potter and Hermione Granger, for one night, both just want to escape the confines of their own identities. When they meet, both under the influence of Polyjuice Potion, and fall in love, their lives become a comical mixture of dates and mishaps.

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 07/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Just A Bit

*squees* Very good... PLEASE update soon! *LOVE* 'The kiss felt so familiar to Harry, his whole cheek tingled as he watched her walk away.' Aaah! **********

Author's Response: hahaha I\'m glad you like it. I hope it keeps you interested!

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Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: None

*bumpitybumpbumps* oh but you DO have to repost a new chappie very VERY VERY soon... don't you? *nudge*

Blind by chocomaniac

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A terrible Christmas, five years ago now, span their lives out of control. They leave, both still wondering at what could have been. But then, in the Muggle world, they find someone new. Is it possible they can learn to love again?

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 06/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Reconciliation

I love it, PLEASE update soon!

The Night Sky by lapeachies

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's been a month since the war has ended and Harry has dissappeared. Each night Hermione watches the skies for falling stars to wish upon. Will one of these stars bring her wish, to see Harry again?

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Night Sky

oh.... that's beautiful. one shot? either way, I love it. very nice. I expect many more stories from you. soon!!

Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Words: 40191 | Hits: 70803 | Published: 09/20/06 | Updated: 01/16/09
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Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

I know it's Harry... and now onward!

Author's Response: haha \"and now onward!\" =D

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

I know it's Harry... and now onward!

Author's Response: hi, my name is makinmagic323, and i\'m obsessive-compulsive when it comes to unaswered reviews.

Harry Potter and the End of the Line by XxForever31xX

Rated: Professors •
Summary: IMPOTANT: CHAPTER ONE HAS BEEN REWRITTEN. Set post-HBP. Harry comes to terms with Dumbledore's death, and deals with the realization that Hermione's feelings for him may be more than friendly. Will Harry be able to overcome the feelings of numbness, indifference and monotony that are threatening to distance him from the world? Gradual fic. Eventual H/Hr. (Some mention of other relationships RW/LL, GW/NL, etc.)

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Beautifully written, please continue!

Please, please forgive me by PhoenixWriter

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The ground was muddy and soaked by the heavy rain. Thick raindrops hit her face, wetting her clothes, but she didn’t feel it. Numbness was all she felt. She saw it happening, disbelieving. She saw how the light emerged from the tip of her wand and formed a mist around the sixteen year-old boy who stood a few steps from her. The dark trees around them made this night even darker than it already was.

Categories: Harry/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Words: 1422 | Hits: 526 | Published: 12/19/06 | Updated: 12/29/06
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Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You Won't Cry for My Absence

Humble Me...? is on Feels Like Home... I'm not exactly clear on what you're asking... and can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You Won't Cry for My Absence

Have you, perchance, heard "Humble Me" by Norah Jones? Just checking. And please update soon, you terrible cliff-creating hag! just kidding of course...

Author's Response: Depents on what Album this song is though. I try to update soon the only reason the next chapter isn\'t up yet is there are still errors in my next chapter. Thanks for your review :)

Ghosts of the Night by Skulblaka

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It is just under a year after the defeat of the Dark Lord, and Harry’s dreams are keeping him awake again. He reflects on that fateful day, and all of its repercussions for him and his family.

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ghosts of the Night

That's my favorite disney movie! and very interesting story.

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