12/19/05
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Thank you to all my reviewers and readers, but I'm no longer adding any stories to this account nor am I a part of mugglenet.
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Date: 04/28/06 Title: None
Subversa, these is a great series. You really capture the emotions and conflict very well. You are a superb writer, definately one of the best. ;)
Born the Day You Kissed Me by CLee
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: I was born the day you kissed me...I died inside the night you left me...But oh how I lived while you loved me. . . .
The sequel Agapanthus is up!
Date: 02/07/06 Title: Chapter 21: Hold On Hermione
Perfect. Your fic is definately one of the best here on MNFF. I love your style, the plot line - everything. i don't think this chapter wasn't as exciting as the rest - I found that it has a charm of its own. Can't wait for 22! Keep up the awesome work ;)
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 23: The Little Things
Wow!!!! That was a delicious chapter! 10/10. I loved it , it was wonderful. About the poll, I'd want it in one long chapter. ;)
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 24: Black
*cry* *another cry* *yet another cry* It's the end! *wails* But you are doing a sequal, and that's the best news I've heard all day. Fantastic job on this story. The whole shishkabob. Everything is sooo beautiful!! I cannot wait for the sequal...please post it soon!!
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 22: Infirmary
Amazing! Just like KarateGirlJess said, I was saying "Oh my God" throughout the whole chapter. It was very sweet of you to have it up by Valentine's Day. I've been checking back daily to see if you had it up, and you didn't dissapoint me at all. I loved the Dr/h interaction throughout the whole chapter. Thanks so much for writing this fic in the first place!
Civility by SecretKeeper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy! The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle. In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but? And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 15: Civility
This story was so emotional...so heartbreaking...so true I couldn't tear myself away from the computer screen. You are truly a talented artist. This story will always be one of my favorites. Thank you, thank you so much for writing such an awesome and exhilirating piece of work. 10 is not good enough. Your story is simply perfect.
Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 9: Leaving
Very awesome story! Can't wait for Part 2!
Aching by Sincerity Angel
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: ONE SHOT. COMPLETE. Hermione reflects on the one who left her standing in the pouring rain aching for him. Excerpt They were never meant to be. "Then why does it feel so right?" a voice asked inside her head.
Date: 02/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lovely. Truly lovely. You have a nice style. This story is definately one of my favorites. 10/10
Stranded by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Now, they are left, lost and forsaken amidst a sea of chaos.
Pre-HBP
Ch. 9 - 20% complete
Date: 01/11/06 Title: Chapter 6: Of Derision and Diversions
That was an awesome chapter! I can't wait until the next one! I love that the characters are true to themselves, you don't change them as other writers who write OOC. Rock on!
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 5: Of Doom and Desolation
This is a really great story, and you are one of my fave authors. I recommended Delightful Pain to one of my friends and the next day she said it was one of the best fanfics she had read. Anyway, back to this story , I think you're doing a really good job on it. Its very descriptive and emotional, very realistic. Keep up the good work ;) The only story that I think you didn' t do as well on was the adultfanfiction version of The Itch That Won't Go Away. The beginning wasn't bad, but the rest of the story was pointless and plotless. Other than that , you're a really awesome writer!!!
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 5: Of Doom and Desolation
This is a really great story, and you are one of my fave authors. I recommended Delightful Pain to one of my friends and the next day she said it was one of the best fanfics she had read. Anyway, back to this story , I think you're doing a really good job on it. Its very descriptive and emotional, very realistic. Keep up the good work ;) The only story that I think you didn' t do as well on was the adultfanfiction version of The Itch That Won't Go Away. The beginning wasn't bad, but the rest of the story was pointless and plotless. Other than that , you're a really awesome writer!!!
Taste of Revenge by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors •Summary:
Chapter 6 is 40% complete
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 4: Caught by Surprise
One of the best James/Lily fanfics I have read. you are a really talented writer. Ever think of writing a book? ;)
Please update!
Author's Response: lol *blushes* Thanks for the compliment. And I have thought of it, but I don't want to professionally write at this point in life. I'm bad with commitment (as you all could see as I haven't updated this fic since...too long to mention :P)
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 3: Doubts and Suspicions
Nice chapter! One of the things I like about it is how you get James reaction right to Lily's game. It's just how he's react, and I think you've managed that considerably well... Another thing I like is your descriptions in the beginning...how you set everything up and then brought in the characters. It helped with the development of your story. I wonder what James will tell Lily... keep up the great job!
The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Date: 04/14/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The Big Game
Wow, this is a great chapter. I was really sucked in. Thank you for writing it, and I look forward to an update!
Author's Response: Thank you! You don’t have to thank me, really. It was my pleasure!
Date: 02/16/06 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- Overcoming the Fear
Lovely.
I loved it how you focused more on their relationship than anything else in the chapter. I felt it was needed after everything that's been happening.
Hm...I wonder how Hermione will get herself out of the appointment.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I decided that it is about time we focused more on their relationship, so like you said, that was the main focus here. Maybe Hermione won’t get herself out of the appointment after all… =D
Date: 03/12/06 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Tension
Lovely! *squeals* I was on this morning, and none of my favorite stories had updates, and then I saw you did ( after a very,very, long time ) and I wanted you to know you made my morning with this chapter. It was hilarious, the Healer made me crack up, as well as Hermione's and Draco's lines. And Peeves' idea was also very good. Added to the tension.
Denial. Classic. 30th chapter. Fantastic!!
Author's Response: Hey! I'm glad to hear that at least one of your favorite stories was updated (albeit after a very, very long time indeed). Awww, *does happy dance because I made Periwinkle’s morning*. Awesome that the chapter had you laughing! Peeves idea did add to the tension, didn’t it? The whole idea of this chapter (as you probably already know) was to show the tension building up between them, so Peeves was really helpful in this case. Thank you for the review! =D
Date: 03/12/06 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Tension
Lovely! *squeals* I was on this morning, and none of my favorite stories had updates, and then I saw you did ( after a very,very, long time ) and I wanted you to know you made my morning with this chapter. It was hilarious, the Healer made me crack up, as well as Hermione's and Draco's lines. And Peeves' idea was also very good. Added to the tension.
Denial. Classic. 30th chapter. Fantastic!!
Author's Response: Thanks again!
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Hermione’s Decision
Love how the story is going so far...
My guess is that either Lucius( though I can't explain how he would have gotten possession of it ) would have ripped the pages out or someone else close to him.
Can't wait for the next chp. Update soon, and keep up the fantastic job!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I see, so your guess is Lucius or someone close to him? Heehee, I love all this guessing that is going on. You’ll find out soon! =D chapter 29 is now officially up, so do go check it out! Thanks once again!
Date: 05/22/06 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Closer
*brings out a car sized water balloon, and talks with a nearby girl, comparing weapons*
Just teasing, dear! Although I was slightly ticked, (note slightly) all that disappeared when you added ch.32!
And I really enjoyed this one! I can't wait until more come. This is the best story out there! Congrats on winning...we knew you would anyway!
Author's Response: Ah, a water balloon! I didn’t see that one coming. Heehee… It’s completely understandable that you were ticked off by the lack of chapter 32. but now it’s up, so yay! I\'m glad to hear you enjoyed it and more to come soon enough, I\'m sure! Thanks for those kind words and the well-wishes! You\'re really sweet… =D
Date: 03/08/06 Title: None
I loved this story! It introduces a side of Draco and Hermione that hasn't really been explored for that ship. Your style is great, and you use strong metaphors and similies in the right places. You capture Draco's ego and personality in exactly the way that's fitting in this story. A job well done!