Hi guys! I'm a Harry Potter fanatic, and I love Lupin!! I am starting the Feel Good Poetry Review Chain, which is when I review poems with zero or only a few reviews. Reviews are rare to come by in poetry, and being a Potter Poet, I know the agony nd frustration of not getting any reviews, and also the bliss of getting one. The whole idea of the Chain is once you are tagged, you must tag someone else. Spread the good feelings!
Wow, nice plot line about the Malfoys. By the way, did you entitle this chapter after the song in Guys and Dolls, "Sit Down You're Rocking the Boat"?
Author's Response: Yup yup yup! That is an awesome song. I like that play.
Everyone, lilypudding has a new fic on my site, it's under featured fic, it's really deep but it wasn't accepted, however, it's really good, called "how did it happen?" lilypudding is LongbottomsLady.
Author's Response: Thanks, Loopy, you put this up and then you wonder how someone from our school found the site... Thanks a lot, Loopy though! Nothing like good advertising... well, now everyone knows why the fourth chapter hasn't even been written!
The last line...wow, lexi, you outdid yourself. The story of that last line: My twin sister lilypudding were out at a restaraunt and this is no ordinary restaraunt. It's really special to us. I just noticed it had a gaming room in the back (stupid me) and then lexi popped out the line.
Author's Response: allison stop leaving me pointless reviews! *runs upstairs and sits on her head* Lupinslover12 is my sister, people, and we don't often get along...
I know I could just run upstairs and tell you this, or if-NAME DISCLOSED FOR SECURITY PURPOSES-is right, you'll know this- "If you pinch a twin, the other one will feel it"- Brilliant, child, absolutely brilliant, is right, you'll know, but since he's wrong-what's new?- I just wanna tell you how great this is! Twenty outta twenty. My poor Remmy Poo!
Author's Response: Just for the record, Lupinslover12 is my twin sister. Thanks for the review, I'll remember this when I decide to beat you up when you hog the computer later tonight. Twenty out of twenty? ...
Great poem! However, the form was a little inconsistant. Still...that was good, and only two other reviews? Unfortunately, poetry isn't that popular, and reviews make writers days. I've started the Feel Good Poetry Review Chain. You have been tagged by the Chain. Now you must review someone else. Good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks. The poem was meant to be free verse to there is no real form outside of the rhythem of the words, and the only way I can justify that is by saying it looks the way I say it in my head. It is a pity that poetry isn\'t more popular, mais c\'est la vie.
This poem connected to me on a personal level as I am in a situation similar to Hermione's...the summary was very, very appealing. Most summaries in poetry are not that good. That is most likely the reason why poems are not usually read and reviewed. Very good, I connected with your protagonist, which, when it comes to my poetry, I believe to be the most satisfying praise. I cannot understand why I'm the first reviewer. Then again, my one accepted poem only has one con.crit. review and only 17 reads. The poem I have currently queue is not as good, and I don't expect much more reads or reviews.
Author's Response: I'm gonna read your poem now... -goes to read lupinslover12's poem-
That was so sweet! What I love about poetry is how I can connect to it! That wasn't overly dragged out, it was in plain and simple language, and I bet it will connect to readers like me with similar experiences. This review is part of the Feel Good Poetry Review Chain. For more on what that is, see my bio.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
This poem was very good, it was very moving. I liked the rhyme pattern. Is this a oneshot? It would be wonderful to have one of these poems for Dumbledore. However, I thought the poem should've touched on Harry more. Otherwise, great, and I can't believe I'm the only review! Well, then again, my poem's been up for a week and a half and got all of 11 reads, so poetry isn't that popular here. But, still, great poem!
Author's Response: hi,
thanks a lot for the review(btw, this was my first poem submission EVER), i really appreciate it. And if you liked my poem, you might enjoy the one from where i took the original idea- read it on the following link, its great.
www.lcsheriff.org/donotstandatmygraveandweep.html
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
Thank you for reviewing my fic. Reviews are very rare in the poetry genre, it's rather unfortunate as there are quite a few great poems. I liked the poem, however I felt the rythm was rather inconsistant. Good similies. However, I think your interpretation of this poem really depends on your interpretation of Serverus Snape's character, so I feel that you will get varied interpretations of the poem. 6/10. Have a nice day.
Author's Response: I was trying to write this as a choppy free-form, to somewhat reflect what I think Snapes mind must be like.
I'm sorry, I really have no clue how my review got posted three times!!!!! I'm so sorry!
Author's Response: ah! double reviews!
I'm sorry, I really have no clue how my review got posted three times!!!!! I'm so sorry!
Author's Response: Not a problem, it happens to the best of us =)