Well, to start out with I've always loved a good story. I especially love fantasy. I like to place myself in the story. That is how my story writing began. I didn't want to just follow the paths others had written, but to write my own stories. I am a Christian and I love to read books by C.S.Lewis. I like Narnia books and Lord of the Rings. I also really love movies... a lot.
Current book I'm reading:
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Last book I read:
Twilight: Eclipse
My Stories:
A Potter and a Riddle
Not the first story I began, but I absolutely fell in love with writing it.
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This is the first story I began. I finished it a long time ago, but I needed new eyes to look at it so I could get it right. Hope you enjoy! This story is on sabatical for now.
New Fiction---
That Summer
This is a Ginny/Draco with a twist. Read and Review please!!! New chapter on the way!
I have some more almost ready to come out. If you have a plot bunny you want to send over go ahead. Contact me anytime on AIM.
As I told you before, this is a wonderful, original idea. I love it, it is very well written. Thumbs way, way up.
I love it. The combination of the two point of views is perfect. A think that the subject is very realistic. I love the fact that Ginny will go with him. It was really great. I recognized the problem they said but other than that... nothing. Two thumbs up!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. Both the good and the bad. I\'m glad you liked it!
Once upon a time in the far, far, away land of California, Miranda Aramintha Rowena Ysabella Slyvia Ursula Evangelista- Mary Sue, for short- accepted an invitation to Hogwarts. As she searches for her one true love, will her soul mate be Draco? Harry? Snape? Colin? Fred and George? or...gasp...Voldemort?
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Humour Fiction.
Wow, that was really good. That has basically every mary-sue cliché ever, plus the classic bad-boy redeemed. There were only a few places where I started to drift, just when it got a little repetitive but through nearly most of it I was completely enthralled. I missed some of the other kind of humours though. If you do another (which I would love *wink*) maybe you could make the other female characters even less to make her look even more perfect. Like Ginny being overly clumsy or Hermione being ditzy(which is totally incongruent). Very good, I really enjoyed it. Off to read the Marauder one.
Author's Response: The next Sue will be the medieval Evangelista \'angel\', descending upon the newly established Hogwarts to wreak havoc on the founders, bwahahahah, but it would be fun to have a kick ass Sue join the trio to find the horcruxes, snicker, snicker. Thanks for the great feedback! ^_^
I really am enjoying this story. Nell's paranoia seams only natural in this. I know personally I hate to give characters flaws and feel like I'm doing them an injustice, but I think that her actions are only natural. To not be traumatized after something like that would be unnatural. I really like your characterization.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliment! Yes, it would be unnatural for her not to be paranoid. And for a little tip, all of the best characters have at least one flaw. Look at Harry! He\'s Angsty as heck!
This fiction superbly portrayed a dark, hopeless mood. I liked the way it was broken up into short pieces from the present and the memory. It added to the feeling of brokenness and fragmentation from the ending statement of “She continues to tear the poor monarch into pieces, until there is nothing left of it, just as there is nothing left of Hermione’s shattered soul.” It did seem a dark for Hermione, but if the ‘present’ of the fiction was a long time after the memory I can see how the years could have made her bitter and cold. If it were soon afterward, it would be harder for me to see it happening. One critique is in the sentence, “Ron’s face bursts and all that is left of Hermione’s love is a gooey mess of blood and brains.” The use of gooey seems cold and shallow because of it being used in so many light-hearted subjects: eg. brownies or slime. I think that there could have been a more serious and darker word to use in that instance. Over all, I liked the story, which surprised me because I usually don’t seek out Dark/Angst fictions. I’m definitely going to take a look at your other dark/angst fictions. I like your style.