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Author's Response: tehe (there i go again!)
Yay I can spell reviewerererer
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300!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think
If I am the 300th reviwer I want to bea beater so I can squish people mwahahahahaahahahahaha
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Great story! The plots really good but at times you really obviously take things from book five, or forget them completely. For example, Why is Oliver Wood still in school, he left at the end of book three or four, and the Weasley twins left in book five.
Author's Response: Hey thanks! Yeah, I did honostly have OoP propped up in front of me for the first part of chapter two because I didn't know how to explain Headquarters to Trisha without it. And Fred and George did Graduate and they aren't at Hogwarts. They are still part of the Weasley family and therefore are still hanging around in Headquarters during the summer. And Wood, okay, yes I know but he really isn't mentioned anymore after chapter 7 anyway. I know, not cannon but I hope it doesn't make the story bad. Thanks again for your review!
Why doesn't Snape know about Percy and peep's being captured? Or maybe he does know but is on Voldie's side? Anyway, great strory
Author's Response: Find out in chapter 13!!!
You know what really would be funny? It's a Small World! It would drive the trio crazy
This is a really good idea for a plot line, I just think you have rather rushed the start of the story. It would have been an easier story to get hooked into if we had got to know Ruth before she was taken away. Also, shouldn't her reaction have been a bit bigger. I mean, imagine if Albus Dumbledore turned up on your doorstep, wouldn't you be a bit more shocked? And then imagine you were told you had to leave without saying goodbye to the people you had always known as your parents, wouldn't you be a tad more upset?
Sorry this sounds like I hated the story but I actually thought it was a really good idea! Good luck with future chapters!
Author's Response: I know the start to the stor was rushed, but I had a hard time to figureing out how to start the story. And there will be flashbacks to Ruths past that will answer why she didn't have quite as big of a reaction as you might think, or why she wasn't too consearned to say goodbye to her "parents". Anyways Thanks for Reviewing!
That was greta. It nearly made me cry. Go badgers! P.S. It says 'trilogy' and I can only find two. Is the third already up or is there not going to be one?
Follow Barty as he takes his steps through the Quidditch World Cup in GoF. What parts of the story did you miss while reading from Harry's point of view? This is the side of the story that you really care about.
I really loved the bits from Wiky's point of few. I thought you'd characterised her really well - I could just hear her squeaky little voice each time she said or thought something.
One thing I did notice is that I GoF, it doesn't sound as if Voldemort had told the DEs to do what they did, in fact most of them didn't even know he had returned until the Graveyard scene, and you make it sound as if Crouch Jr. was acting on orders. I'm, not really sure though, as Voldemort was obviouly in contact with him.
Overall, I think it was a really wonderful job, and I wish this story had been continued.
Author's Response: Yes, everything conserning Voldemort and the Death Eaters had been talked about in the previous chapter, which has been taken off the site because I didn\'t like it. But thanks for the review!