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Date: 07/01/06 Title: None
Each chapter it gets closer to the wedding, I get more upset with Ron for not stepping up. Good job. I really like this.
An Unlikely Pair by Kyte
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Draco Malfoy finds something out about Hermione Granger and Harry Potter, that other people must not find out about! But in return for not telling anyone Draco is asking for something...
Date: 11/18/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Deal
The thing I liked most about this story was the pace. Stories that move fast are much easier to get drawn into right away!
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 7: Problems
Wow.....keep going.. I'm in tears over here!
Date: 11/26/04 Title: Chapter 8: A Plan
You're doing very well with this!
Date: 11/28/04 Title: None
Wow, that just made me go "aaaaaaaah!"
Author's Response: im glad you liked it!! more on the way.
Date: 11/24/04 Title: None
It's great, but be careful not to follow J.K.'s story too close! KEEP GOING!!
Author's Response: thnx! :">
As the World Falls Down by Deia
Rated: •Summary: As the final battle is approaching, a new prophecy is made. Would you go against it for love?
Date: 11/25/04 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
WHO IS THEIR DAUGHTER!?!?!?!
Date: 11/26/04 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Wow, way to always leave us hanging!
Date: 11/26/04 Title: None
Way to go! This is really good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: 11/25/04 Title: None
This sounds really professional. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you. The whole story is written so hopefully it'll all be posted soon.
Downfall by dreamergirl5
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Draco and Hermione start a game on their first day of their last year at Hogwarts, what happens when an innocent game of lust, turns into a nightmarish fight for their lives. The sequal starts at chapter 14... its Darren's story. Enjoy!!
Date: 11/25/04 Title: Chapter 1: On the train
Whoa! Good story!
Author's Response: thanks for the review! im glad you like the story!
Date: 11/25/04 Title: Chapter 4: Detention
You might want to increase the rating so that younger kids don't read it!
Author's Response: really? it was "bad", maybe i will, thanks for the review!
Their Child- of Voldemort's. by professor mary
Rated: •
Summary: Hermione has kept her enemy’s secret for 5 years. She knows about Draco’s daughter! But she doesn’t know as much as she’d like. When Draco needs her help, he must tell her the truth about their child- their child of Voldemort’s. YIPPEE! FINALLY COMPLETE! Thanks to all my readers and reviewers! It's been fun! now on to my next story... HEY- I'VE POSTED A PREQUEL TO THIS STORY: Their Child of Voldemort's, The Prequel. It's at: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=12656 thanks! pm
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 1: playtime
This story is really good! Poor Draco!
Date: 11/30/04 Title: Chapter 5: Waves of Joy
Everytime I read a chapter I fall in love with Draco a little more! Nice job!
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 2: Correspondence
I wish I could read it, but it isn't anywhere to be seen!
Date: 11/29/04 Title: Chapter 2: Correspondence
Since when are Hermione and Draco friends?!?! Good job!
Author's Response: oh, but they aren't, are they????? prof mary
Date: 11/26/04 Title: None
Good referenced to OotP!
Author's Response: Thx for the comment, should I keep going on with Voldemort getting into Harry's head though? Answer soon (and thx for reading).
Date: 11/27/04 Title: None
Good job forming a plot line! You may want to make the next chapter a little longer though!
Author's Response: Thanks! It is a bit longer, though!
Date: 08/01/05 Title: None
It's good plot, and I like Mychele, but I had the same issues in my story. You have to be careful not to make Harry, Ron, Draco, and Hermione out of character. Also, you may want to make sure that we know whats going on. That last but with Oliver was a little confusing. Other than that, it is a really great idea.