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11/20/04

www.myspace.com/natoko


Harry Potter rules the universe! I LOVE the Harry Potter series (books and movies), and I'm happy to declare that my SECOND (yes, read it, SECOND!) story has been moderated, and it is now open to the public! Survivor Wizards is a hilarious story, and if you liked Insert Hilarious and Witty Title Here, you need to take a look at this! I'd like to thank my best friend Stephanie for getting me through the tough times of the first immunity challenge. Stephanie, if you're listening, THANK YOU! So...uh, instead of reading this insanely stupid bio, read the story and REVIEW!! Please review!! My other story is still out too if you'd like to make it feel better by reading and reviewing...



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Date: 01/05/05 Title: None

Nice cliff hanger! I can't wait to see what happens! 10!

Author's Response: thanx! go 2 one of the websites (harrypotterfanficiton or fanfiction.net) 2 c chap. 3



Anything for Harry by adndus

Rated: Professors •
Summary: *PLEASE REVIEW* Hermione goes through drastic measures to ensure she gets pregnant.
Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 1: Anything for Harry

Definately a change from R/Hr or H/Hr! Interesting, very interesting.



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Date: 11/24/04 Title: None

Interesting. Very interesting. Good rising action and description!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 11/24/04 Title: None

More! More! Read us more storyteller of romance and darkness!



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Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 11/22/04 Title: None

Definately a great begining to a story that could win over my heart. Get some good action with Ron and Hermione's love relationship, and I think everyone will be thrilled! Keep up the good work!



Smile, You're On Colin's Camera by Luna Longbottom

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron confronts Dean on his relationship with Ginny
Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 1: Smile, You're On Colin's Camera

Neat-o! Are you going to write more? It would be good if you didn't end so suddenly, but oh who cares! It was good! Keep writing!



Sleepover At Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place by Luna Longbottom

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Summary: The girls decide to throw a sleep over at number twelve. What happens when the boys show up and Fred and George introduce their lastes invention?
Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/14/04 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It was really good, but I think you should have not finished it that early on. I think all of us shippers would have liked a more in-depth story. :( Although I'm disappointed that it's over, I'll give you a ten. You did an excelent job! You know you're on my favorites right?



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 2: chapter 2

This is by far the BEST fanfic that I have ever had the pleasure to review! More! More! It's so good!



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Date: 11/27/04 Title: None

Cool! I really like how you put the story in Ginny's perspective. Can't wait to read on.

Author's Response: thanx!! ill update soon!



Soaked in the Sea of Envy by Ron Weasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Last chapter is submitted! Hermione kept a secret about someone special for 5 years and this year at school she decided to tell this person her feelings. Plans change when she meets someone at Ron's house. Hermione keeps an eye on this person because of her mysterious ways. 2000+ reads!
Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Surprise Visit

This is so good! I need more! How long do you think it'll take to make chapter 12? How long will the story be? Any ideas? I absolutely loved it! There was one little typo that I'll tell you about: in one part it's supposed to be "he" but it says "her." I didn't want to bring it up because it was such a good story. 10!!!!

Author's Response: Chapter 12 (Hermione's Best Present) is the last chapter and I'm in the process of writing it now. I have a timeline written out on what is going to happen. And thanks for the typo.



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 01/08/05 Title: Chapter 12: Krum's Gift

Umm...Why are there question marks in place of quotations and apostrope's? It was extremely confusing to read, but I REALLY enjoyed the chapter anyway. Keep writing. Example of weird style: ?It?s,It?s beautiful!? Confusing, no? Message to anyone out there: PLEASE review my story! Puh-leeze?

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Sorry! My computer does that to my story sometimes. I'll fix it. Thanks for letting me know.

Author's Response: All fixed! :)



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/17/04 Title: Chapter 10: One Last Dream

Wow! Finally, a twist for Hermione's fate! I think you really need to get Ron and Hermione together soon. We're waiting for 11 now! 10!

Author's Response: 11 is still turning in my head. But I've figured it out that there will be two more chapters and they're called. 11: The Surprise Visit and 12: Hermione's Best Present



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Big Surprise

I really enjoyed it! I'm going to read on now...Oops, forgot to tell you, 10!! Too bad you can't give 11's! I felt so bad for Hermione though! I hope it works out!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 2: Hidden Within Her

So exciting! I hope Ron dumps her after he has one of those dreadful things! 10!!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 3: Changing For Good

Just what I've been wanting to read! This is good stuff. In a weird way, like my relationship with one of my friends. No names, sorry! If he reads this, even though he isn't the biggest HP freak alive, I would never live it down! He has a girlfriend to, but the only problem is, she's my friend as well. :( Oh, I forgot to tell you, another 10!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 5: Separated by Schedules

I really like it! It's really something that I can relate to! :D Oh, why do I keep forgetting to tell you, 10! I really hope R/Hr get back together at the end. Hermione's pitiful without him!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 6: Cast Aside

Love it! That Beatrix is either a know-it-all, or maybe...Maybe Hermione needs to learn Oculemecy from Harry!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 7: Birthday Wishes

Maybe Hermione DOES need to learn Oculemency! Ooooh! Maybe I'm right for once! It's weird, Hermione thinks like I do, constantly day-dreaming about the one she secretly loves! 10! Oh, I forgot to tell you, I gave a 10 for the chapter before this one, but I forgot to tell you! lol :-)



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 8: Unreciprocated Feelings

Waiting, waiting, waiting, waiting! I need more! Now, people say there's already a chapter 9?! Where? 10! 10!



Reviewer: Natoko Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 9: Leering in the Library

Well, I'm just getting to chapter 9, so, I'll be back! I'll go ahead and give you 10!